THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 32

Originally posted by: priya111111

oye praff usko tanhai se doorr rehne ki bajai tu gaana garahi hai

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

kyu?

Originally posted by: dqno1

Wrong song...though I did use this one for Maan in the early chapters.

It is from Silsila.. the dialogue before the song yeh kaha aa gaye hum yun hi saath saath chalte

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thank you. This update was mostly about them so no one else was in it but them.

Originally posted by: jasraj123

first of all I loved this back to back update avi😉😉😉😉 thanks for updating so fast and sorry for late comment tooo
was busy working and u know when we work 12 hrs shift nothing much energy left after work to do some productive work.

hayeee love the way sherni Geet did confront maan and before that tezi making pakora's and silent war in maaneet.
darji is playing big role here😆😆
hayeee love the wy geet said that delete my pic and remove the locked and how she tell how much she was hurt at every occassion when maan was trying to push her away
then then maan explaining when he fell in love with her and how it went after.
then the letter's suspense got clear
but avi I am sooo surprised how geet knew who helped with darji's operation and notes.
pinky was just doubting but not sure😕😕😕
did i miss anything😕😕😕 while reading

and hayeee loving this naughty maan and how he teased geet after that he wanted her to confess but if maan is ser then she is sawa ser😆😆😆😆
she also put her conditions tooo and now waiting for maan's romantic side to reveal😳😳😳😳

ufff dadi cid is in trouble now😆😆 ab maaneet has joined together😆😆😆
now can i say that I am waitng for next update😉😉😉😉 too

Originally posted by: heytal

Part 63 - (3)

The pic gave way to lot of revelations and confusions😕

Geet confused about Maan's feelings for her then and now

Not having anymore patience she is all set to confront Maan

and there she goes 😆

Maan loosing his patience now

Maan trying to assure Geet and Geet is in no mood to give in

and the battle continues...

Kitna ladte hain Babaji😳

Geet's outburst and pain finally makes Maan realize his folly to have never confided his feelings, his love directly to her. Her fear to believe in him, insecurity that he may desert her again slits through his heart

Maan decides to share his deep buried facts and feelings to his Giit😳

Maan's confession was so earnest

Kudos to u to pen it down so wonderfully!THANKS😃

It breathed a new lease of life in Geet😊

Their moments, their attempts to ease each other of their guilt and take the blame of the misunderstandings, their cute nok-jhoks were just magical!

Actually make u smile through tears😃

I did make you guys wait so long for it so it had to be worth it. You know this was only planned as an OS or SS at most so I think I stretched the story too much. 9 months of this story on the 21st... so wrapped up and delivered then.

So happy that the MU is solved and they are together

Maan finally knows Dadi's involvement in the whole plan

Now I wanna see what is he upto😉

And ofcourse the dreamy proposal tooo☺️

Fabulous update Avi

🤗

Phew!!!! Finally managed to read all and comment too

Really sorry for all the delay and thanks to put up with me

Love u

:*

Originally posted by: vidyaniru

Read it again and not able to get over it. So beautifully penned.

He keeps saying ILU but she is not able to understand. Her anguish is so well brought out. He finally tells her the depth of his love. And he is so ashamed of his misunderstanding. And she blames herself for not making him believe in her!! And the fact that she also misunderstood, makes her forgive. And the locket is back on her neck! Loved their nok-jhoks. And a romantic proposal is coming...

Thank you for giving us this beautiful story, that we feel like reading the updates again and again. Very very well written update.

Originally posted by: spvd

part 63
part 3
awesome dear...
excellent...
loved it so much...
finally Maan told her about his feelings from the start...
but that was so lovely...
but i want Geet to tease Maan and trouble him so much...
haye the romance was so lovely and beautiful...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Mind Blasting Update AVI
Dil kar raha hai Tujhe Dher saari Pappiya de dun 😆
Awesome Truly Loved it..