NEW SS-YOUR HOME BECAME OURS (part 9 updated on page 22) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
very nice story. waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Very nice part..
good tat now maan told so...
kise ke pass tho dimag hai.. But now to see if our geetu takes it or she just leaves it off thinking emotionally abt her sister...
lovely yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
part 5

maan: iam asking u something.geet..tel me..what will u do if her MIL behaves in the same way..will u be able to give her more money???
(poor geet was crying by now..she is helpless..she only want her sisters happiness..)

maan: sorry..mujhe tumse oonchi awaaz mei baat nahi karna chahiye tha..lekin tumhe bhi samjhana chahiye..kuch log kabhi bhi nahi badalte..jab tak unhe unke kiye ki saza na mile..hume bhi ese he kuch plan karna padega...

(sorry..geet..i shouldnt hav shouted on u like this..but just think..some people never ever change i their life;til they gets punished for their deeds..we should also plan something like that..

geet: aap ye kya bol rahe hai..mujhe kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha..

(what are u saying..i am not getting what u saying)

(maan tells his plan to geet and dadi,after hearing his plan dadi was beaming in happiness because she knows that her grandson will defenitly succeed in his plans..but geet's face didnt showed any reaction)

dadi: beta..what are u thinking??dont u like maan's plan..

geet: maan ji's plan is amazing dadima..but are u sure it will bring back the happiness in my didi's life??

dadi: iam sure beta..everything will be fine..now you are not alone..we are also there with you..
geet beta..mei tumse kuch pooch sakti hoon..tum sach kehna bilkul bhi hich hichaana mat..kya tum kisi se pyaar karti ho???

(geet..can i ask you something..tel me the truth only..pls dont hesitate to answer me..do you love some one..

geet: dadima..aap ye kya keh rahi hai..mei aap ko sacchhi keh rahi hoon ..meine aaj tak kisi se bhi pyaar nahi kiya..

(what are u saying dadima..i am telling you the truth..i never loved anyone..)

dadi: (beaming in happiness)..sacch..ab meri khwaish poori hogi tho zaroor..beta kya tum mere maan se shaadi karogi???kya uski poori zindagi uska saath dogi??

(really..now my dreams will come true..beta..will you marry my maan??will u be with him for the rest of his life???

(both maan and geet were shocked to hear this from dadima and that too this soon..)

maan: dadi..what are u asking her,and that too this quick??

dadi: what?? you are asking as if u dont want to marry her..(dadi comes and holds his ears) i have seen the spark in your eyes whenever you see geet..maan i am your dadima..i know u more than yourself..now i am waiting for geets reply..

(geet was blushing by now and ran from the hall in the excuse of making dinner and stopped near the kitchen door and told both maan and dadi to fresh up and take rest..tell she prepares the dinner for them..and disappeared to the kitchen without even turning back:by seeing the blush on her face have told them about their silent approval for the wedding )
(after freshening dadi was resting in her room..and maan came back from upstairs..and saw dadi taking a nap.. he smiled inwardly and went towards the kitchen;his naughty mind was imagining all naughty thoughts from the moment he got her silent approval about their marriage;and in his mind..he swaired to keep his geet always happy..he will never bring a drop of tears in her eyes from this moment..and he took long steps towards the kitchen..there he saw his jaan making parratha..her hair strands were disturbing her work..and he slowly came behind her and very carefully raised his hand and kept the hair strands behind her ear..geet was startled was an understatement..she was shocked to see him behind but relaxed seeing his eyes which was showing his love and care for her)
Edited by revathinair - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Awesome upd.
simply fab.
loved it so so much dear.
keep it up sweet.
lots of love & hugs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
wow dadi ne to six mar diya good update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
dadima is too fast 😆
she directly asked geet to marry maan and maaneet blushing☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Cool part
Dadima too fast...n 😉
Waiting to know the plan maan has planned
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
fab update
daadi very quick
maan in kitchen
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Omg dadi toh super fast nikli
really loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Lovely SS dear, just loving it :), since I'm fan of Maan Geet too, I just love reading new stories and concept with the character :) ... update soon ... :)

ps : I think you guys who are writing soo beautifully each stories, you're just doing a fantastic job as a writer, thumbs up :) since I'm not coming often but I just want to say you're all fabulous.. keep it up and keep entertaining us with ur stories it keeps Maan Geet, and Geet forums alive even the show has ended.

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