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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 68
If maan gets such dreams then it is ur fault geet not his..
Ab bechara kar bhi Kya sakta hai..
Newaz u r nt gonna allow him to do anything before marriage.. let him feel you In his dreams at least..
U have a problem with that also then be ready dear.. Lion is all set for hunting.. ;p
Finally seduction idea is successful to a bit but maan is still unknown to that..
What wil happen when he knows geet is equally affected..
God only knows.. No no Avi only knows..;p
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kkmouli

Part 68
If maan gets such dreams then it is ur fault geet not his..
Ab bechara kar bhi Kya sakta hai..
Newaz u r nt gonna allow him to do anything before marriage.. let him feel you In his dreams at least..
U have a problem with that also then be ready dear.. Lion is all set for hunting.. ;p
Finally seduction idea is successful to a bit but maan is still unknown to that..
What wil happen when he knows geet is equally affected..
God only knows.. No no Avi only knows..;p



Mera recap ho raha hai 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome updates
Part63 very lovey dovey update geet ko ntke samjhane ka kuch to asar hua
Dadi is so cute i love the way jis tarah dadi maan ki chori pakadti hai aur usse ye bolne ke liye majboor karti hai ki dadi you are the best dadi in the world i love the dadi jis tarah maithli ke andar nari sakti ko jagati hai aur maithli apni sakti ka use apne husband par karti hai kash dadi ki tarah har koi maithli jaisi majboor aurat ko incorrege karne wala uske self respect ko jagane wala mil jaye to is dunia me kisi aurat ko anaya na sehna pade ilove maan teasing aur jis tarah geet maan ko nihar rahi hai ilove their tajmahal outings aur mai aapki kya tarrif karu mere pass words kam hai
Avi give me pw of part 68 69
Thank you
Edited by manjeet6 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love your ff one of best ff of maneet.it is very long story still I read it again again till procteted part.I love your maan and geet their character the maan you have show is by for best maan I have read and you are one of best writer I have read really want to read your story .plz plz plz plz send link
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi awesome confession and I loved dadi intergoration bechara Maan. He got trap and beautiful maan and geet scene so dreamy confession and like the way kabir and maan supported kabir mother too good updates and pls give me password for other update I m not able to read further I ll wait Ty
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manjeet6

Awesome updates
Part63 very lovey dovey update geet ko ntke samjhane ka kuch to asar hua
Dadi is so cute i love the way jis tarah dadi maan ki chori pakadti hai aur usse ye bolne ke liye majboor karti hai ki dadi you are the best dadi in the world i love the dadi jis tarah maithli ke andar nari sakti ko jagati hai aur maithli apni sakti ka use apne husband par karti hai kash dadi ki tarah har koi maithli jaisi majboor aurat ko incorrege karne wala uske self respect ko jagane wala mil jaye to is dunia me kisi aurat ko anaya na sehna pade ilove maan teasing aur jis tarah geet maan ko nihar rahi hai ilove their tajmahal outings aur mai aapki kya tarrif karu mere pass words kam hai
Avi give me pw of part 68 69
Thank you


Thanks Manjeet😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

I can never have enough of Maaneet moments. But wonder why Geet needed to know when exactly he fall for her? Pyaar karta hai this feeling n fact should be enough for her. But yeah Maan should tell her about the dairy, it would be better to say it himself than creating any MU. And loved Tara teasing Geet moment. Seems like Tara is getting too desparate to meet her sister. I cant wait for Megha's reaction over this. Khuranas are really compassionate n generous n open hearted people. They welcome n make everyone theirs once they feel a connection n if saamne wala is not accepting or acknowledging it then they also know how to get them being accepted. They are truly gem of a family. Loved seeing the bond Adi share with Dadima n the love she showers on him. This small period of separation is gonna be tough for Maaneet specially after confessing just 3 days before. And i really liked the moment when Geet said Maan.. Mera Maahi even in her sleep just with Maan's one touch. Mishty n Maahi's love story is getting too interesting.





Though i hated the guts of Sameer i loved Maithili's courage at the end and also how Kabir stood for his mother this time unlike past. I loved his decision of not taking a single money from Khurans else he wont marry Megha n i really admired him today. And the end of this part was applauding n proud of Maithili for finally voicing n growing up a spine n standing for what is right. And more important i loved the fact that is was done without Maan's help. But being the brother he is Megha's i loved his warning to *beep* of a man Sumeet. Though i do want Summet to suffer real bad now.

That silent lovemaking was ummm hawt. But i think Maan should definitely thank SRK for his awesome physique he has made to impress his Geet. If not for SRK he would have never gone back to his tai chi sessions. Anyways it was great progress to see the fire setting up at both side as first it was only Maan but now even Geet is burning with desire n passion for her Maahi which is good to see. Maan's promise to himself of having Geet equally drawned in passion n desire for him is getting true too early now after all her mind is clear now, thanks to Tara.

Its actually true that with friends u tend to forget your problems, tensions, stress, fears everything. And it glad to see Megha having two friends in Geet n Tara. Loved seeing them both pampering Megha and with time Megha joining them forgetting about Sumeet n his ill language n meanie side. Though m wondering does Geet knows about what relation Megha shares with Tara n about her past? And that theif who snatched Megha's chain, did u added it for some reason, like for some connection to Thakurs? And in all the happy moments that flight being missing news was a shocker n Dadima collapsing was another but thankfully you spared Dadima. Seeing Geet not been able to reach Maan in hospital room n all victims, strecher n blood was heart wrenching n scary simultaneously. I have this weird fear of seeing too much blood but i loved how she stood strong, brave and just paryed to her Babaji keeping faith in him n face the situation alone with no one assuring her. And its true situations like this where you feel you might lose your love ones only makes u realize that people means a lot more important than any materialistic things. Geet who was kinda stubborn in not letting her heart open up to Maan felt like saying everything she has stored up in this one moment n dint even waste a second cos of the fear of losing him n losing a chance to tell him about her feelings was much bigger than anything. Seeing Maan consoling Geet n assuring her he is fine was heart warming n m sure even he might have got scared seeing death so close to him n yet he was here supporting her. You really scared me with the end. I can never say what might come up in next part of the update. One moment all were happy shappy n enjoying the evening n next moment you made it all scary, fearful n heart in mouth update.



Maan did that Darji se baat ki hai talks just to get her attention diverted from being sad n gloomy or did he really meant it? Cos she immediately forgot her stress n i loved to see Maan teasing her n her fake anger in return with pouting n all. Dev too forgot the tensions once Dr discharged Maan n was back to his self n if Maan loves teasing Geet he thought of teasing Maan, not bad. But when Dev thought that he had to belofy papad to get his Tara where was Maan got Geet easily i felt it someone please tell him the silent love story of Maaneet n what all problems they had n m sure he would say he got Tara quite easily compared to Maan. If some human being were villains in Dev-Tara's LS then destiny was in Maaneet's LS. Loved Maan's sulking, desparation to see Geet, annoyed n frustrated over the fact all came to him but Geet once they came home. How innocently hopeful he was that she would come n shower all her love, care, concern n pamper him but she had other plans of playing antakshri with Dev. Though after coming down Maan was showing indifference but Dev ki nigahon se bach nahi paaya Maan babu n loved how he tricked Maaneet n put them in tight situation n fled away. He is super cute when in his mischievious best. Geet fled before giving in in her desires toh Maan couldnt control n aaya piche piche to get his share of kisses n tricked Geet with his stubborness for making her do anything he wishes. And all of sudden m reminded of Shasha. Wonder what would be her reaction when she comes to know about Maaneet being together? Anyways jaate jaate his teaching Geet about the good night kiss was cute. It was light hearted update with all the teasing n ahem moments after the scary one.



Can i please have this Dadima for me? She is super cool. I loved her nautankis n drama she does n tricks her grandsons. Everytime i read about her my respect for her grow ten folds. Loved the way she yet again got something out from Maan about his proposal plans without even showing on her face her real motives. And Taj mei propose? Haayeee i remember when he had taken her to Humayun's tomb she had expressed her wish to visit Taj as she hasnt been there n then n there he had promised to himself that he would take her to Taj once. I remember his small small promises he made to himself, like that one too taking her to Mumbai beach n walking on it hand n hand. This man is actually romantic n like dadima even i cant keep up with the excitement. She is such a kid at heart, too adorable. Her wishes to have great grand children already is so damn cute n funny. And it seems Maan doesnt like to spend a single moment in his own bedroom, early morning aa gaye to his Geet. But that 'zindagi ki har subah tumse shuru hogi aur har raat tumpe khatam' send me back to that official date of Maaneet's in GHSP. Again one of the most beautiful episodes n the dialogues Maan had n with so much passion, admiration n intensity he had spoken it in this particular episode, he had won over me forever in that instant. It was simply magical.



I m SPEECHLESS Avi, sometimes words really seems short n m sorry no words nothing could described this update n how beautifully you have written it. Every Taj pics along with Maaneet letter scene pics, it made the update just Magical for me. Just too perfect to be true. Every lines n emotions were depicted with so much intensity that it could be feel n reached right to my heart. Out of this world update, i dont wanna write any scene in particular to tell u what i liked or which scene i enjoyed the most cos i absolutely loved everything you have penned down here, Applause.



Haayeee the whole night spending in each others arms without any disturbance was so mesmerizing n peaceful away from all hustle bustle. Loved how he carried her to swing n both spend their time silently with peace. The morning had quite shocking surprises for both though, Maan in his dreams did some deeds n she too was equally involved. So that was wrong of Geet for accusing Maan like that when she herself had equally participated in doing the deed. And her goody goody behavior was related but its also true that she too have gone to that forbidden part of wild thoughts they why this nautanki? Anyways m all game for this silent challenge Maan has given to Geet but the words u have used were making me laugh - Mission Doe Seduction n Maan-Ness, hilarious. Oh god poor Maan planned so much n what he got, Nakul ka face in morning instead of his usual Mishty. Seeing his oh so stratergy failing n being ignored by her completely was too funny. It was just not Maan's day i guess, no breakfast then no lunch too, uppar se Nakul ka face again.
So Geet thinks having such bad thoughts before marriage is not right, but cant help with her own cravings, need n wants n so planned to not look at his eyes as those looks at her are enough to get her defenses down. Tara please knock some sense in her again she badly is in need of it. Thoug it would be fun to see her looking at something else while talking to him only if she does talks to him and Maan would do a bhangra by just knowing that she did notice him all decked up in black but managed controlled her feelings from going over board. He just need to work more hard to get his innocent Geet back in his arms or either start doing medication to be focused. After such a dhansu super romantic update this one was hilarious. Lion and Doe on a missions, one is getting other in his arms n other is avoiding n ignoring his advances.



-Sanjana!


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