NEW SS-YOUR HOME BECAME OURS (part 9 updated on page 22) - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice maneet confess thier love
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Posted: 11 years ago
they proposed and accepted also...
Lovely yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was a beautiful update.
From their heart felt talks to the flirting - all so well written!

I loved Maan eating the food and then Geet going for the honey and going to Maan. You surprised me with Maan going romantic with the honey and kissing. Sigh!

I loved the ending where Maan states his support and Geet thanks him. Geet has been alone for so long and she finally has a strong person to lean on and love.

I have no words so I go back to the same: BEAUTIFUL!
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 7
next day morning
geet woke when the sun rays hit her through the curtains..she had a small smile playing on her lips..she got up quickly and went to fresh up..after freshening up.she checks her image in mirror and satisfied with her looks..she checks the time;its only seven..she decides to go and prepare the breakfast for her new family..she hurridely opens th door and bumps into hard chest..without even looking she can say that this non other than maan..she looks up and finds him smiling at her,his eyes showed so much love..)

maan: what a correct time..i came to meet you and you came running into my arms..wow mishty..(geet looks up in confusion hearing him call her mishty..) oh..dont imagine anything else..i was calling you only..you know dear..i named u after last night,,because after u gave me the wonderful sweet medicine,i felt lik calling you mishti that means sweetheart my own sweet heart..

(then she notices that he was holding her too close to him by holding her waist..when she tried to get out of his hold;it only made him to hold her more close to him..)

geet: maanji;pls leave me..dadima will awake any moment...i have to make breakfast too..

maan: geet..oh why so hurry..she is still sleeping..she was so tired after the long journey..iam here for two reasons..first one is..you are not going to work anymore in that shop..and i dont want any kind of arguments for that..its my decision and secondly; we have to leave for delhi by this evening flight..so get ready..ok..oh i forget the main reason i am here..(he looks at her naughtly) i want my sweet medicine now..plsss give me the medicine otherwise i will die..

(as soon as the word "die" left his mouth,geet closed his mouth with her palms and nodded a "no"..and hugged him tightly..he broke the hug and took her lips into his for soul searing kiss...he left her when he found her struggling for breath and hugged her tightly and whispered in a husky voice.."mishti..my jaan..i love you"..after sometimes he told her to go and wake up dadima..and he was busy with some calls..geet prepared the breakfast..and kept in mind that thing of maan allergy towards chilli and spicy food..everyone was enjoying food..when suddenly felt something caressing her feet..when she looks down,she got the shock..maan was caressing her feet all the while...when she looked at him.he was seated as if nothing had happened..and even our geet was enjoying their little moment under the table..and dadi interupts in between)

dadi: maan..is there any problem with geets legs..i have been noticing since the time wesat here..all the while you were caressing her legs..beta..there is lot of time left for you to romance..leave that girl to atleast have some food...

(both maan and geet were all "sharam se paani paani"..geet was the first one the run from the table,maan was looking at dadima with a "u so mean look")

delhi-11 am

(aman came back from office..he was really tensed and was restless..both shagun and his mom was surprised to see him back this soon)

shagun: what happened aman..you came back from office this quick???

(without replying to her aman sat in the couch and was holding his head)

aman's mom: aman.beta..what happened???why are u so tensed??

aman: mom..(he had tears in his eyes) i lost my job..that to for the mistake i have not committed..i am job less and now my career is destroyed..no one will hire me when they will find out that i was thrown out of the khurana construction for committing fraud..

aman's mom: what u lost the job??? now how can we buy the new house near ur office..we thought to take the house showing your salary certificate...

aman: (was really angry with the words of his mom)..
mom..how can you be so mean?? you are not bothered about the job i lost because of false acquisition..and the career i lost..all you bothered is about the new house..i have already asked u..from where did you get the large some of money..but you are not ready to say it..


thats all for this part..will surelly update the next part tomorow😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hello sweety.
Hope ur doing well.
I loved d upd. so so much ur writing do beautifully...
And the story is going grt...
I love ur colorful fonts.
Awesome going keep it up sweetu.
Love ya lots...
hugs...
t.c.
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb yaar.. now aman will know about his mom.. cont soon hun..
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Posted: 11 years ago


Beautiful update.

Maaneet had a good n sweet morning. Geet dashed straight into Maan arm where she belongs.

Maan teasing Geet n Dadi ne Maan ki class le li. That part was funny.

Plan already into action. Aman out of job. Can't he see his mom is selfish. Interrogating her. Will she tell the truth ???

Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful dear
maaneet romancing on BF table but dadi caught them😆
so maan played his cards and aman lost his job
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Maaneet are lost in each other
Dadimaa caught maan's act
Hope got to know the truth of money
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
loved maaneet moments
dadima caught them😆
maan's plan has now started!!!!!

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