THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

mind blowing update avi

father son convo just excellent i liked kabir verymuch how he spoke directly to maan about his relation with megha and just shutting sumeet

the best part is maithili kicking out sumeet from their lives for ever. just loved her for showing some courage inorder to protect her son and daugther in law👏👏👏


geet drooling on maan😳and munda uska dhole shole dikharaha hai geet ko😉😉😉ki wo usse dekh rahi hai😉😉

sach bolo, kaun faint na hota? 😆
sherni geet ne megha ki chain wapas lekar aayi👏👏👏


iss sab ke beech maan ka accident😲😲and geet poori tarah toott gayi

maan's convo with dadi very emotional and final tadka tab mila jab geet ne confess kiya apni pyaar ko😳just loved how she poured all her feelings to maan.


thank u for taking strain and posted the update for us inspite of ur pain.


Thanks Priya. Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz


nothing else i van say!!!

am alll...pani pani...😆 ☺️


😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

Omg too many things happened in this single update...

made me go through sooo many different emotions...lovvvddd everybit of it...

And Maan thud!!!! hayee, geet ke saath hume bi marwayegi...😳😃

Never thought that Maithilimaa would knee him...woooah lovvvd it...thanku for makiing her do that...atleast now she reacted to all those things that she have suffered...sooo sooo sooo much liked that...👏👏👏 girl power 😃😃
lovvvd Kabir's reply to his dad...loved the way they threw him ou of their lives...hope he wont come back again...
loved geet-tara-megha bonding😃😃
and Thanku , tumne giit ke maan ko kuch hone nahi diya...glad that he is safe and you dint make us wait for another part to know whether is safe...😃

And the confession, she said it finally 😃😃😃 lovvly one😃

thanx a looot for the update...


You are welcome Purvi. Glad you liked it.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
really love the update
first of all face of kabir with his father and love the way he stood up in front of him and showed him what he is and
second I was soo surprised by maithli
the way she stood up and showed that woman is not weak anymore. woman can anything same as man can. and the way she showed her ex to go out from there.way to go woman.

and then omggg for a min u scared me too with that accident of maan and him being unconscious. even though i knew that he will be fine but the way u wrote geet's longing, her pain made me cry with her.

u write sooo awesome avi👏👏👏👏👏
then her simple but yet full of emotions confession that nothing match with maan for her and she just want him and only him


sorry for the late comment but here i am 😆😆😆 with my kaan pakkar ke

and saying again waiting for next update🤣🤣 lol already
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

hi avi !!

really really sorry for making a long disappearing act !! been almost two months and missed sooo much ! life has been quite busy !! normally I donot even logoff from my account !! somehow had to stay away from our beautiful maaneet stories and wonderful friends like you !! you have given up hope on me...me and going away permanently from our forum ...that wouldnot happen so easily !! sorry again for not coming online for so long !! well, give me 3, 4 days to update myself with all the missed parts...!! seems story has moved on far from shy shy geet and angry maan...!! will get back to you ...!! soon...


I don't give up that easily. 😃 Avi ko bhulna nahi aata. did miss u though. do drop a PM so I know that I still have your interest 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

really love the update
first of all face of kabir with his father and love the way he stood up in front of him and showed him what he is and
second I was soo surprised by maithli
the way she stood up and showed that woman is not weak anymore. woman can anything same as man can. and the way she showed her ex to go out from there.way to go woman.

and then omggg for a min u scared me too with that accident of maan and him being unconscious. even though i knew that he will be fine but the way u wrote geet's longing, her pain made me cry with her.

u write sooo awesome avi👏
then her simple but yet full of emotions confession that nothing match with maan for her and she just want him and only him


sorry for the late comment but here i am 😆😆😆 with my kaan pakkar ke

and saying again waiting for next update🤣🤣 lol already


I guess pool scene bhool gayi?

😲 or you didn't like it😆

Thanks Jas😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Desigirls12



wow lovely emotional update.. te way kabir ki dad taunting megha and te way kabir's mom ki outburst was lovely ..

te way my maaneet drooling each other and they burning body craving to be feel each oteher was lovely cute.. oh wet wet maan, me too drooling my maan..

te way my maan went too business meeting and geet ki crib thinking he didt inform her was lovely..

oh god my maan ki accident and geet ki worry and her pain and te way she rush to him at once seing him and te way both hugging each other was lovely emotional..i love te update


Thank you. Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



hai avi... read the update... long update kal doongi... but for now i would just say i loved the update ... expecially maithili mas punch to her hubby... and the pool waala scene and then the hospital scene... kuch bacha kya??? matlab loved the full updare yaar...

today it was my family meet... a day long event which comes only once in a year... i had a blast ... enjoyed thoroughly even hosting the whole day with my better half... but abhi damn tired...



Sounds like you had a lot of fun. Take rest. Will catch u later😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fatema_007

Courage is not something that we are born with. Courage is simply faith, our trust in God above which does not deter even under the worst of circumstances. It is not present in day to day life but when we are pushed to the max, we grasp it and hold on to it. It is the oxygen that pumps life back into us '...

Felt soo proud that I came across this ff...it just has soo much in it for everyone of us to learn...it taught to love, to respect, to have faith nd be patient, to do good nd to stand up against the bad...
thank u for this absolutely amazingly amazing story :)
p.s-sorry for the lack of comments. .xmz r still on as it has been postponed till 2nd of jan nd after that it's my cousin's wedding :(...but I still never ever miss reading the updates all thanx to ur pms or else I would've missed out kn soo much of it :)
'


Best of luck.

Thanks for the lovely compliments. It has been a nice new experience for me which I enjoyed a lot due to the interaction with the readers.

Enjoy the wedding too.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


I guess pool scene bhool gayi?

😲 or you didn't like it😆

Thanks Jas😃


omggg u are right I forgot
i read the update the day u send pm and that too at work
u know how hard is to read something that 😳😳😳 in front of colleagues and not showing any emotions on urface.
omggg I loved it soo much and the most interesting part was that they did not even touch each other but the heat they felt just by looking at each other and
those words made me to blush and
I was hoping no one notice at work that what is it I am reading with sooo much interest
rockinggg😳😳😳

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