Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58 - Page 34

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Z

I read the first few chapters. It took time to grasp and even more time to express my thoughts.
The beauty and ease with which you have written them i am spell bound.

Z , i wish i had more command over this subject and could do justice with such flawless writings.

But before i start , you really write very well . *touch wood *
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Posted: 10 years ago
1. Nostonirh ( The Broken Nest )

Mr & Mrs. Khurana , The happiest couple in the world.
May be once upon a time it was. But now there seems visible cracks in their relationship.
While he got ready alone. The old memories making their way in to his thoughts.
He used to believe a lot of things.
But those days seem to be far off now.
His lovable wife for whom he could do things in a heartbeat had grown tiresome to him and ugly and stale.

She watched as he left. There wasn't a breakfast together or good bye kisses. While she drank the coffee alone.
But still it seemed she waited for him. For the regular normalcy to return.
But she couldn't wait much. For the coffee was turning cold and there was work to be done.
It looks like this was their new normal for months now.

As i read the chapter, all along there was a glimpse of the broken nest. In the way he thought about his wife. The rejected tie as if he rejected those good memories , in her lonliness, in not facing each other, in their losing themselves in work.
There was pain , bitterness , lonliness and the need to break free from the thread that bound them. A simple chapter packed with so much stuffs.
The birds of this nest surely are not the happiest couple in the world.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I think I missed to read the last two parts..
reading..

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Posted: 9 years ago
going to read this
i hope u continuing this ff
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Posted: 9 years ago
This story is still ongoing - I've just been horrible at keeping up with it. Bless you if you're still here, it means a lot. I really hope to do justice by you guys.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Is it Z with her cobalt blue stilletos?😆
Waiting waiting waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Missy !
When do you have your holidays ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
I thought I was looking in a mirror when I saw the final year owl! So tired but holidays start from now! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
good to hear this.
now waiting for updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wish you A Happy New Year !!!



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