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Index
concept 1
part 1 page 1
part 2 page 1
part 3 page 1
part 4 page 1
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concept 2

intro and CS
PG 5
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96124525

part 1 page 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98866571


PART 2 PAGE 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98933759


PART 3 PAGE 15


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99829278




PART 4 PAGE 30

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/106187342



PART 5 PAGE 30

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/106187342


NOTE

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/106621811


part 6 page 38
PART

part 7 pg 40

PART

part 8


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/05/22/gtpm-part-8/


part 9


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/05/22/gtpm-part-9/


part 10


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/06/14/gtpm-part-10/


part 11


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/07/23/gtpm-part-11/


part 12


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/07/24/446/


part 13


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/08/01/gtpm-part-13/


part 14


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/08/01/456/


part 15


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/08/12/gtpm-part-15/


part 16

https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/08/14/gtpm-part-16-2/



part 19


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/


part 20


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/09/05/gtpm-part-20/


part 21


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/09/05/gtpm-part-21/


part 22


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/09/12/gtpm-part-22/


part 23


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/09/25/gtpm-part-23/


part 24


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/09/25/gtpm-part-24/


part 25


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/09/26/gtpm-part-25/


part 26


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/10/20/gtpmpart-26/


part 27


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/10/21/gtpmpart-27/


part 28


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/11/24/gtpm-part-28/


part 29


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/11/25/gtpm-part-29/


part 30


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/11/27/gtpm-part-30/


part 31


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/12/01/gtpm-part-31/


part 32


https://guptasuhanaguptasuhana.wordpress.com/2014/12/01/gtpm-part-32/

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

it was the usual day for two unuaual persons everything seems like perefct yet nothing was on its place.. The school was ending today this will be the last day that he will be seeing her for the last time... Yup last time .. Today he is going to londonto persue his higher studies .. Well no wonder he will be the maestro of his field.. He will be recognised in the folks he knew that today its the day he will be seeing her.. His dreams and aspirations all are related to her but she doesnt fit in any of his place... He was the son of one of the richest nd wealtiest family... His father grandfather everyone followed this ritual now he will be going.. He will be leaving today after having a small celebration at the mansion...
He sighed and closed his dairy.. Today he had written to his hearts content ... He knew that after this he wont be able to see her , help her she wont be in his life.. Maybe she will leave to her native land... She wasnt from delhi she had just joined two years back .. Polite sensible and intelligent unlike most of the girls.. She knew how to stay with modesty... Geet ..
Her name just like her.. Maan closed his eyes .. He just wanted to have her last glimpse .. He wanted to stay he wanted to see her... She always sings soft melody... Her eyes are the windows of her soul..
Maan turned and looked at the piece of paper , a hair clip that was placed on the side table.. It was hers .. The crushed paper which was hers.. Maan had collected the things well if anyone would have seen the things he would he defintely declared as mad or love sick.. But here he doesnt know... He just like he just wants to be with her.. Though they havent interacted at all in these two years except once when she was asked to ask his name...
It was a sweet challengethat she was asked to do and she did.. She was the cutest with those curls falling on her face ,, she had just came and asked him shyly...
'umm can you tell me your name'
he looked abobe from his book no wonder she managed to distract him he was the difficult to get type guy.. No sensible girl comes close to him since he never ackowledge them.. Nothing of prsonal sort but his last gf experience had left a bad impression on him... Pretty bad.. The way she behaves the way she tried to portray herself made him annoyed.. The expereince made him to leave her and he was now reserved.. It was Two years since this incident and she was made him ask... Peers knew that he might get angry or her even they asked her... It was all planned a playful ragging.. But whatif he had actually hurt that innocent princess that day... That was the first and last time he had actually interacted with anyoen that was her...
Eighteen months six weeks fifty hours and sex seconds had passed .. He smiled the time they last time chatted .. Or she just asked his name... Her innocence her withdrawl from the class made him conscious why wasnt she taking even once had seen her crying.. She was siting in the terrace garden holding something and crying it was just three months left for school to finish... How much i wnated to go and claim her that time.. I wanted her to be mine... I wanted a right on her to be consoled ... I wanted to kiss away those tears .. I wanted her to let go her sorrows... In short i wanted my princess to trust me...
Maan opened his eyes after a moment and kissed that paper and closed his eyes ...
Assuring his heart that someday you will be mine... My heart will find its partner...

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Part 2
LONDON
after six years..
Today finally he is going back home.. Today finally he will be able to meet her.. He shied looked everywhere if he was caught .. His eyes were still on those deep brown almond shaded eyes that were deep engraved in his heart .. Still he feel that she is in pain.. Still there was a longing in his heart .. Still he gets restless at night..
Still he wasnt able to name his feelings that he had for her...
She was a little innocent shy princess.. His heart always wanted.. But time had again and again parted them... He was now the young and dynamic heir of the richest family of india.. He was the future of khurana empire but still his little impatient heart craves for her one glimpse her one touch... That longing that can be vanished the moment he will see her...
SOmetimes he hink how does she looks like..
Will she be that pure which he had seen.. Will she bethe same innocent and naive... The next moment he would chuckle at his thoughts ...
His eyes are waiting for her one glimpse...
He packed his bags and boarded the next flight ...
Still in a last wish that she will be there..
Sitting in the plane he was lost in hr thoughts..

**********************
last day before leaving to london..

It was his last day in india with his family.. He was going with his family to the temple where he can seek blessings of the god...
It was for his safe journey .. It was for his better future...
His feet halted as he saw her sitting near the small pond in the temple.. She was looking angelic but still gloomy..
Those eyes which he wants always twinkle were filled with undue pain..
She was so vulnerable at the time..
He silently went and sat near her..
Looking at her observing her.. She was wearing a pale color dress that was making her look so cute.. Her duppatta was securely placed over her head..
Her meek voice brought him out of his reverie...
Why did they left me... I loved them soo much...
His answer calmed her a little...
Maybe they wanted to make you strong by putting you in the ordeals of life...
G : i am no one to them.. They binded me in a fake relation...
M: thats your thinking... Maybe they wanted the best for you..
She silently left the place like she got her answers...

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he took that dried flower that fell off her hands that day in temple...
Caressing it in the most tender way just like he wanted to shower his love on her..

Next day he reached .. His family was there to support him meet him.. The way they missed him. Some tears that came out of their eyes and he wiped them...
Calming their eyes which were waiting to see him.. Six years he had been away and now he was there and his family was there to shower their love on him...

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six years later
hoshiarpur...

A girl wearing pale colored clothes was running behind some children she comes there every year.. She is the one who is looking after the development of the place..
Its his words that motivated her..
Yes.. His words made her strong she looked above at the sky smiling gesturing them.. Her parents telling them that she ws not at all un happy .. She was not at all angry on them.. He made her love them..
He made her love what she missed...
One of the child came and made her play again...
She was geet ...

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Part 3

it was the first time he was feeling nervous his breathes were ragged today finally he was going to propose her.. He couldnt believe that she will be his rival.. Today he was going to finally ask her to be his..
She was good in business soft and kind hearted.. Though she was the daughter of his rival cum family friends daughter it wont be difficult for him...
He couldnt believe the same fateful day after six years he met her in a busines conference she was there to represent her company.. Again that angelic glow but that pale color dress aw he so much wanted to tell her to wear something colorful..
Their eyes met but she immediately hid her eyes.. There was a certain pain in her hazels like she recognised him.. Way too professional in her attitude .. He chided his thoughts knowing that she was the one and even he had too make her agree he will do anything to make her his life ..
He will do anything that she will accept him...

Eyes closed she prayed to her babaji that please donot let her meet him.. She knew him his intentions his eyes speaks volumes.. She can sense his unsaid words like he took away her pains..
It was the business meet where most of the well renowed families were there.. She was there with hers ..
Geet and her little brother ayaan.. She took him there to make him aware of the business world.. It was her responsibility her only dream that she cherished.
Ayaan was just in his high school but she was there in all the ups and down of life HIS life..
she smiled weakly as she was approached by some young and dynamic business people but she politely refused..
Even with the constant pressure of her family she didnt budge..
He entered capturing all the attention to him.. His chocolate brown eyes restless but they were assured that today he will get its treasure. Some nknown force tickled her senses and she quietly wanted to left the place letting her parents know.. It was his presence or her destiny that was binding them.. He was the most popular handsome amongst all but she was the most beautiful and innocent that captured his heart and soul...

somehow she didnt left the place maybe it was his presence or her own heart which betrayed her at the next moment.. She wanted to leave but nothing was in her hands.. Her heart and soul with all her kind attention was somewhere like she was suddenly deprived of oxygen to breathe.. It was her breadths that were on her mercy...
Approaching her in the midst of the crowd he holded her hand and led her to the dance floor .. No words no actions were required that could deny his simple gesture his simple stance. Wheather it was her plea to him to take her out of the darkness that was surrounding her or his simple request that he conveyed through his eyes ...
Graceful yet thoughtful moves.. Shhe was swayed in his arms with his passion no tone no rythm no music were required .. It was the constan chattering of two lonely hearts that were pleading to be in each other embrace..
His deep urges and her only denial came as he voiced out his heart felt feelings..

MARRY ME...

The confusion that was written in those hazels was very much there jerking his hand away she left the place.. It wasnt his fault it wasnt his fault her little heart that suddenly felt that she wasnt meant for this happiness.. Her eyes were moist.. She left the place.. Lonely and helpless wandering in the place..
The heavens poured absorbing her in the same pain as she was drowned..
Life was certainly miserable.. She didnt knew that the cheerful feeling of her heart will make her this much deperived of the hapiness..
Her eyes leaked constantly and the heavy rain poured making her lost in the deep pains of her life..
She wasnt meant to be his..
She cant
she cant,,
chattering constantly she was about to run away from the harsh reality when he hold her.. His touch his simple hold made her helpless.. She wasnt sure if this was a dream or him ..
Deep within the loneliness of her heart there was a soft corner telling her to capture all the beautiful and heartfelt moments.. Its wont be leaving any soon.. Grab this chance..but her mind refused letting her know the harsh reality..

YOU AREN'T GEET HANDA ANYMORE..
YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO DREAMS
..
YOU ARE GEET RAHUL MALHOTRA..
YOU ARE GEET RAHUL MALHOTRA
Edited by suhaaana - 11 years ago
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Part 4

six months .. The long time period of six months was just like six milion years her denial had left him heart broken.. He didnt question her he just left.. May be he wasnt for her.. Maybe she loves someone better than him.. His eyes were red.. Drowning himself in the work he felt that he has finally made himself strong to get rid of her thoughts..
But he was wrong the next day she was there for the business meet ..
She was looking gorgeous but her eyes were dull and painful.. Today she was in white.. He would have loved her in this color but she wasnt looking like he wanted..
Meeting progressed well.. Everything was well settled.. When he found something...

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few days later he was there.. Though he new it will be tough but he had too his eyes were struck on her she descended looking heavenly...
It took him lots of efforts to make her agree she was the only daughter of handa's who was married to rahul at the age of 15 it was a compulsion at that time since there was no one left in her family later rahul too left the world...
Maan remebered her words at temple that pain was of loosing her family and friend she too wanted to smile but she couldnt knowing her circumstances...

He was brought out of the trace when he found her siting beside him.. Done with the rituals he vowed to love her like she never feel any pain..
His love will make her forget her sorrows and make her his for ever.. For every life...

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so this was the last part of this os...

Read and enjoy
Edited by suhaaana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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heyy di
me back
finally exams over toh i m all yours
jitni galiyaan deni hai de dijiye
n coming back to the story
first of all congrats for the new story didz
i m sure it is going to be as amazing as all your others
n the first part was written beautifully di
it was just beautiful
maan has to go to london
and he knows that this is the last day he is going to see her
he has to go to london as a ritual his family has been following
the last day, the last moment, the last goodbyes are always the most difficult
geet the name that is imprinted on his heart
n this last day he doesn't want it to pass
maan will go to london n geet well maybe to her native place
they have not interacted in these two years
except once when cutie geet had been challengened to ask his name
as no one expected him to answer without a shout
as he was a difficult kind of guy
n no girl usually came to him
it was playful ragging by his peers
maan is really love sick right now
he saw geet crying also
but still they never spoke to each other
he so much wanted to hold her, to wipe away those tears
but still never went to her
n today he has to go away forever
update soon di
waiting eagerly
muahhh
luvvv yaaa
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting story
loved the first part
maan secretly loving geet...he collected her hair pin her throwed paper and kept with him...
maan and geet talked only for one time in entire two years...
i want to know how he fell in love with her is it love at first sight ..??
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1
wonderfull
waiting for next parts...
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi congrats on the new story! Fab start! superbly written! Maan in love wid Geet! update soon ! Happy Diwali
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new story dear
lovely start
continue soon

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