THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 30

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123


omggg u are right I forgot
i read the update the day u send pm and that too at work
u know how hard is to read something that 😳😳😳 in front of colleagues and not showing any emotions on urface.
omggg I loved it soo much and the most interesting part was that they did not even touch each other but the heat they felt just by looking at each other and
those words made me to blush and
I was hoping no one notice at work that what is it I am reading with sooo much interest
rockinggg😳😳😳


You reminded me of my own experience .. I remember going out for a walk in the snow one time. The writer had even warned us. 😆

I guess you won't be reading the next blog update in the office then😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UNICORN75

Loved the update...A transformed Maithili...How she stood for her children...Self defence techniques...A must for a woman of all ages.

The swimming pool scene..So sensual


A shaken Giit...Very well described...A confession just pours out...Wonderful


Thank u. Glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update.. The fact that tara n geet tried to cheer up megha was so endearing. And geet's confession was as interesting as your story itself.. No over the top conversation.. Just a simple heartfelt acceptance of her feelings..and your Maan!! 😆 the way he was using his body the night before the accident to lure Geet!! Lol
Waiting for Dev-iStar bit maybe in the next update?!?
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous update dear :)

superb :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful, mesmerizing & spellbinding. we know the value of things only when we loose them or are about to loose them. so beautifully narrated !
keep up good work avi.

by the way, whats ur full name ?😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part. Maithili had done a good job in showing her husband
Her strength.maan and geets eye to eye romance was so good.
It is always said tat at verge of losing something u realize its value.
Maans and geets reaction when he realized during the accident was similar to that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ek pal ke liyen I forgot to breath
Really that was so scary


Mithali was just awesome 👏
Savitri Devi's support & teaching has made her strong & self sufficient

Maans love for his sis

& kabir just just just fab characterization
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Posted: 11 years ago
first of all thanx fr sending me pms inspite of me not cmnting.father was isick so couldnt come here. read back to back three updates. soo happy fr Maithili that finally she has started voicing against violence.happy fr megha too that she has so many people now to protect her and make her happy.OMG geet has caught the snatcher👏 unbelievable.Maan shd hv seen dat.😃he would hv been so proud of his mishty. finally geet confessed her feelings to him. waiting to read more. thanx again fr giving such beautiful updates.
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice part
loved the taj mahal banner and vm
at last geet confessed to her maan😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome👏👏



maithili teach good lesson to her husband🤣



geet tara megha spend some time😃



thank god maan is fine😊



geet confessed her love😉



update soon

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