NEW SS-YOUR HOME BECAME OURS (part 9 updated on page 22)

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918644

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Posted: 11 years ago

hello...

iam here to write an os on our sweet couple maaneet😊

and the reason i am here is because of my shona(Thesaurus)...

my best frnd,sister and mentor and the most wonderful person in the world..

shona this is for u..

plsss forgive me for the mistakes😊

part 1-page 1

part2 -page 4

part3 -page 8

part4 -page 11

part5 -page 14

part6 -page 17

part7 -page 19

part8 -page 20

part9 -page 22

Edited by revathinair - 11 years ago

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918644

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Posted: 11 years ago

part 1

present

geet stands infront of her house with a board "to let"...

geet(st): meri zindagi kahaa se kahaa aakar khadi hogayi...mujhe mere saamne koi raasta nahi dikhayi de raha..aaj mumma papa mere saath hothe tho yeh sab nahi hotha...

(i dont know where is my life taking me..i dont have anything to look forward..if my mumma papa was alive,my life wud hav something else..this wud never happen in my life)

past

geet ke iss duniya mei uski badi behen shagun ke elava aur koi nahi hai..geet ek jewellary mei sales girl ka kaam karthi hai...

ek din shagun ki shaadi ke liya acha sa rishta aaya..

(geet only hav her sister "shagun" as her family..she works as a sales girl in a jewellary shop)

geet: didi sach mujhe lag raha hai yeh rishta babaji ne khud becha hai..aman ji aapko pehele mandir mei dekhi..woh aapko pasand karte hai didi...

(didi;i really belive god has send this marriage proposal for u..aman ji really likes u)

(geet tries to convince shagun)

shagun:gudiya tu tho jaanthi hai..ki hamare paas iss ghar aur uss fixed deposit jo mamma ne hamare naam par choda hai uske alaawa aur kuch bhi nahi hai..aur tho aur fixed deposit bhi 5 lac rupai he hai...thujhe sab pata haina gudiya phir bhi...

(doll.. u know na that we dont have anything except this house and the fixed deposit our mom left for us..and that too the fd amount is only 5lacs)

geet:didi 5 lac se aapki shaadi ache se ho jaayegi aur aman ji ne tho dehej bhi nahi maanga..woh aapko khush rakhenge didi..maan jao na..aapko meri kasam.. aur aap kya poori zindagi kunwari bhetti rehengi??

(didi. that amount is more than enough for ur marriage..and moreover amanji didn't ask dowry also..he will keep u happy..pls agree na.are u planning to be single ur whole life???)

shagun:chal naalayak..tu keh rahi hai iss liye mai tayyar hoon..

(ok..iam ready fo the marriage and its only for you)

geet:yeh hui naa baath..mai aaj hi chachaji se keheke baathaage badaoongi..

(wow..thats great..now i will ask chachaji to forwardthis alliance)

(aman mehra;is a civil engineer..working in khurana construction delhi..but his home town is in mumbai..same city where our shagun and geet lives)

(within one month shagun gets married to aman and now she is in delhi..eventhough aman is loving he can't speak against his parents..his mom behaves so rudely with shagun..but shagun never replies her back and never told anything to geet also)

(shaguns mother in law treats her as dirt,,as a maid of the house..always taunts her and says that her son would have got much better wife and lots of dowry)

one day geet thinks to pay a surprise visit to shaguns home..when she reaches amit's home made her heart broke into many pieces..there shagun was washing the laundries of all the people in their house and geet heard aman's mom saying" jab tak poora kaam khatam nahi kar lethi tab thak paani ka ek boond bhi nahi milega..

(aman's mom:till you complete the whole work u will not get a drop to drink)

geet:didi...😭

shagun:gudiya...(and comes to her and hugs her)

(ssing geet there aman's mom make faces and goes to her room without even greeting geet)

geet:didi..aapne yeh kaisa haal banaa diya hai khud ka...

kya aap sirf ghar ki naukrani hai..???woh jiju ke maa aapse kaise baath karti hai??

(what hav u done yourself..are u the servant of this house???

how can jiju's mom talkto u like this)

shagun:gudiya..bacha esa nahi hai..maa zabaan ki thodi kadvi

hai par dil unka saaf hai..tumhare jijaji bhi mujhse

bohot pyaar karthe hai..mai yaha bohoyh khush hoon..

(doll..baby..its not what u think..my mother-in-law..is reallu good at heart..ur jijaji also loves me..iam really happy here)

geet: maine dekh liya hai didi..ki aap yaha kitni khush hai..mei jijaji ki maa se zaroor baath karoongi..aap mujhe rokiyega math

(i saw;how happy u r here..now i should talk to ur MIL;and dare u stop me..)

aaj ke liye sirf ithna ..agar aap sabko achi lage tho mai continue karoongi..

do hit likes and comments😊

Edited by revathinair - 11 years ago

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 11 years ago

wonderful update..so sad for geet didi..pls cont soon..

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome upd.
Loved the first part so much.
Just fab.
Superb.
poor geet feeling bad for her.
Waiting eagerly for next part.
Love & hugs.
Thanx for finally posting it.
And ur doing an awesome job.
Plzzz do cont. further.
And loved the title so much.

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 11 years ago

Feel sad 4 Shagun.she is such a nice girl.Is her jijaji Maan?Aan is good,but he cant go against his mom.Oh!plz put Shagun & Aman's pics.can imagine them while reading it

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918644

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Thesaurus
Awesome upd.
Loved the first part so much.
Just fab.
Superb.
poor geet feeling bad for her.
Waiting eagerly for next part.
Love & hugs.
Thanx for finally posting it.
And ur doing an awesome job.
Plzzz do cont. further.
And loved the title so much.

shona...

tumne mujhe hosla diya hai..

ithni bhi achi nahi likhti yaar...

phir bhi ye os complete karoongi..i hope...

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918644

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: freya123
nice update

thank u so much..

its the first time i writing something...

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918644

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi
wonderful update..so sad for geet didi..pls cont soon..

really thanks for reading the first part of my os...

iam happy u liked it..

i wil try to continue soon

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918644

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
Feel sad 4 Shagun.she is such a nice girl.Is her jijaji Maan?Aan is good,but he cant go against his mom.Oh!plz put Shagun & Aman's pics.can imagine them while reading it

thank you so much dear..

its the first time iam attempting something..

no geet's jijaji is aman not maan..maan tho uske woh hai😉

shagun is (naintara from geet and aman is dev from geet)

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Which Naintara?1st or 2nd one?The 2nd one looks more appealing in a soft role

Originally posted by: revathinair

thank you so much dear..
its the first time iam attempting something..
no geet's jijaji is aman not maan..maan tho uske woh hai😉
shagun is (naintara from geet and aman is dev from geet)