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Jhakaas music

Hayeee maan hugged Geet .. soo dreamy

Finally unki love story started
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Lakshu, Priya
Mona Lily and Sona...🤗
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beautiful update dear
buddhu maan apne anger mein geet ka gift miss kar diya but finally he got his smile back and geet too😊
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Hi All...🤗



Lakshu, Priya...where r u..??

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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Jhakaas music

Hayeee maan hugged Geet .. soo dreamy

Finally unki love story started



Mona ... 😊
n thanks for motu ... 😆😆
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Aaj new names ku use ker rahi ho..??

hello

Lakshu...😛
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Updating...😊
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(For banner credit goes to Lakshmi ❤️ Thanku so much dear 😊 )

- Meredith Sapp


Prologue...


She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


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Part - 61




Geet went to office and Maan on his site office. Meera forced her for movie but she excused for that and promise her to meet in d mall after movie. Meera and Dev went and Geet reminded Maan to come on time at xyz mall and multiplex ,, on fixed time Maan was there waiting for Geet in front of mall. They entered and Geet called Meera to wait for them near lift.

In mall Dev and Meera came out after movie and going towards lift , but someone caught Dev's hand with a jerk ,,, he stopped with a sudden pull and looked back ,,, he got a shocked ,, there was she... Nayantaara ,, she was holding his wrist and looking at him with a smile and then her smile turned in to fury ,, Dev was holding Meera's hand with other his other hand. Meera too felt a pull and looked back and she was also in shock to see NT there ,, NT gave an angry glare to Dev and said in a complaining way..


NT: Dev tum yahanho ,, issi city mei aur na mujhse baat ki na hi milne aaye? Tumne last 3-4 months se mujhe phone tak nahi kiya ,, tumhara koi bhi contact number mere pass nahi ,, tumhara KC staff itna badtameez hai ki unhone tumhara contact number tak bhi nahi diya.


Dev was looking at her and d flashes of that night refreshed in his mind ,, NT jerk him to gain his attention ,, he threw an angry glare at her and try to free his hand from her hold , but she held that tightly and said..


NT: tum wapas aa gaye aur enjoy ker rahe ho,, aur mujhe ek call bhi nahi kiya ,, tum essa kaise ker sakty ho? ( now she was losing her temper and Meera's presence near him and their hand in hand going unbearable for her,, she looked at Meera angrily n spoke ) Oh!! Lagta hai issne apna game khel diya ,, tumhe apne jaal me fasane ka ,, aur tum bhi iss do kodi ke employee ki beti ke chakker mei aa gaye,, Jaroor issi ne tumhare dil mei mere against zahar bhara hoga ,, ye to kab se tumhe fasana chahati thi .


Maan and Geet were on their way to lift when they witnessed Dev and NT's conflict . Maan wanted to rush near Dev to support him. He became very angry looking NT there and how she was speaking to him ,, she was insulting Meera, but Geet stopped Maan holding his hand little away from them ,, people were passing looking at them ,, she was holding Dev's hand and speaking venomously against Meera. Maan looked at her confused and said..


Maan: Geet wo NT hai ,, tum nahi janti usne kya kiya hai ? wo Meera ki insult ker rahi hai ,, we have to go to support them.


Geet didn't look at him she was noticing Dev,Meera and NTand said in a low voice ,,


Geet : Meera needs Dev's support not yours . Let him stand for her and for him too. Let them face d reality ,, it'll decide their future and they need each other support not others.


Maan looked at her puzzled tried to understand her words ,, he looked at his hand which was still in her hold ,, he stood there besides her and looked at Dev's side who was looking very angry.


Dev jerk his hand forcefully and said: Mind ur language NT and not a single word for Meera. I very well knew who is who? I don't want ur teaching to know d people ,, Samjhi. Now leave my way and mind ur own business.


Dev's this blunt reply add fuel to her anger towards Meera ,, she started throwing her venomous anger over Meera.


NT: Tumne apni Aukaat dika di na ,, tumhe kai bar warn kiya tha na maine ki Dev ke pass matt aana ,, fir bhi tum ne aur tumhari ghatiya family ne Khurana ke bte ko fasane ka iraada nahi jhoda.


She turned to Dev and said ,,, Dev ye aur isski family tumhari money aur status ke liye tumhe fasana chahatey hai.


Meera lost her temper and raised her voice: Stay in ur limits NT,, dare u say any words against my family ,, we r much better than u. We never cheated people for money like u ,, who could stoop to any level for money and property.


NT turned furious listening this and lost her control over her ,, she raised her hand to slap Meera but Dev held that in mid ,, how dare u ?


Dev: Tumhari himmat kaise hui Meera per hath utane ki? Sochna bhi mat ,, Tumhe Ladki samajh ker kuch nahi kaha raha ,,, warna isska jawab abhi de deta ,,, Get lost from here.


NT was shocked over Dev's reaction ,, she never thought that he could go against her ,, Dev never went against her wish and she dominated him. Dev was her key to enter KM and then KC ,, her dream to rule KM and KC , her ambitions and her living like a queen depends upon Dev. She can go to any extend to get him back ,, she knew he is a very weak person and she could trap him easily.


NT: Dev how could u do this to me ? I m ur NT,, ur love. You can't go against me ,, u love me Dev( she touched Dev cheek with her hand showing her love,, fake love) Tum iss ordinary si ladki ke liye NT ko chod rahe ho ,, wo tumse pyaar nahi karti ,, mai karti hu ,, aur tum mujhse ,, ye tumhe apne jhootey pyaar mei fassa rahi hai Dev. Tum mere ho ,, sirf NT ke.


Dev : Accha !! aur tum kis-kis ki ho? Tumhara ye pavitra pyaar kahan-kahan batta hua hai? Tumhari list mei mera naam kis number per tha? Cut this crap NT ,, don't waste ur time here,, go and search another Richie Rich for u NT,, and don't cross my way ,, understood. Chalo Meer.


Dev held Meera's hand and went towards lift leaving a fuming and burning NT at her place. Geet steped back and dragged Maan outside d mall ,, she called Meera and told her to come out form mall describing her d landmark to meet there.


Maan was spellbound with all this happening ,, he never thought that Dev spoke like this. He was in misconception that if NT came in front of Dev,, he became weak and could do anything wrong or may be NT tired to trap him again with her fake love and dominating nature. Dev always behaved like a timid lover in front of NT, but today he faced her with that confidence he never witnessed in him. He liked it and felt proud for him.



You cannot run away from weakness; you must some time fight it out or perish; and if that be so, why not now, and where you stand?
R L Stevenson





Sorry for mistakes.

Part - 62
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