THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 33

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GurmeetsMaha

Oh my God.. Oh my God..Oh my God...I came after a loong time and so many updates to check out..i mean wooow ..yesterday night was indeed my night lol

so I see a complete transition of Geets role..from innocent to Jhansi ki rani ..but I loved it aur jaisa darji nay kaha aisay bann rahi thi jaisay uska haqq banta ho that was so cuuute observation 😆
and I love the fact that Maan in no delay reached by Geet in HP and now staying there..even the jealous Maaneet were so cuuute 🤣
but what I really like was that Tejji is wiilling to help Maaneet .. Geet instead of Tejji felt Maans absence was also a cute moment but what surprise me is Dadi and Darjis frendship haha they are so good together 👏
and finally Maaneet Milan..finally Geet got her locket back..finally they cleared all missunderstandings ..everything seems so clear and freshing now and now am looking forward to more of maaneet scenes..what about a dance? 😳
so i alwayys say wonderful updates ..and great change that not only Maans but now also Geets family and atomosphere in HP is described 👍🏼
keep writing..waiting for next parts 🤗

PS: I didnt get any PM for the updates in new thread..I just accidently founf out that there are more updates updated, please PM me next time because now am kinds free from studies

Have been super busy. Please bookmark the thread so that you can see when I update. Next one will be on the 13th and if I have time there will be a teaser.😃
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UNICORN75

First,Thanks Avi for this wonderful and unique story of Maneet..Kudos to U and a big bow to the efforts u put in keeping us entertained and the spirit of Geet aglow in our hearts.
At last the MU gets cleared...
Wonderfully written...No big poetry/big setups/big dialogues...Simple words spoken straight from the heart..
Loved it...
Now there can be no stopping to this
unique couple...Blush Blush 😉
Although eargerly waiting for more but yet feel sad that we are moving in the last lap of this unique and wonderful story

I am glad that you guys liked it. 😃 Thanks for the support.
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update amazing thank you thank you for the translation loved that they sort the misunderstanding and loved how both finally let all the hurt and pain in their heart out and loved both understood how the misunderstanding started and loved the confession and finally maan told her everything that was in his heart and he realized that dadima knows that they both loved each other loved the update very emotional and the emotions ell portrayed and felt thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting waiting
Hope I had a lovely weekend
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the update amazing thank you thank you for the translation loved that they sort the misunderstanding and loved how both finally let all the hurt and pain in their heart out and loved both understood how the misunderstanding started and loved the confession and finally maan told her everything that was in his heart and he realized that dadima knows that they both loved each other loved the update very emotional and the emotions well portrayed and felt thanks for the pm



Thanks Kathrina. Geet has been mostly hindi speaking in this story Unfortunately this was like 20 pages so it took me a long time.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Waiting waiting
Hope had a lovely weekend


will try but no promises

weekend was crazy busy and spent only free time translating..

have some scenes in mind but did not get a chance to type it.😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
Avi.. hugss.

will comment in lunch time...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow wow awesome update Avi...

Avi, can u find a Dr. Khurana or Dev Singh Khurana for me, Please???😳😆.. i just love these two characters of ur story...
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Posted: 11 years ago


maan kaise propose karne waala hain?
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Posted: 11 years ago


determined maan not to leave our bambi alone now... haina??

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