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I am Babbie. This is my another attempt on Maaneet. So plzz
give ur support. As a starter there may be some mistakes,plz
avoid them and give me ur sugestions.I got the main idea from
an incident which i witnessed and try to rope a new story. Hope
for a good response.
Thankyou
Babbie



The Mist

For banner credit goes to my dear Laksmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.













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Character Sketch


Gurmeet Chaudhary
Maan Singh Khurana ...
A 26yrs old boy, a businessman , rich ,handsome , full of attitude, very rude and an isolated person. Married to Geet Singh. He is the eldest son of Mr Yash Singh Khurana , MD of Khurana Construction , very caring and down to earth person.


Geet Singh ...
A 22 yrs old girl very beautiful and a simple sober girl. An I** D****, final yr student, very intelligent and down to earth girl. Married to Maan Singh Khurana.

Yash Singh Khurana ...
MD of KC, father of Maan,Dev and Annie. A fast friend of Retd. Col. Mahinder Singh and his late brother Rajvir Singh.

Late Nidhi Singh Khurana... Maan's Mom. A very loving and caring lady.

Gayati Dei Khurana ...

Daadima of Maan,Dev and Annie .A very elegant, sweet and caring lady.

Retd. Col.Mahinder Singh ...

Geet's father,a Retd. army officer, businessman and friend of YSK. Care taker of his elder brother's family.


Promila Singh ...

Widow of Rajvir Singh, Mother of sameera and Brijvir Singh.

Dr.Ranjana Khanna( Rano)...

A doc in army , lovelady of Mahinder Singh.

Dev Singh Khurana... Maan's younger brother.

Anvesha Singh Khurana... Younger Sis of Maan.

Meera Kapoor... Annie's friend .

Others..

Rishi Rathod(Jadoo)... Geet's best buddy, he treat her like her kiddo sis.

Pari... Geet's friend and Rishi's GF.


Lakshmi,Priya, Mona , Lily and Many more..Geet's IF friends.


Bui .. Geet's Bua, Kamal..Geet's cousin, Preeti and Sunny...Kamal's wife and 3yrs old son.

Some more characters according to Story line.




Note... If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is a fiction not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.






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Congo for new thread..🥳👏
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CONGO FOR THE NEW THREAD


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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.










Part - 39




Geet went down rubbing her nose again and again * Dadima told her to apply mahandi and she helplessly sat there Maan too came down after change with a hanging face * all his attempt went in vain ... usse mana to liya , lekin beemar ker diya .. Maan tu koi kam theek se nahi ker sakta.

He was sitting there and watching her and d boy was applying mahandi on Geet's hand holding her hand in his * Maan felt an uneasiness and didn't like that an unknown person was holding her hand * he wanted to throw him out but controlled himself coz of Dadima . It was going near one hour and he was still making paterns on her other hand * he was getting impatient * form last 1 hr that boy was holding her hand .. Grrr.. in front of him .


Maan: Dadima aur kitni der tak ye program chalega ,, mahandi and all .


Dadima : ho jayega , time lagta hei in sab mei .. ku tumhe kya jaldi hei?


Maan: nahi wo bas esse hi pucha .. Geet ki tabiyat thodi theek nahi , she is sneezing.


Dadima, Annie and Geet looked at him awed * he was talking about Geet.. strange!!!


Maan: esse kya dekh rahe ho? aap sab ne dekha nahi kya? Then he told that boy..tum jaldi ku nahi kerty , kitni der laga rahe ho .. khatam karo jaldi se. His eyes were on Geet's hands and then he looked that geet's dupata was sliding down from shoulder and exposing her front a lil .. he stood up at once and placed that properly . All were shocked at his behaviour * Dadima and Annie were enjoying all this but Geet was looking at him puzzled ... isse kya hua achanak se? Shayad sabke samne acting maar raha hei accha pati hone ki .. chaloo kahin ka .

Dev and YSK came back home and find Maan there * Dev excused him and went to his room and YSK sat there with Maan.


YSK: Maan tum jaldi kaise aa gaye , koi kam tha kya?


Maan: yes Dad , wo kuch jaroori kam tha wo finish kerke mei ghar aa gaya . jhoota.


Geet gave him a glare * her mahandi was completed and she moved to go .


YSK: Guddu beta kal off liya hei na ?


Geet: ji


YSK: good , hum sab bhi halfday mei aa jayenge , ku Dadima theek hei na?


Dadima: haan ,, function mei sab sath ho to accha lagta hei.


Geet 's mahandi was still wet so she decided to spend some time in lawn * she came out sat in d swing . It was dark outside but pleasant. Dev was in his room and his room's window was opened * he was standing near his window while talking on phone . Geet's swing was near that place and she could hear his convo * He was talking to Meera who was persuading him to meet her TM.


Dev: Meera bada accha kiya tumne mahandi lagai .. cool .


Dev: ku tum ku rakh rahi ho ? isse to married girl rakhti hei na.


Dev: No way Meera , mei nahi aa sakta .. hum din mei mil saktey hei ..


Dev: sorry sweetie , kal ghar mei function hai aur mei sabke beech se nikalker nahi aa sakta.


Dev: try to understand Meer .. please , mei kya jhoot bulunga night ke liye? Pahale hi daily bahot bolta hu.


Dev: sorry mei nahi aa sakta ,, phone ker lunga awaaz sunn ker fast khol lena , dekh din mei lena.


Dev: meer.. meer..(phone cut from other side) kya karu mei ab ? acchi musibat hei. He threw his hands in air in frustration and went out.


Geet was listening all this and smiling * she knew that both love each other* she gussed that Meera was forcing him to break her fast at night.


Dadima called all to take dinner and she was helping Annie to take her meal coz she too has heena on her both hands. Maan noticed that and his thoughts went to Geet's mahandi * he ordered Nakul.


Maan: Nakul mera aur Geet ka khana room mei le aao and moved from there at once to avoid others gazes . All Khuranas gave a surprised look to each other on this 9th wonder but didn't say a word in front of GD and Pam , but they were very happy with this.


Maan came in room but Geet was not there * he looked everywhere and then came down remembering that she went outside. He came in lawn and tried to figure out Geet and find her on swing * She was there under d moon light , soft breeze was playing with her curls and some strands were disturbing her to come on her eyes again and again * she was jerking her head to remove them .. A smile creaped on his face looking at this angelic beauty * Maan came close and removed those naughty curls who were disturbing her. His sudden touch and action shocked her * his care and behaviour was surprising her from eve... kya hua hei isse? Yahan to koi hei bhi nahi ki jiske samne acting kerni pade... ye angry bird mujhe pagal ker dega.. kabhi kuch to kabhi kuch .


Maan: yahan akele ku baithi ho ?


Geet: wo bas esse hi .. ku koi prob hei baithne mei?


Maan: nai to ... haan wo mujhe kuch baat karni hei .. room mei chalen?


Geet: baat ..kya ?


Maan: tum aao to sahi.


Geet: hmmm OK, chalo.


Both came in d room * Maan knew that she is stubborn and won't come if he told her to come for dinner so he tricked her. Geet came and sat on her settee* Maan prepared a plate and kept that infornt of her to eat * she looked at him puzzled .


Maan: esse kya dekh rahi ho , khana nahi khana hei kya?


Geet: wo mahandi remove kerke kha lungi .. aw chee... aw chee.. abhi bhook nahi hei she rubbed her nose to her arm after sneez.


Maan: sorry meri wajha se tumhe prob ho gai. Chalo thodi sa kha lo mai help ker deta hu.


Geet: It's OK, tum apna kha lo , mei baad mei ker lungi.


Maan shook his head ... bahot jiddi hei .. esse nahi manegi.. He sat near her , filled a spoon with rice and broght near her mouth saying... chalo muh kolo aur chup - chap kha lo , bacchon jaise jidd mat kero.


Geet looked at him awe .. kya hua hei isse..? chahata kya hei?


Geet: aap ye sab ku ker rahe ho? isski koi jaroorat nahi hei, I'll manage myself.


Maan felt hurt : I knew very well that u'll manage . tumne meri care ki jab mei beemar tha , to mai tumhari help ker deta hu .. chalo ab bahas matt kero .. kha lo.


Geet: khila rahe ho to pyaar se khilao... esse daant ku rahe ho ?


Maan: Maan Singh Khurana pahale baar kisi ko khana khila raha hei .. wo bhi request ker ke , aur tum tewar dikha rahi ho..


Geet: kya..? mei tewar dikha rahi hu? Aur tum jo akad dikha rahe ho uska kya ?


Maan: Geet .. jhagda baad mei ker lena , pahale kha lo.


Geet: Mei jhagda kerti hu ..? hwww.. she opened her mouth and he put d spoon in her mouth ... ummm..


Maan: muh band aur khana khao and grinned * he forcefully made her to eat and then had his.



Precap --- Geet hurt and Maan downhearted...


Part - 40

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3823432/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-5-updated-pt45-pg125-1-dec?pn=26




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