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Posted: 11 years ago



hi every one good morning thanks for suggestion for dhadkan thanks



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part 16


Why they come hear why, why they always want to destroy my life , ku nasur bana rahe hai mere life ko why why ... mere injury ko bharne ku nahi deat, why they always make my life big mess why why mix poison in my life , i must died when i attempt that sueside yes , he say with holding broken peace of mirror in his hand dadi , adi just pleading him to open door and Geet standing there with shock , this is so much for her she is verge of braking down , she cant saw maan like this , she just cant , she feel so secured around him , and now look him so broken , she can't , dadi and adi try to best call him tell him that don't do anything wrong they need him,


maan just lost his thinking ability , his dark past his greedy parent , broken geet , all are hurting him , and thought of ending his life start to come again in his mind , broken peace of mirror just attracting him , to end his life and went away from all this pain , agony etc...just than with help of nakul and BG adi just broke that door , and that room fill with sound of tight slap , tight slap ... all including maan just froze in their place , they don't know how to react , maan just put his hand on his cheek , and looking with shock to that person who gave him this gift and that is non other than his GEET , yes geet just slap him ...


dadi just look all and nodded her head , like saying them go from their , nakul ,BG went from their and when dadi and adi start to went from room geet stop them with serious tone , for second adi gulped his Silva , they looking new geet in front of them ,maan just gaping her without blinking his eyes , really this big shock of life for him , tight slap from Geet


geet - so msk want to suicide , ya suicide , who tell me that don't think of other live for yourself , live life too fulfill our dream etc... So simple for tell other na Mr kuhrana .live life like this , like that , big big word , but for other , not for Me , you want to end your life because your ma , papa is not with you na , than adi sir where is your parent ,you are orphan na than , you have to suicide on your childhood itself , na very simple way , just finish your life and don't think about that person ha who are depended on you , who live for you , don't ever , just don't think , tear start to fall from geet eyes , maan this step just hurting her the man who gave courage to her for new life , he try to finish his life not once but two time ...


maan just bend his head in shame , he know he made big mistake , maan mummer , they hurt you , you don't have idea what they talk about you they say , they , he don't want say those disgusting word


Geet ...that don't with how many mans I will sleep na ...i don't know full meaning of it but I know it is some disgusting about me ... but before also lesion or heard this type of sentence when that monster make dirty me for 5 days MR. MAAN SING KHURANA , idont what are they doing with me in that 5 days , but I don't like their word , their touch , Bahot dard hota tha , MSK bahot dard hota tha , but when rajji face come in front of my mind ...I survived with that pain , I can finish my life in first day itself , when first time that monster took me to his room and try to touch hear ,geet place her hand on her cheek , her lips , her chest and last with bending head mummer on my lower part also , but that time I live for my rajji , when I totally broken you wake up new hope , courage in me for new life for pari for raaji because , iam her mother and father now , now you give me ans before doing this attempt suicide for second you think about your old dadi , mr. khurana tell me me ,pari or adi is nothing for you but your own dadi ,who in this age living for you with hope that you get all happiness in your life , and Pari , what about pari ...anybody called rat her you get hipper , than what about it ha ...mr. khuana ans my qus dam it give me ans ...


maan just mummer , how i for-gate my pari because of that people word , how tear start to flow from maan eyes ...he get it how big mistake he done in his anger , his agony he look to dadi , the older lady standing their with tear , fear ,worry , that lady who cut all her relation with her own son for maan , for him...he cant meet eyes with dadi , he just mummer ...


geet ----- we don't need your sorry , now you decide what you want to do with your life , suicide ot life full of happiness , and don't worry about me or dadi , pari we will living with my sister and adi friend , within two day and i definatly try to take care of them , so you are free from us MR khurana ...before maan stop her , or say something geet just went from their with giving painful gaze to him , all his word died in his mouth when he saw her hurtful eyes ...he look to adi and dadi with some hope ...adi just don't look to us maan we are with geet and iwill their with geet in her every step , i know it is difficult for us but we will manage , at list now we , specially geet don't have to deepened on someones fake promise ...,you want to marry with her maan ,marry in marriage we have to think first about our partner happiness ,pain etc not our self ...


dadi so much chock with emotion because today maan brake her hope also she just put her head on adi shoulder and say in week voice , adi i feel so much tired please took me to my room , because my own grandson don't want to give support me ... lets go adi


maan just fall on his knee and cry out and say , iruined with my own hand , i ruined , i give imp to that people , who never thought about me for seconds and I hurt them who are living for me , who want see me happy , successful , but I hurt them , I hurt them ...dadi who in this age standing me like unbreakable support , today my one stupid act brake that women , that she ask adi for support , and adi who from childhood become my support ,strength , who share my all pain , I hurt him also ,and my geet and pari ...they never forgive me never , i again open geet wound , her injury ,she so much suffer in her life ,but never loss her innocence , today I look her big from her age , she try to live for her little sister , and I ... with all this though ,he don't know when he sleep their itself on floor ...



a beautiful girl come near maan and cares his face with her tiny hand and say papa , wake up papa , maan just open his eyes with sound and touch of girl ...he just looking her she is so beautiful like small GEET ...he mummer pari , sorry pari don't know what happen to me , I lost power of thinking , i just lost in anger ,they talk bad about you and geet so i can't tolerate that ,i think myself guilty when your ma faint in front of me ...sorry baccha , sorry i dont want to hurt them I just want to go away from them so my dark past shadow don't came on them , specially on you and geet baccha , maan start to sob like small kid , pari just hug him with her tiny hand ...and say softly papa don't worry , you make mistake na , maan nodded his head ...in yes , than make this proper also , mollify them , I know my papa , easily do this, now it is right time to show them as well as world who is MAAN SING KHURANA ...papa and she wink to him which brought smile on his face , maan mind get clear with pari talk he just hug her and say I will pari i will...


just than maan wake up with jerk , but he have smile on face , with determination he stand their , first he just rush to geet room , he want to talk with her first ...with fear he went to her room yes , he have fear for geet , oh that slap he just put his hand on cheek and nodded his head , mari billi muze hi mayo ...kya zor se mara ...he took big breath and entered in room where he saw geet near window , looking outside ,lost in some thought , one hand on her stomach ...with lot of courage he called geet ...when geet lesion his voice she just want to hug him , but she know she have to be tough so he cant do it again , she think msk meetha to bahot kha liya abi to kadwa , karela khane ka time hai /you eat sweet till now it is time to have some bitter like bitter guard , haina rat , just than baby kick her , which brought happiness on her face ... so MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA ,ready for it

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing up date dear, omg geet slap maan
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Awesome update ...
very emotional...
gosh!!!!maan try to end his life again really his brain is not working...
thinking about morons and forgot his family who r leaving for him...
omg geet slapped maan...accha keiya
Maan ko laga zor ka jhatka...
at last geet became strong for her maan and made him realise his mistake..
pari and maan part is so cute...
now waiting to see how maan going to monify his geet,pari,adi and dadima..
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update. geet become storng for her maan and i like this geet😃
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lovely amazing awesome beautifully written update dear:)
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AWSOME AND EMOTIONAL UPDT
EET SLAP MAAN
AND MAAN IS DETEMINE TO SHOEW WHO THE MSK

AND GEET IS GOING TO GIVE TOUGH TIME TO MAAN
AWSOME
CONT SOON
THNX FR PM

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow that was good
The way geet slapped him
Okay not happy because she slapped him
But more like she made him see what wrong he was doing
And for whom
Those greedy people who don't give damn about him
Trying to leave behind those who do
His dadi his best friend adi
Not to forget his geet and pari
She showed him the error of his ways
And good she did it shows that she is getting over the whole trauma
Well trying at least
Time for him to do the same
Awww once again pari showed him way to mollify her mother
So geet isn't gonna make it easy for him good
Waise itni si hain parr kya chanta maara naa
Cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...😃
Edited by sanghita0000 - 11 years ago
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awesum part
yaar make maan strong

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