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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512


ha yaar...

mai bhut busy hu nd remember i told u i have some another concept in mind too...

mere ko bhut bug kar rha hai...



issi flow ki tarah bahar laado😉hamare liye😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



issi flow ki tarah bahar laado😉hamare liye😆


yaar suggest some name please...

mere ko us ff ka naam samaj nhi aa rha
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512


ha yaar...

mai bhut busy hu nd remember i told u i have some another concept in mind too...

mere ko bhut bug kar rha hai...



padne ke liye hum bekaraar hain aur likhne ke liye tum... then what r u waiting for???
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Posted: 11 years ago


Part 10

Maan was roaming restlessly in his room. He dialed her number again, but she again rejected his call. "geet just pick the damn phone" he said hitting his fist in anger on the wall. He again dialed but it was again rejected and after few trials it came switched off. why is she not picking my phone, hua kya hai use... subah se am trying... ab to had paar hai!!!"

He was just tying his tie when he heard dadima's voice, "maan bte, are you ready?"

"ha dadima nearly... kya hua why are you so tensed"

"maan ye mansi na... itni ziddi ho gyi hai hum kya khe apko..."

"kya hua dadima... tell me..."

"since an hour I am trying to get her ready but you see her tantrums... sabhi servants ko pareshan kar rakha hai.. ye aise nhi wo waise nhi... and naintara bhi parlour me hai and I don't want to disturb her and ye geet bhi nhi ayi aj... now she is saying ki geet se hi tayyar hogi..."

"but dadima geet yha nhi hai"

"whi to I am saying... aap jakar use samjhaiye and please get her ready and yeah ask geet if she can come today at party, it will be great and mansi would calm down too"

"ji dadima"

After maan finally got mansi ready in her pink dress, she refused to come down. "now why are you showing tantrums??" he asked agitated.

"geet didi chahiye, mansi ko dar lag rha hai" said mansi bringing tears in her eyes. Maan calmed down seeing the little kid so tensed and asked sweetly, "why my baby is so tensed... mujhe batao"

"mansi inne sare uncle-aunty ke samne nhi sing karegi... wo hasenge"

"baby it won't happen... no one will laugh on you when chachu is there" he said taking her in his arms.

"geet didi ko bulao" she again said stubbornly. Maan sighed understanding mansi's hesitation. After sending her to dadima, he again tried to call geet, but it came switched off. She wasn't the one to keep her cell off; neither had she ignored his call. How much ever he tried to ignore the fact but still his heart wasn't calm. His heart was restless and he didn't understand why her such simple act was making him so tense.

He drank a glass of mocktail to calm his senses but feeling real restless, he tried her landline number. After few rings he heard a female voice. He knew it wasn't geet, so assumed it to be suhana. "can I please talk to geet" he asked politely.

Suhana immediately got shocked recognizing it to be maan's voice. "mai maan bol rha hu, geet's friend" he cleared hearing no response from other side. "umm maan, geet can't talk to you right now, please call sometime later" suhana said after a moment of silence. "kya hua use" he asked really worried now. "nothing maan ji, just she is not well. Please call tomorrow" suhana disconnected the call not letting him complete.

And the very next second, maan took car keys from drawer and ran out leaving the lavish party of his brother's anniversary. Even dadima tried to ask why he is going like this, but he made some excuse, he just knew he has to go and see her, itna betaab kyu tha wo shayad wo bhi nhi janta tha. Just something was wrong he knew that.

He rang the doorbell of handa house and after few minutes a lady opened the door whom he recognized to be suhana. "suhana dii mai maan, remember we met at McDonalds that day." "and you called even few minutes back right" "umm yeah, can I please see geet" he said rubbing his forehead feeling foolish with the gaze of suhana.

"maan am sorry but I said geet is not well, I don't think it's the perfect time to meet her and its late too, I can't allow you to meet her now" said suhana stubbornly.

"I know dii its late but its really urgent for me to talk to geet now. Please just few minutes can I meet her" he was literally pleading her to allow him.

Taking a sigh, suhana nodded, "but just ten minutes"

When maan stepped in her room, as shown by suhana, he heard her sobbing sound. He immediately knew he was right and there was something wrong with her. The room was dark and he could see a faint figure laying on bed with her back facing him. He looked around for light switch and immediately opened the bright light making geet aware of his presence.

She looked at him for a moment and immediately turned away her face, wiping off her hazels away of those pearls. He didn't say anything just went and sat beside her and looked at her angrily. After clearing her choked throat, she said, "ahh tum yha is waqt... kuch kaam tha" she felt she said it determinately but he could hear the crack in her voice.

"why were you disconnecting my calls from morning" he asked straightly.

"umm nhi, wo my cell was discharged to switch off ho gya" she said looking away.

"geet you still can't lie to me so don't try" he said folding his hand on his chest.

Geet just looked away not wanting to argue with him at the moment. Maan followed her gaze and actually saw a change in her clothing. She was in a peach coloured saree with a heavy border. The saree was basically plain but it complimented her fair skin. He took the pallu of her saree that was lying near him and "geet saree, bhut pyari lag rhi ho" he caressed the satin cloth of saree.

Tears again formed in her eyes as she looked away sobbing, "don't lie, I know I can never look beautiful with these" she said pointing her crutches that were lying on the side. Maan sensed something as seriously wrong with her, she never cried easily. He held her by shoulders and made her look at him. Then he seriously looked into her eyes and asked, "mujhe batao kya hua hai aj, and I want to know every damn thing"

She just pushed his hand away and said, "kuch nhi hua hai just leave me alone" geet was so much hurt today, kash she could explain him but then she doesn't want his or anybody's pity. Maan just didn't knew why she was affecting him so much. He knew she was his best friend shayad isiliye, he wondered.

"geet I only have ten minutes, two minutes had already been wasted, jaldi bolo you can take photage later" he said threading his hair with his fingers. "huh!!!" geet looked at him confused. "your dii granted me ten minutes only baba, jaldii bolo or I will be thrown out of your house"

"maan kuch nhi hua hai... really I want to stay alone" geet said taking a sigh.

"seven minutes left"

"maan!!!" geet looked at him irritated now. Here she was so depressed and he was being a timer watch.

"geet six minutes and forty seconds left"

Geet just closed her eyes knowing he will just not leave until he knows everything and finally blurted out the truth. "ladke wale dekhne aye the mujhe"

Maan immediately turned stiff as he heard about her rishta. His heart felt pinched hearing that and he just knew it can't be truth. Somehow finding his voice he asked, "so kya hua"

"kuch nhi like always, they rejected me because of them... I just don't know why they even come when they already knew I have crutches, sochte hai jakar dekh ate hai bechari ko phir mana kar denge... could you believe in last four years around twelve boys had came to see me and rejected me, earlier they used to say I have critches, ab kehte hai ek to chal nhi sakti upar se umar bhi jyada hai... you tell me was that my fault that I was born with imperfect limbs... am just fed up of all these now"said geet as she pulled her hairs.

Maan just sat there stiff, her each word was like a needle on his heart. he had never thought she could have faced so many things in her life. Yeah he knew she has crutches but he never considered it such a big deal as it seemed now, and those spineless boys, he just wanted to kill them if possible. She was crying in front of him and he just wanted to hug her tightly, take her in his arms and wipe her tears. He wanted to protect her of anything and everything that could hurt her.

Maan was just thinking of ways that could bring a smile on her face while geet realized what all she said in her anger and regretted it the very moment. She never wanted to say all that to him, no never. He was about to say something when she interrupted, "maan please I don't want your pity or sympathy. My life had always been a mess but it doesn't mean I want to have pity from others. Could we just forget all that I said??' she said looking down in shame of losing her control.

He just hated the way she was talking then, he never wanted her to be so sab and emotional. Then thinking something, he took out his tie and forwarded her. She looked at him shocked and then at the tie in his hand. "wo your mascara is flowing and your nose is red too, clean kar lo" he said giving her tie. She looked at him appalled and asked, "tie se???"

"ha wo I forgot to bring handkerchief and my gentleman image says kuch to dena hai to ye le lo and saaf kar ke wapas karna" he said making a yuck face. Geet looked at him still for a moment but then realizing his efforts of making her laugh, a smile touched her lips and finally she started laughing. She threw his tie back on his face and said, "no thank you, you keep it with yourself, I can manage" he just shrugged his shoulder and kept it in his pockets.

She just shook her head at his antics and actually felt light for a moment. After a minute he said, "geet why don't you take leave for few days, go and enjoy with your friends I am sure you will feel happy" he said seriously.

She looked at him and shook her head and said, "friends!!!" she gave him a flat smile and said, "I never had friends maan, apart from you, no one I have as friend" she was so serious that it gave him goosebumps. His life was filled with people, family to love, friends to enjoy, girls to flirt, but hers was so empty, gosh he can't even think how it would be for him to live like that.

"koi na geet, hum bhi koi bure nhi waqt guzarne ke liye... aur waise bhi mere dost kehte hai ki mai bhut accha friend hu" he said giving her a cheeky smile and then saw the time on watch, it was actually half an hour since he came.

Sighing he said, "geet bro ki party hai and I have to be there, so may I leave you madam but please phone on karo' after ensuring she switched on her phone he stood up and moved toward door. Then turning around he said, "umm waise rs. 100 milenge mujhe kya" he said ruffling his hair.

"huh!!!"

"wo car is out of fuel and tumhare chakkar me I forgot my wallet... either you give me money warna mujhe walk kar ke hi ghar jana padega" he said embarrassed.

Geet stood up shaking her head at his stupidiness, he can really never grow up, she thought and moved toward her wardrobe to take out money. Whole time, maan's eyes were fixed on her. She looked beautiful in that saree would be an understatement for him. She looked nothing less than an angel, yeah there were crutches but it didn't mattered much. And that peeking white waist as she moved, his eyes would involuntarily travel there. Which man could resist such temptation, he wondered. But then shook his head thinking its geet, not those girls with whom he flirted.

After geet handed him money he seriously asked, "please come with me in that party, sabko accha lagega" "maan I can't" geet said looking away. Just few hours back she was embarrassed and it wasn't easy to face people again, she need time to build her confidence.

Maan held her hand and looked in her eyes in a request, he was asking her through eyes while geet just looked down. He understood her hesitance and left her hand and turned away. But then again turned and placed a quick peck on her forehead and said, "I was serious when I said pyari lag rhi ho" and with that ran away... leaving her baffled, shocked, hesitant and smiling at the same moment.

No one noticed that someone was standing near by hearing their entire conversation. Suhana had came when ten minutes were over but then heard geet confessing herself in front of him. She knew that it was for the first time when geet opened herself to someone else and stopped not wanting to close her shell again. she even waited for maan to show sympathy but he simply just heard without any word, because he knew no word can make her calm down at that moment. Kya samajh thi dono ke bich, in sabse anjan thi suhana, par ek rishte ki jhalak to nazar aa hi gyi use.

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update. loved it.👍🏼
Edited by fict - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
grt pt
she hates pity sympathy
maan make her mod light
nxt conti
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Posted: 11 years ago
emotional update poor geet she has been through so much because of loved how maan got angry at the mention of what those guy did to hurt her very emotional update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing part..actually I was waiting for ur update.
Next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful yaar.. rola diya na mujhe.. there r soo many girls that have crutches yet they still fall in love and get married.. suhana ne bilkul sahi socha.. i just hope maan realizes his love soon.. cont soon hun
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful part 👍🏼
Maan too good 😊

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