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Posted: 11 years ago
again sirf like???

ki hoya??? kahaa ho???
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Posted: 11 years ago
yehle!!! meine sawaal poochne ka wait kar rahi thi kya??

updating status bhi aa gaya...

am waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago


Note:

guys many were confused about maan's feelings towards geet... firstly he used to look standing over there near the trees and now he claim to only have friendship toward her... what was all that???

I had mentioned in the part when maan came to know about geet's physical disability, he had mentioned that he was attracted toward her but when he came to know about her truth all that attraction left away and what was left was just the friendship he have for her... attraction is superficial and so is beauty, what is eternal is the real feelings.

And secondly you all were confused that how naintara know about geet???

Comeon guys wont a mother know who teaches her daughter. And waise bhi when naintara is so concerned about her daughter, its normal for her to know geet.

Part 9

Classes of mansi were going on very well, though geet was hired to concentrate on mansi's studies but most of the time they would end doing fun and playing games, but that doesn't mean geet would ignore her studies, its just her way of teaching was different. Even naintara was happy with the progress of mansi in her school, and over the time geet and naintara developed a nice bond too.

It was the month of dev and naintara's tenth anniversary and it was really a special day for everyone so a grand celebration was going to be held this month. Preparations had started with a boom and the entire responsibility was on maan.

A grand ball was being kept too for the couple and so everyone had to learn dance. it was evening and all the khuranas were collected in the hall when maan came with a girl. A tall lady in miny skirt and tank top, wearing high stilettos and a high pony stood in front of them with smoky makeup. "hello everyone I am nikita" she introduced herself. "dadi she is my friend and a choreographer, maine ball dance ke liye bulaya hai" maan explained.

All were instantly impressed with her, the girl possessed a class and aura which could catch anyone's eye. She instantly gelled with the family and started of the practice. "dadi geet kha hai" maan asked as he left them to practice alone.

"ahh must be in mansi's room bte, check there", dadima said, knowing how much maan adored their friendship. Since it was anniversary of dev-naintara, mansi also had to prepare something for her parents and geet had the responsibility of preparing mansi. So they were going to prepare a song dedicated to their parents and geet was trying to make mansi sing.

As maan reached first floor, geet's melodious voice filled his ears. Oh he just loved her voice, she sings so beautifully, he thought and made a dash to mansi's room to not miss the performance. He went and sat on the bed crossing his legs, while mansi and geet sat on windowsill as geet sang.

Geet immediately got conscious seeing him while he didn't even noticed her reaction to his presence. As she sang, he took out his mobile and started recording her voice, while she didn't even knew he was doing that.

"mansi now you sing" geet said as she finished first stanza of song. Mansi nodded and tried to sing but then always ended singing out of tune. "mansi kya kar rhe ho aap, take a high note baby or it won't come out good" mansi again tried and failed. Maan just laughed at her making her more sad. Feeling bad, mansi sat down disappointed and cupped her cheeks.

"maan you go away, pareshan mat karo" geet said as she threw a pillow on him which he successfully dodged. "what!!! Maine kya kia" "you are distracting my baby" geet said and hugged mansi by neck and kissed her hair. "yeah yeah your baby, don't forget just a month before she was my baby, but you stole her from me" maan said faking a pout making mansi and geet both roll their eyes at his daily act.

"accha accha, how about I sing and tell mansi" maan asked excitedly. Geet and mansi looked at each other shocked and then at him, "chachu you can sing??" asked mansi excitedly. "of course, I had won many awards in childhood" he said proudly.

Geet and mansi nodded and waited for him to start. He loudly cleared his throat and started keeping a hand on his ear and stretching his other hand as if taking a high note. He started his singing and with his every word, geet and mansi had to keep their hands on their mouth to stop their laugh. But finally their ache increased and they burst out laughing making maan shock.

"what was in it to laugh" maan asked keeping his hand on his hips. "umm, no nothing, everythings is good" geet said trying to control her laugh. "mansi you understood na what your chahu taught, apko pata hai na you don't have to do what all your chachu did for effective singing" geet said giving a high-five to mansi while maan just pouted seeing them making fun of him.

"yeah yeah I understood... you all were making fun of me" he said and said, "I am going down, mujhe dance dekhna hai" "dance" mansi said excitedly and jumped from her place and said "am coming too". The trio moved down to see how all were doing.

Geet went and sat beside naintara who looked very furious. "kya hua bhabhi, why are you so angry" geet asked. Naintara looked at her and then pointed toward dev who was dancing with nikita. Geet just shrugged her shoulders not understanding anything. "did you saw how that nikita was holding my dev, maan ko bhi yhi mili thi out of all people to teach dance, koi male choreographer nhi la sakkta tha"

"I didn't understand problem kya hai, nikita or dev bhai holding nikita" geet said confused. "geet you don't understand, let just wait for your hubby then you will understand my anger... I just feel possessive and that is why I am angry on her"

"but you love bhai and you know he loves you too, phir yeh jealousy kyu"

"geet you don't get jealous when you don't trust that person, I am jealous because I just hate it when some other person come close to him, yeh mera haq hai, and it also shows ki I value him in my life... jiski value nhi hoti uske hone na hone se fark nhi padta"

After some time, dev left nikita and took naintara with him. Since nikita was standing alone, she went towards maan and asked him for dance. He happily agreed and took her hand in his. His hands wrapped around her waist and she took hold of his hand. They moved softly on the song, as she taught his moves.

All the while maan was happily enjoying the dance and was laughing and they were sharing jokes. But what he was unaware of that a pair of eyes that were looking at him in pain. She had for the first time seen him with someone else, seen him laughing like that with someone else. Of course she knew he wasn't like her, alone, he had a lot bunch of friends with him, but for her it was only he, and till today she didn't realized she had grown possessive of him.

And geet could actually hear naintara's word buzzing her ears at the moment, "it also shows ki I value him in my life... jiski value nhi hoti uske hone na hone se fark nhi padta" yeah she values him a lot and she is scared to lose him. Na jane kitne sadiyo baat kisi ne aj hasaya tha, phir wo aasuo ka yarana bardasht nhi hota.

Seeing maan's hand wrapped around her waist, she felt suffocated, it shouldn't matter right, but it mattered a lot. Maan was happily dancing when his eyes fell on geet who was sitting lost. He looked around for others but all were busy in one another leaving her all alone. He wondered why she is sad and stopped their dance for a moment.

He went near geet and held his hand in front of her and asked, "can I have a dance with the lady'. Geet came out of her dream hearing his voice and looked at him shocked as she saw his stretched hand.

Her forehead cringed as she hated to refuse him of that, but she can't dance, when she cant even move properly with the crutches dancing was a faraway thought. But before she could say a word, she heard nikita interrupt, "maan you must be kidding right, I mean how this girl can dance with those ugly crutches... handicaps cant dance maan" said nikita. Nikita's words were daggers to geet's heart. I mean yeah she was handicap but doesn't she knew that, saying that on her face was brutal for her.

Geet just looked down and stood up and excused herself and went inside, back to mansi's room. Maan just looked at nikita in anger and went inside too... he could have really said anything bad to nikita if she wouldn't have been old friend. She was his friend, so what she has problems but she was perfect in her own way.

When he reached mansi's room, he saw geet sitting on the same window sill, but this time her eyes were looking endlessly at sky, as if she was talking with god at that moment, probably complaining him. He didn't liked her like that, he had seen her anger, her naughtiness, her bubbliness and loneliness too, but her sadness he hadn't seen neither he wished to see it again.

He thought ways to give her sympathy, to tell her everything is ok, but then dropped the plan... there was no sympathy needed for geet. The girl had a strong determination which needs to be praised nor shown pity. He thought of something else and then took out his cell and searched through his song list for some nice song.

Please listen the song while reading...

Its from Movie Pardes, do dil mil rhe hai

Song

Connecting his cell with the music system in room, he started playing the song. Geet got alerted as she heard the song. She looked at him and immediately wiped away her tears. He felt his heart was crying seeing those tear drops, but then dropped away the thought. He again went toward her and said, "can I have the chance to dance with the lady". Geet gave him a "duh" look, confused with his act.

He simply ignored her look and took her hand in his and pulled her with force making her stand on her legs. She immediately stumbled losing her balance falling on him but he held her in his embrace taking her weight on him. "I cant dance maan" she said trying to remove his hand as tear filled her eyes because of her disability.

"of course you can, bas thoda sa effort to karo rest I can handle".

"maan please Mazak nhi... mujhe aise Mazak pasand nhi"

"keep your arms around my neck tightly" she tried to just remove his hand around her but he was adamant like a kid. Feeling lost, she kept her arms around his neck while he held her waist tightly moving her around in a soft move on the tune.

She was just looking in his eyes, enjoying the closeness. It was so new for her, no man had ever touched her before neither she let any one be this close, but all her inhibitions dies when he is in question.

"now see you are dancing too" he said victoriously.

"not dancing, you are just pulling me with you... I am literally straining your neck precisely with my weight" she replied making him roll his eyes.

"yeah madam I am always right' but sometimes you know I don't mind such strains" he said making a face. "but why didn't you broke her face when she said that to you, mujhpe to itna gussa dikhati ho aur wha sabke samne bhigi billi ban ke bhag ayi"

"she was saying truth only na... mai hu handicap..." her words died with his palm over her mouth. "shhh... Chup bakwas mat karo... jaisi bhi ho bahut acchi ho" she just kept looking at him while he just smiled swirling her on his tunes.

He was lying on his bed at night and was just going through pictures in his smart phone when geet's picture from earlier came. He played her every picture, her innocence was so eye catching, but he understood till now it was all superficial. She wasn't innocent but was matured, she had seen things which he hadn't, though she never says but he knew each day she had to cope up with people's eyes which would be stuck on her as if she is an alien, their taunts and comments but she takes them all without a single complain.

Then his eyes feel on the video of her voice which he made. He immediately plugged on his earphones and started hearing her melodious voice. It was so soft and serene, as if taking his entire tension away.

He closed his eyes and remembered today's scene, their dance... Yeah it wasn't the best dance he had, but it was special. May be for the first time in his life he wasn't dancing to flirt with a girl, but he really wanted to dance... to enjoy and only she be able to make him enjoy his heartfelt. Yeah she was different he concluded, she was beautiful, smart, innocent, courageous and a true person in this immoral world, she was his best friend...!!!

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Edited by neha512 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

main tho first aayi hoon

geet and maansi preparing song for dev and naintaras anniversary and maan brought a choreographer to teach dance
maan's latoo over geet's voice and he recorded her voice

first time geet feeling jealous and that nikitha😡😡uski yeh himmat geet ko aise bolne ki maan chup rahe ek tappad dena chahiye tha.

maneet moments and their dance lovely.

i think slowly maan is realising how geet is filling his heart with happiness hope he realises his feelings

Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

am second😃

geet is falling in love with maan more and more ... her feeling jealous was cute...

maan-geet- maansi scene was super cute... his cribbing that maansi is not his after geets arrival was chweet...

the lady nikitha is nuts... she made geet cry... but happy with maans lil effort to bring a smile on her face!!!! but loved more how he didnt shown any sympathy to her but understood what she was facing and also that she doesnt need sympathy but his freindship... his presence is enough to ring magic around her now

attraction se freinship and now best friends... looking forward for this journey to continue more towards the the next level... love😳
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan is still stuck on Best friend part
Grrr
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update ..loved it
Loved the way maan support geet not wid sympathy but wid courage n true friend way
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update

Its painful to see Geet being like tat bt she is strong and have learnt to be

An loved the very fact tat Maan did not say anything to nikita as it would be like he was taking her side as she cant defend for herself but geet can and she will stand

and than Maan giving her those few moment of happiness somewhere it changed something in his heart
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it
Geet jealous
Nikita insulted her
Made made her dance
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update especially da special dance

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