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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice CS & PROLOGUE! Plz update soon.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting...pls update n do try n pm! Thanks
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~GORI TERE PYAAR MEIN~

PART 1


It was a Monday morning and she was still in her in her bed .the way she was still hiding her fluffy blanket it was the third time she had turned off her alarm a frown came on her lips .. the way she was making faces and turned around and took her cell phone ..she looked at her wallpaper that showed that it was 5:30am in the morning..

Uummm 5:30 abhi I can still have sleep of fifteen minutes.. but just fifteen minutes geet .. she looked at the room that was still dark..well geet loves to sleep in pitch dark and with her all comfy soft toys..she was twenty one and slightly matured. Again in her sleep she just tossed and turned trying to collect her things...

"dress is ironed.. my files are kept nicely.. though she was still on her bed but still sleepy .. her eyes were closed when she didn't realized that it was ten minutes that her fifteen minutes were over .. she looked at her cell phone and immediately sat up... Geet immediately turned on the lights and looked at her bag..well she was still having the habit to collect her things in the morning geet once again looked at all the things and then she just sighed not knowing that she was forgetting something..she just sighed in a relief..when she suddenly came infront of the mirror that was beautifully placed while the curtains on its both sides ..red and white combination...

Geet took her specs and looked at her when her eyes turned wide...

"babaji..she shouted and looked at her hair which were having almost full bottle of oil..she had forget that she was supposed to get up at four and wash her hair..warna thand lag jayegi..she made a baby face and immediately rushed out only to see her brother up.well he was still making some files... she just made a baby face and took her towel to rush to take bath after pecking her parents a quick good morning on their cheeks and showed her tongue to ishaan.. but he just ignored and glared at her while she just went making a baby face...

It was after an hour .. 7:00 am in the morning .. a lady in her forty's was serving the parathas in three plates..while ishaan chewed fast fast while writing his assignments... geet was still struggling with long wet hair..

"aghhh I hate them..mama I am going to cut them today..main phir se utna bhool gayi.. now I am going to catch cold.. well geet never used dryers for her hair she absolutely hated them...

Rano "geet pehle breakfast karo and where is your bag.. aur haan lunch pura kar lena warna you know "

Geet pointed at the sofa where her bag was lying ignoring her mom ..rano kept her lunch a apple and her water bottle.. a small tumbler since geet is so used to her things and when she saw her daughter's snail speed as she was worried..she came up with a cotton towel and made her stand..while she rubbed her hair with it making them completely dry and now she didn't have to be worried...

Rano brought the paratha rolled in a foil and gave it to her she was late today..her papa was also ready ..he just took his car keys while geet just took and munched it and left ... she went before all but out before pecking her brother consoling him again... and he just threw the cushion on her ..she was hell irritatingly at times and the worst is when she tells him that he scarificed his dreams

Telling him in a dramatic way ..

"ishu tujhe na hotel management karna chahiye tha... baby don't worry I am with you hum dono Anshan (hunger strike)par baithange and then you can leave this khoon chosne wali engineering.. mera pyara bhai..."

And the world knows that she will remain on her Anshan and will make the family worried..

Geet went and said her chirpy good morning to her darji well he remains at the garden at this time and just hug him and went after telling him that she is going...

Geet" dadu I am going warna phir se late ho jaungi.. aur ha papa is dropping me half way then I will take the metro .. phir I wont be late .. and haan I will come little late today I am meeting prachi and gaurav... they are going to pick me and we will go for the dinner so aap mama ko keh dena please "

She knew that her daddu will convince her mama and her papa already knows this and he had given her all the freedom that geet never misuses ..she is just the innocent yet fun loving chirpy baby doll..

8:00 am

Maan was hurrying the things he had slept late and now he was getting ready ..within the limited time MR hot and handsome khurana just settled his tie and waist coat .. the musky fragrance and his magnetic pull .. maan just dashed downstairs and looked at his dadima she was in the kitchen helping the servants with the breakfast and his dadaji was about to take that harmful venom ( he meant sweet sugary tea) maan just took it from his hands and the next second he just shouted making the servants shiver and the next second he just saw the line of ten servants came who were sweating while his dadi came and glared at the servants and her husband...

Maan "Deepak where is the suger free tea for daadu and who gave him this tea.. kisne di..aur nakul where were you when daddu was drinking this zeher .. dadu wont change but you all .. " and app

He just turned and gave a cold stare while he peeled off the medicines and gave them to his dadu... who without much ado took them and have them while his dadi was giggling and ignore the glare that she receive from her husband...

Maan" dadu I was late today toh apne apni man mani kar li.. seriously grow up and after giving him the medicines he just looked at daadi and gave her a quick wink and went to do the breakfast he was late today..and was having an important presentation at the office today...

AT THE DINING ..

Maan" dadi I will be late today I have to attend a client meeting and there is a launch party of our new venture and app aur dadajji be ready ...

Dadu" kya zamana aa gaya hai mera pota mujhe hi bata raha hai.. aur ine dekhiye maan ko daantne ki bajaiye she is happily agreeing ..."

Maan looked at the change in emotions and he just left with no hope knowing he cant do anything with him but instructing nakul who he had appointed for his dadu and his medicines well his sugar levels always remain high and according to reports dadu is fooling him so maan had cleverly changed all his dadu's eatables with his sugar free's unknown to him...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
loved it... maan's dada is so funny!!!

waiting 4 more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
that was funny
how they both were hurrying up
both are so cute right
how geet was in hurry
and what nautanki she does
so is she uni going
or has she finished
really maan aapke dadaji is funny for sure
hmmm yeh inke dada hain ki maan inke
seems like the other way around
cool you started with this
cant wait for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
hi dear! Awesum update! Lovely intro of Geet n her family! she is so sweet n lazy! Wonderful intro of Maan n his family! His dada is nice n Maan worried abt him! update soon! Well written! Y no pm???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
lovely start
maan with his dada n dadi
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gr8 start...continue n pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
awesome n wonderful starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
lovely start doll liked it very much. geet is tornado and maan is hilter for his dadaji😆😆😆😆

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