NEW SS-YOUR HOME BECAME OURS (part 9 updated on page 22) - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91


Really liked the concept.
Will read All parts n comment.

Nice SS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww that was quick...but a cute update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
part 6
geet: ( shocked)maan ji..app yahaan???

(maan...you here)

maan: geet..(and he turns her towards himself and holds her both hands in his)..i was really waiting for a moment when i cud speak to you alone..trust me geet..i never belived in love at first sight;but from the moment i saw you..i knew why all say love at first sight..you are an angel geet..i really want you to come in my life and brighten with ur love..i want to wake up every morning by seeing the smile on ur face..i promise u geet..i will always there for you..i will always love you the way i love you now..tel me;do u love me the same way i do..

geet: maan ji..(tears were forming in her eyes when she heard confession)..i am telling the truth..i have never got anyones else love other than didi's after our parents death..trust me when dadima asked me about this marriage..i thought i was dreaming..now i can also have a loving husband and family..who will support me;love me and care for me..this is more than i deserve..and i think babaji have send u for me..i do love you maanji..i really do..

(by this they hug each other...their private moment was broken by the whistle of the pressure cooker)

geet: (blushing|)..you..plsss go and call dadima..i will bring the food to dining table

maan: now iam leaving you..but will catch u after dinner be ready babie😉..

(maan leaves back a smiling and blushing geet back..she arranged the dinner on the dining table..maan and dadima were already present there..all of them were having a wonderful spicy dinner..even though our geet is an amazng cook..she loves all spicy and chattpatta food..dadi is okkey with that..but poor maan is in hell now..because of the spice..dadima finishes quickly and goes back to her room to catch some nice sleep as she is hell tired with all travelling and all..suddenly geet notices that maan is not having anything but he is only looking athis plate...she cals him)

geet: maanji..why are u not having anything??

(suddenly maan looks at her..his eyes were brimming wih tears and his nose;lips and eyes were red in color..

(geet came running to his side and gave him a glass of water,which he gulps down quickly..she was in tears,seeing all this..)
geet: maanji..u wash ur hands and face..i will come quickly)

(she runs to the kitchen and comes back with honey i her hands..but she was shocked not to find man there..then she goes to his room but she dont find him there..she search the whole haweli but,he was not there..suddenly she remembers that he must have gone to the terrace..he runs to there..and she finds him standing there looking far..)

geet: maanji..(runs towards him.and make him face her;and holds his cheek with her right hand)

why did you eat the spicy food if u are allergic to them..why didin't u tel me..i would have madesomething else for you..now open your mouth and have this you will feel ok.
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(with that she brot the spoon full of honey towards his mouth;but suddenly he shoved all the honey in her mouth and took her lips in his..and began to take all the honey from her mouth..geet was shocked to react but after sometime the passion took over and she too kissed him back..maan took her upper lips i his and sucked all her sweet juices and then brought his lips to her lower lips and kissed her senseless then showed his tongue in her mouth..after like kissing for ages..when he felt the need of air he left her..her head was spinning with intensity of kiss and her lips were swollen with his attack and her cheeks were cherry red in color..)

maan: mishty...if you can give this sweet medicine everyday..then iam ready to all the spice food you cook..

(geet was blushing hearing his words and kept her head in his chest and snuggled close to him..)
geet: maanji..plsss

maan: what plsss mishty..do you want me to continue kissing..tel me na sweetie..it will be my pleasure to do so

(geet ran from there hearing his naughty talks,,but stopped at the door when he called her..but didn't turn back)

maan: thank you mishty for accepting me in your life..now go and sleep well..tomorow we have to excute the plan..i have already done the first step..now you have to do what i tel you..hope the new day brings new hopes in her life..now u dont have to be tensed;i am always there with; gid n8 mishty

(geet turns back to him and smiles at him and says..)
geet: maanji..whu are you thanking..i am the one who must show the gratitude towards you..now iam not at all worried as i know you are there to support me and to show the right path for me too..gudn8 maanji

(the sun will bring some new rays ofhope and happiness in the newday for both maan and geet)

plsss wait for the next part to know that how is maan gonna excute his plans...

thanks to all the readers who are hitting likes and comments for my every post...u guys are really encouraging me to continue with the story😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Beautiful dear
maaneet confessed their feelings 😃
So maan has alredy started his plan
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Beautiful SS.
Read all parts at one go.

Geet struggling with her life after her parents death.
She even took care of her Di marriage perfectly. It is like she is elder sister.

Shocked to see her di being ill treated. Her mil is very cunning.
Can't see their state.

Dadi coming to Mumbai. They were neighbors. That good. .
Maan already smitten at first sight seeing our Angel Geet.

They r helping Geet out. Wat plan does Maan have. Me curious.

Waah Dadi is great. Marriage ke liye poochne me Der nahi ki. Maaneet so happy.

Loved kitchen romantic moments. Maan is being naughty. Maan can't stand spicy food. He got his share of sweet medicine.

Geet shy. Arre Ab Maan ke khana ka kya hoga.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
wow amazing upd. dear loved it so so much sweety.
It was just fab.
The story is going grt dear...
I am loving every bit of it.
Super.
Tfd PM sweetu.
Hugs...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
both confessed their love and shared cute romantic moments😳😳

so already maan started his plan

eagerly waiting for his plan
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
nice part
loved it

oh they shared their first kiss...
maan told her to from tomorrow they gonna excute their plan
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
nice naughty maan.. love confession and kiss.. lovely update yaar.. cont soon hun
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Maaneet confessed their feelings to each other
And their first passionate kiss 😳
Want to the plan of maan
Continue soon dear
And thank u dear for accepting my buddy request and for PM also 😊

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