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Posted: 11 years ago
Sumeet makes his dirty entry but this Kabir is much stronger
Loved how you wove the entire scene it was so intense
Happy that Maan didn't misunderstand but also witnessed the earnest and sincerity of Kabir😊

But the show stealer was indeed Maithali the way she bounced back and how!
Kudos to her and u
Superb dialogues
😳

Maaneet and their piping hot passion!
Haaye paani mein aag laga di
☺️

Geet missing her Maan Thud😭

Girls day out was a pleasant change but the chain incident
Glad Geet could get back the chain some memories associated with the things are more valuable and precious😳

Then the blow😲
I was like Avi😡
But then realized dqno1 hain toh apni Geet ko confess karwane ke liye koi solid dramatic build up toh chahiye na😳

Bechaari bolna bhi pada toh aise but those three words will like a matter of life and death for both!
😃

Zabardast update yaara
Loved it totally
waiting for more

Hope u are having a great time
🤗



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Posted: 11 years ago
lovd d update especially d women power depictd by kabir's mom...kudos👍🏼 as usual maneet moments were awesom👏 👏 👏 👏 lov ur work do keep up d goood work. . . eagerly waitin fa d nxt update!

This FF s juzt purrrfect😊

jz reminds me abt the various love tracks in ur FF... each track is beautifully written









update sooon !! tak care 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyaniru

So many things I loved about this update...

Mythili did not say anything or react when she was alone with Sumeet, but when her family came and she saw him abusing Kabir and Megha, she couldn't take it. It is so true that the mother in a woman brings out her real strength.

Loved the bonding between the 3 girls. They truly needed that girl time, and had good fun. All of us need some girl-bonding time to get us out of the daily routine!

Maan-Geet aankhon-hi-aankhon mein was mind-blowing. How just their eyes are enough to turn them on. I could feel the electricity between them. Ufff, how you created the atmosphere!!

I loved what you wrote about courage - "Courage is not something that we are born with. Courage is simply faith, our trust in God above which does not deter even under the worst of circumstances." It is the strength that comes from our belief and faith. Beautifully written.

I loved your words about Love - "Love just is" - It is as simple as that. Nothing needs to be said or done nor any gifts given to show love. It is a connection that is felt.

Loved Geet's confession. Reality hit hard and she couldn't deny him anymore.

The update was full of little little things that I loved, and also beautifully written scenes. Thanks again for writing such a beautiful story.


It feels good to know that my words found their appropriate place. Thanks for the lovely comment😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zeal-DD

Loved it... Thankyou for such long part and pm
Amazing... Beautifully written
finally Kabir n his mother gave back to that Sumith... It was nice how they stood by megha...
Loved the way you wrote whole maaneet eyelocking part... It was Wow
Tara-Geet-Megha shoping spree was nice and liked thier bonding...
maan's flight had emergency landing was like 😲 NO this can't be like this... Gald nothing happens to him and Geet's confession was Superb... Loved it tptally


Congrats on turning Goldie😃 Glad you are liking it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

Avi tu ne meko dara diya tha grrr..

awesome lovely mindblowing amazing update muahhh:)


😲 bharosa rakha karo jaani.. 😆 Thanks Sona 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

humarein dil ki dhadkan bandh ho gaya tha...chalo maan thik hai...kuch nehi hua usse...magar megha ko abhi tak kyun nehi bataye ki woh kiske beti hai...proud of kabir...accha sabak sikhaya usne uss b******* ko...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...


Abhi DNA test baaki hai Megha ka.

Thanks Soma
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Posted: 11 years ago
Complete mosiac of emotions,dis update was just like d whole FF.

I cant explain d amount of hatred I felt for Sumit and d amount of respect I felt for Maithili.Its pretty obvious that Maan and Kabir wud get aggressive to hear Megha's and Maithili's insult but what wasnt obvious was Maithili fighting for herself,literally.And d verbal ans she gave to her impotent ex-husband...Wow,hats off to Maithili and You.

And then d Megha-Geet-Tara,part.Seriously only a girl can understand d beauty of that outing.Tara's love showering on Megha,very cute.But the chain snatching incident,does that hold any bigger importance in d story????

And then comes the best part of the Update,the Maaneet niharofying each other part.Bina chhue kisiko mehsus kaise kiya jata hai,wo iss part se pata chalta.I ran short of words to describe the beauty of scene.bas itna samajh lo that I was mesmerised.

And then what????
Maan's accident😲 nooo

but thank God and You that he is fine.

in total,paisa wasool update buddy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I really hate that Sumit! And I am sorry to say that the world is filled with such guys in different forms. I was really worried that Maithili would go back to her old self and all the efforts of dadi would go to waste. But thanks to you she was able to stand for herself. People like Sumit are full of bloated ego and are really a coward from inside. If you fear them they frighten you, if you scare them they get scared.
The pool scene was OH MY GOD! They were not even standing close, leave touching, but still but effect each other so strongly.

It's natural for megha to feel low after that bad episode, but when you are with good friends, they can really bring you out of the worst mood back to normal. I think that is the strength of good friendship.

So Geet confesses to Maan. Beautiful is all I can say.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow wat a amazing confession by geet.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow wat a sweet confession by geet.😊

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