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Posted: 11 years ago




Try to update life also today so enjoy
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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part17


when geet lesion his voice she just want to hug him , but she know she have to be tough so he cant do it again , she think msk meetha to bahot kha liya abi to kadwa , karela khane ka time hai /you eat sweet till now it is time to have some bitter like bitter guard , haina rat , just than baby kick her , which brought happiness on her face ... so MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA ready for it just than maan with slow step reach near her and try to took her hand in his hand but geet just pull back her hand

geet just went near bed and slowly sit on bed , like she took total moan wrath , it if it other occasion surely maan pull her leg but today he just know that sherni jag gayi hai , kuch kaha to dushre gaal pe bhi padegai and maan hand just went to his own cheek with fear from his sherni , but he cant stay away from her , he just want to say sorry just want to say his stand of hole situation ,want to share his pain , his helpless , his agony with geet ,he just went near her and sit near her leg and put his head on her lap , she want to protected but maan word just stop her

geet with parent presence als I become orphan , and it is so hurting geet from childhood I never gel love ,love is fer away thing but I don't get small attention from them they don't know my , habit , my happiness , my sorrow , my friends , my favorite subject in school geet , they never any school activity , ha but always tont me for my less mark , less result , you know at list you lucky than me that you get parent love at list for some time , muze yaad hi nahi hai last time unhone muze kab nazdik liya , kab pyaar kiya meri to ashi koyi bhi memory he ahi hai

every one say childhood days golden days of our day but for me it is always black day ,dark past ,dark shadow of my life ...and now this dark shadow want to destroy my today , my tomorrow , you know geet when my parent stop me from painting when my father burn painting in front of me from that day painting and dream of happiness just away from me ...I never watch any beautiful dream after that day , just watch nightmare , nightmare about my own parent , it is joke from destiny na geet , you know geet our Mahatama Gandhi say "Where there is love there is life."

and I meet my life after I attempt suicide , I meet my life in face of dadi , adi and you and my pari because before that , ionly living because death is not come to me , and when I try to go near death , life come near me in face of my pari ...but again my past shadow follow me and when they accused you that way I just broke from inside geet , idont want to my past black shadow come in my pari life

I try every way to please my parent but I never success in that , istop my painting for them , itry my best for good result , what shall ido when that study that study just dancing like ghost in front of me that word , maths , forumala just ghost for me geet ,iam so happy hear with you dadi , adi and pari so happy but again they ruin it they just ruin it ,some wear iget fear if you also went away after hearing their accusing ,icant live without you and pari tum dono ab meri aadat ban gayi ho geet it is not possible for me to live without you and pari geet I know I hurt that people , who really care me ,love me with my foolish act somewhere I hurt you all but trust me it is not intentional geet I swear


and when they come like that again my heart accept love from them , but it is again brake bitterly and this time they hurt you and pari also and that make me react that way , in all that I only hurt you all I am sorry , tear start to come from maa eyes , he just sharing his emotions first time like some mist clearing from his mind and new sunrise just waiting for him with open hand


after lesion maan geet cant hold herself tear is following her eyes , yet she want to give more silent treatment but , she just cup his face and say maanji idont get all meaning of your word , kya hai na itne bade bade words mere chotese dimag main jate nahi hai , maan just smile on her innocent , but one think I get that you don't get that love what you deserved from your parent , but think like this na they are most unlucky that they lost diamond thinking as ordinary stone ,maanji and don't make effect others on you maanji you need for us ,for me ,dadi ,adi and most imp YOUR RAT don't you you want to go away from us for whom that person who don't care for you maanji


agar aaj apko kuch ho jata to main or rat to mar hi...just than maan put hand on her mouth and say don't say that word about death iam sorry geet and I show them that what is Maan Sing Khurana ,you are with me na geet


geet just slap on maan hand and say remove your hand than I could talk na she make angry face but she looking cute


maan can't hold himself and just pick on her cheek , her geet some time just talking like mature girl and next moment talk like child

maan just lost in her and poor geet lost in kiss ,she just put her hand on her cheek and cried out in big voice ...oh she just crying on high volume


maan just shatter with her sudden cry , he fear for her like some pain or his pari he just want to say something to her just than adi and dadi entered in room after hearing geet loud cry looking angry glare from adi and dadi maan just gulp his Silva and start to shake his head in no but geet no wear to stop



Dadi just come near her, hug her and say what happened geet, why you crying this if anyone trouble you just tell me ,big fat tear coming form geet eyes she just weep it with her back side of hand/palm and say in childish tone


WO wo dadi she just point to maan and say inke wajese kitane rat jumping in my tummy, dadima


Now maan and adi get alert with geet words , adi just drag angry glare to maan but both are tense if geet blubber something to maan than maan was goan , maan ad adi just imagine tight slap from dadi on maan cheek both scream in loud voice NOOO both dadi and geet jump on their place , dadi looking to him like what ...



both give silly smile to her


adi wo dadima kuch nahi ye geet to kya choti bath ko bhi bada karke babtati hai


maan ha ha dadi don't worry we will look to her wo apki dawai ka time ho gaya hai na , you go dadi


dadi just mummer pata nahi ismain baccha kon hai ye would be mother geet or ye do bander , but she smile that maan come back with smile and she just kiss forhad and say geet maan ki pari ko rat bulana chod do nahi to iske ander ka MSK jag jayga , geet just give confused look to dadi , she want to stop dadi just than maan just hold her hand and she froze in her place


Dadi just went from their and adi just march to maaneet and pull back geet hand from maan hand, start to glare him ...


maan just gulp hard and mummer lo geet ka bhai jag gaya


adi just ask what happen geet


geet in mick voice , he just kiss me hear she pointed her cheek , and so many rats come in my tummy friend you tell me first this one rat always trouble me and now another so many rat no no , I have to tell dadi


Both just scram nooo stop geet


maan , geet just stop called my pari Rat , mummer in low voice reaction to ashe de rahi hai jaise lip pe kiss kiya maine , geet ke babaji


But adi heard it and give tight punch in maan stomach ...


maaneet jump on their place both just gaping adi like what ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
vrinda22 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
maan sharing his pain 2 geet
lolz geets innocence..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow great story please update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for sharing your story with us.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update👏👏Loved Maaneet convo...Maan sharing his pain💔Loved Geet's innocence😆😆Loved it😳waitind for the next updateThanks for the PM dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan said his heart to geet
emotional updates
poor maan never get love from his parents
geet some time she speaks like a ma chore girl n then again likekid
hahahah adi maan imagine dadi slap
awsum update
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
u really updated
me na padkar comment karungi

thanks a lot
muaahhh 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome updt
sad fr maan
loved it
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
some sad n some naughty part
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update thanks u soo much mahi for this update loved maaneet scene geet abhi to lip pe kiss karna baki hai lol

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