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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.












Part - 40



Dadima was worried about Geet's Sargi * she knew that Geet never accepted anything from this house but this was a very important ritual * not even sargi Dadima bought many things for her but she was fearing of Geet refusal . Dadima called Maan in her room before going to bed . Maan was there in few min and find Dadima worried.

Maan: kya hua Dadima , aap pareshan ku hei?


Dadima: Maan early morning pooja aur sarge ki rasam hei aur Geet ..? she sighed.


Maan cursed himself that he didn't talk to Geet about these things... God!! Ab kya karu ..? jo darr Dadima ko hei wahi mujhe... asaani se wo kuch bhi accept nahi karegi * lekin agar wo fast rakhne ko ready hei to ye rituals bhi kar legi .


Maan: Dadima , wo ker legi , aap ku pareshan ho rahi hei?


Dadima: Maan beta , usne shaadi ki koi cheej accept nahi ki sab hume waps ker di , ye kahaker ki uska unn per koi haq nahi hei ... ye uske liye nahi kisi aur ki hei . to abb wo kaise manegi ?


Maan felt a pang in his heart .. usne hi to sabhi rastey band ker diye thy to wo kya kerti , usne bhi to iss rishtey ko kabhi respect nahi di . Ab kaise kahu usse ki wo ye sab accept ker le... aur in rituals mei Dikhawa nahi pyaar aur vishwash hota hei* jo na kabhi usne kiya aur na maine ... God!!! Ye kaisi Uljhan hei ? kya karu ab?


Dadima : bolo Maan hum ab kya kare?


Maan was in a very wreched position but he hardened his heart for Dadima and said : Dadima aap tayaari karo baki mei dekhta hu * he patted her hand to assured her and came back in room.


Geet was busy in her lappy and typing something on keypad * she had cleaned her hands which was looking very beautiful with that dark shade of heena * Maan gave a brief look to her and sighed .. koi charm hi nahi hei isse kisi bhi baat ka , aur kare bhi to kiske liye? He felt that someone squeezed his heart * he took a long breath and gathered his courage to talk her.


Maan: Geet ... early morning Sargi aur pooja hei .. Dadima ne jaldi uthne ko bola hei .


Geet's hands stopped right there and she became still * a question hit her mind.. kis haq se legi wo Sargi ? ab mei kya karu? Nothing was coming in her mind to avoid this situation * fast ke liye to bhookha rahana hei to raha leti lekin ye sab kaise accept karu?


Maan was watching her and realising that she was hurt again * he threw his fingers in his hair combing them back helplessly and came close to her dragging his feet and sat there on his knees near her * he took her hand in his with a lowered head * Geet looked at him puzzled * Maan spoke without looking at her.


Maan: Geet , we both know that that our past have bitter experiences and memories and i too behaved very immature * i'm sorry for all my misbehaving . Please ..

Ab kya chahaty ho ? she cut his words and asked coldly without looking at him .


Maan was hurt with her cold behaviour and looked at her painfully * he didn't know how to formulate d right words to ease her pain which she was not showing but he knew that she was crying in her heart .


Maan: Geet , i know that in current situation it is very difficult for u to accept these things and i'm also responsible for blocking all d ways but beside that i'm requesting u please Dadima ki sargi accept ker lo , please Geet.. i can't see her like this , broken and downhearted.


Geet: aur mei .. mera kya..? meri takleef ka kya..? meri Apmaan ka kya ? Ek baat punchu aapse MK.?


Maan:hmmm. He hummed with lowered eyes * he knew that something hard is coming to reply .


Geet: aap mujhe Sargi accept kerne ko ku kaha rahe hei jabki aap is rishtey ko mantey hi nahi ? Sirf apne guests ke samne apni family ki respect aur reputation ke liye ye dikhawa kerna chahatey hei ? apni Dadima ko khush dekhne ke liye ye sab kerne ko keha rahe ho ? MK , agar ye guests na hotey tab .? Tab Geet iss ghar ke kisi koney mei akele padi rahati aapko koi farak nahi padna tha . MK jis taraha aapke liye aapki family ki respect aur khushiyan important hei waise hi mere liye meri respect bhi important hei , rahi baat khushiyon ki wo meri kismet mai nahi hei to unke bare mei sochna kya.? MK kuch baton mei dikhawa ki nahi ,vishwaash aur jajbaat ki jaroorat hoti hei ... jo yahan nahi hei . Dekhawe ke liye jitna kerna hei mei ker dungi , aapko kahane ki jaroorat nahi hei .


Maan was sitting there tongue tight * he knew that she was right , he was here only because of guests and for his family respect otherwise he never thought about her even he didn't knew that she is living here , in KM and he didn't recognise her . He was ashamed on his behaviour * she is d saviour of his and his family respect * her one refusal could put them in an aweful situation .


Geet: jaeye so jaeye MK , mujhe jo aur jitna kerna hei mei ker dungi.


He got up and settled in his bed with a heavy heart, deeply drown in his thoughts .. She was doing her duties honestly but he was failed in his. He was arguing himself , why i suspected her ? because she was related to that B****. Dad and Dadima even Dev and Annie too liked her then why i rejectected her and insulted her? I misbehaved with her without knowing her and concluded that she was also like that . Now what Maan ? Now u r at fault Maan and she is innocent * how would u cover up this damage ? You closed all doors and she is far away from u hurt and broken * she is a saviour of ur and ur family hohour but u insulted her , abused her and even forgot that where was she ? She was ur wife and u treated her a guest * she saved ur bro's life managed everything all alone * she has everything but living an isolated life all because of u and ur behaviour. What u have done Maan * in ur anger u punished an innocent girl .


Kisi ke kiye ki saza maine iss masoom ko de di , bina usse jaane , bina samjhe * uske liye bhi sab bada mushkil raha hoga lekin fir bhi wo sab kuch chup-chap tolerate ker rahi hei * na wo kisi se kuch leti hei , na mangti hei aur na koi hope , bas apni duties puri ker rahi hei . Ye maine kya ker diya ? kaise sambhalunga uski aur apni bikhri hui Zindgi ?

He didn't know when he doze off thinking about her.


Precap... Geet's Sargi...???


Part - 41

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3823432/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-5-updated-pt45-pg125-1-dec?pn=40




Sorry for mistakes.

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally back on if!! after so many days..

phew... finally read it..
geet ne sahi kaha pehle maan ne us k gayab hone pe uski fikr krne k bajae uspe shak kia or ab vo kis haq se geet ko force kr rha hai!! maan ki galtiyon k aage jitna geet kr rai hai vo kaafi hai!!

hr kisi ki apni self respect hoti if we love or care for someone dat does'nt mean they have right to tarnish one's self respect!!!!

Edited by Appy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


aaj mein second😃

the update was awesome ... especially maaneets convo...

the best part was when geet questioned him about the dikhaawa and all... she is so true ... if the guests were not there... he wouldnt have even bothered about her...

kaise sambhalega ab maan... both his and her life?? am eager...
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😛 Hi lily .. lappy theek ho gaya...😃

google pe vohii problem hei ,me using chrome,,,
babie aaj jaldi updtt karo,,,mere badi hdace hui mrnng mein ,,,uspe 2 plcs pe jaana tha ,huby ko bta nehi sakti lappy ban ka khatra ,,,aaj meri khub band baji yaara,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
😳
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
laksu knha ho,,,aaj priya knha hei,,,??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

laksu knha ho,,,aaj priya knha hei,,,??



abhi tumhein mona ke thread par reply kia...

priya aaj nahi aaegi shaayad

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Geet told maan about what she feels & maan feeling bad...
Waiting for the next part eagerly
Edited by -Mithuna- - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-


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abhi tumhein mona ke thread par reply kia...

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aaj jiju ki off hogii,, 😉
maine bhi tumhe mona ke thrd per rply kia hei... 😆
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

aaj jiju ki off hogii,, 😉
maine bhi tumhe mona ke thrd per rply kia hei... 😆



just checked...

Gf ke liye kya kya kar rahe hain dekho😆

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