Maaneet SS BROKEN BY LOVE prt5 updtd on pg 15 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME...LOVE IT
SOME TIME FEEL VERY CONFUSED
SUPERB WORK

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry frnds for no update as i met up with accident and got
fracture on my hand so un able to update but will try to update soon and reveal the whole past frst than progress the story and 😭 again sory for making u all wait 😭
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Awww...Get well soon! will be waiting for the update!
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Liking ur story felt bad for muskaan continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi superb updates...well written, update soon. n do pm. pls pm link to ur other work
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4
Geet:I am here for only two days so please don't make any kind of fuss and please behave normally in front of Muskan and Kabir,saying so she exit the room leaving everyone startled behind.She ask kids to go with their papa.
She sit in her sports car and start driving rashly.As soon she start driving her whole past come crushing to her.
(From here the past starts but only of Geet life before and after her doom.)
...GEET POV...
Geet,elder daughter of Sukhdev and Rano Handa. Her parents love her more than anyone.Her childhood was best until they shifted to Delhi heights apartment. Well at that time she was just 12 years.There she first time saw him chatting with his friends.He was smoking cigarette but as soon as his eyes met her he throw that cigarette and she was just lost in his eyes.After getting jerk from Rajji she cum to her senses and left to her place.And after that it became a ritual that whenever we come in front of each other we steal glances to each other.Unknowingly i was attracting towards him like a moth to fire.Dun know when I fell for him.It was a normal day and I got a wrong call.I was just hell afraid that if pappa aur bro come to know they will kill me and in tension I tell all this to Tara and she is going to tell Mama about it but unknowingly the situation was turn at my side and after that it's become ritual that when ever I do something stupid someone just handle it.And one day when tara challenge me to go to dev's house at night.Not knowing that his parents are out of town,I just agreed it unknowingly as his sister Tanya is our friend in bargain she will give me Maan's number and also tell me about Maan's feeling about me.My routine is to walk with rajji and Meera after dinner.From there I sneak out to go to dev's house but as I was about to ring the bell someone just pull me in alley shutting my mouth with his rough palm as soon I saw in his eyes i was petrified as there is nothing other than fear in his eyes yes he is Maan,My Maan.He just blasted me why I am going in Dev's house when I know that his family is not in town.I was in my dreamland seeing him so close to me but soon I cum out of my lala land as he jerk me and ask me to cum with him he take me to the back side of dev's house there what I saw is enough to take my breath away as My brother Brij was sitting with dev along with Tara and Tanya.That day I come to know that my savior is nun another than Maan.
Well next day i tried my best to tell Maan truth but I don't get chance after that four years passed in sync without any special incident.It was my fifth anniversary of falling in love with Maan,I just want to celebrate it and i just want to talk to Maan.Feeling helpless I just login to my fb (facebook) account.I search him and to my luck I found him in just moment and send friend request.As soon as I send request he accept it.I was on cloud nine my happiness have no bound.I go for a walk treated my friends I was happy so happy.I was climbing stairs when someone pull me and thats Dev.He purposed me and was about to kiss me when I just slap him and again I raise my hand but he was quick enough to hold my and with that he push me to wall he is about to kiss me and in fear I close my eyes when someone pulled him.Maan was so angry he just ask me to leave from there.I just leave frm there.As soon as I come to home I check my fb account there was his msg where he ask me not to tell anyone about our small friendship as it can create problem for me in family and also he don't want any one bad mouthing about me.I immidiately reply him forgetting about the whole incident which can be the reason of my disaster and strangely Maan also din't ask about anything and soon we exchange our numbers as i was unable to online more thn hour, after that we talk on sms not on calls soon one year pass when I was just busy in making a software.It was happiest day of my life my software sold in 150 milion pounds and immediately I brought two companies which were bank rupted one in Delhi and other one in London I want to share it with Maan and to my luck I found him in the Alley of colony I just tell him I want to talk him he said me that we can talk on call but I refuse as I want to see his face expression.As soon as I luk in his eyes i just forgot everything and like in some tranced i blurted out I love You.With the loud horn sound my trans is broken and i was hell embarrass unable to face him i just look down when he rudely said:
Geet I don't know what make you think that I love u but you are just no one in my life and no one means no one...love is to far when I just talk you because of sympathy as I felt pity on you that you have no one to give attention to you.And so on his accusing is continue,
I was just blank my all happinese is vanished in thin air and i turn and back towords home unknowingly that this is just the start and I cancel the party I ask my new employs to cancel and dosen't tell any one about the biggest achivement of my life unknowingly that this all turn against me.I was going for a meeting when a girl come in front of my car.The accident was minor and Thank God she didn't get hurt.She is nun other than Alina.Now I have two persons who can understand me one is Alina and other is Adi bhai.In one month my Company in India atain the biggest name,fame and money.As London company is of no use so i tried to sell it but not getting my desire price i just shut it.nd the comapny is working on it own where as My company in Mumbai is attaining name fame and,money.Thanks to Adi bhai and Aleena.I lie to my family that am going my college well at that time instead of attend college I attend meetings.As Adi bhai manage my attendance.Till 3 I attend mettings and office and after 3 Adi bhai take the charge along with Aleena.They both manage everything my work is only to attend meetings finalising projects qoutation and all as am doing my PG in MBA.Well as soon as I come home I was terified to seeing everyone in sitting area along with Khurana's and I am having bad vibes that something is teriblly wrong.When I come near Mama and she harshly jerk my hand I find Maan only to see a digusted expression on his face the same which is on everyone's face along with mamma and she just throw some snaps on my face these are intimate pictures of me and Maan and I can know that these are fake but what make me shock is my father slap me in front of whole family and beg maan to marry me and he accept it.Seeing disgust in everyone face I tried my luck but fate is all set to play the dirty game.and no one listened me and in one week I become Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana.My family disowned me.Last week they don't talked me I was just lock in my room and the day before wedding I didn't eat. and no one care,strangly I was not feeling hungry.We retired to outhouse for night.Maan was not there I was looking on moon when I got a call from Adi bro as this one week I didn't go anywhere so company is effecting.I ask him do what he is feeling right and end the call.I was just staring moon blankly I want to talk to him.Clear all this MU.
I was brought back from my thoughts When someone harshly pull me.nun other than Maan.His eyes spitting fire.
...Flashback...
(Warning:18+ )
(My first attempt of writing intimacy hope so you like it finger crossed...dun be mad on me plejjj)
He was furious.He come dangerously close to her.
Maan:Geet mujhe nahe pata tha tum itna gir jao gi.Maan holding her tight :ahhh Geet what I am doing?Don't you like me?Don't worry i am your husband and You love me as you say so you don't have any problen in sleeping with me.
ahh what?Why are you staring me like this?Don't show your innocent face to me...Her lips are trembling and she is beyond shocked.She want to speak in her defence but her voice is stuck in her throat.Tears start welling from her eyes.He come more close to her she closes her eyes and tears coming out from her eyes.
She tried to defend her.
Geet:Maan...he slaped her bringing harshly close to her...
Maan:Geet apni gandi zuban se mera naam bhi lena.You bitch with that he close the distance and start kissing her.She pushed him which enraged him...S*** how dare you to push me and slap her again.And pushed her to bed.He harsly pull her dupata and houvered her.
Geet:No please no don't do this and continously saying he furstratedly slap her and tied her mouth.She keep weeping.
she again try to push him but in vain and in no time he tore her cloths.saying:
As soon as I am done with u i will give you divorce.She can't take this she is worried.Yes after his cruel and sinful act sheis worried she dun want divorce.
Geet st:Nahe Maan is zindagi ka ek hi khuwab tha ek hi dua ti rab se k tum se shadi ho.Meri dua qbool hui pr is traha s k mein mar gai per ab divorce nahe.She brought back when He bited her neck hard and she winced in pain
He was not kissing her but biting her harshly..while his hands were busy kneading her b***** harshly soon to be replaced by his teeth.Geet is not protesting now.She don't have any energy left but tear of pain, hummiltation and helplessness are flowing from her eyes.She was just writhing in pain.He didn't left any part of her body teething.From somewhere she tried last time her luck and try to push him but it enraged him and he pinned her hands breaking her bangles which pireced her wrist as without warning he pentrate her with hard thurst and keep thursting meanwhile she just fainted with the pain and she got consious by hitting her head to floor.
She was lying on floor when her muderer yes muderer because he brutally mudered her soul sleeping peacefully on bed she is bleeding but now she dosen't care.She try to get up but failed because of the pain she feeling but tried again and fainally got up. She dressed herself.She called Aleena and ask her to meet her near by cafe and start writing a letter.She put her phone with Maan collect one snap of his put it in her bag and see his face last time her eyes are dried and blank she is cold not feelng anything and accidently she took Maan's phone instead of hers as both phone are same model & her state of mind is not fine.
...End of Flashback...
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P.S: Thanks for wait friends and sorry for late update as after accident got busy with my exams than had apendix operation and now suffering from infection.😭I hope the update is long enough but update as soon I got time as I changed my whole story first I plan to run present & Past both together but now first I complete past in flashbacks than story progress...Thanks to dear 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6
soi di i dun knw your name.😕😲.Luv u and thanks for the support😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi , I am Sanghita Dey...loved Broken by love...plz add me...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

hi , I am Sanghita Dey...loved Broken by love...plz add me...😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
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weelcome back yaar..grrr i hate maan for giving sooo much of pain to geet..very sad part..pls cont soon..

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