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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi dear! thawt to look if u updated! n u did update! Thanks 4 da fab emotional update! Beautifully written! Maaneet meet after so long! Maan overwhelmed n hugs her! Media r shocked! Maan propses n she accpts! MAan announces that hey r engaged! Media wanna 2 question him bt he takes a nervous Geet away! Wt a proposal! Maan getting award! Anotehr surpise! Geet gonna presnet it to him! update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maan's proposal...
so romantic...
Geet most successfulll woman...🤗
Beautifull part,...
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 7

H: So here to present this awards may we call upon the most successful women who works in the foreign branch of KC...
Meanwhile Maan was confused as to who this women is...who is successful and I don't know her name...and she works in the foreign branch of my own company.
H: She is none other than would-be Mrs Maan Singh Khurana, the manager of foreign projects in London and America.
First Geet was reluctant to come as the event organisers had replace some else's name in exchange for her. After all now she is more popular then the person who was first giving the award.
Here Maan was a bit confused to hear her name but later his confusion turned into happiness when he thought that he will be awarded by is ladylove.
After a few moments she saw Maan walking down the stage towards her and stood in front of her.
M: Geet won't you give me the award.
G: Um Maan how can I come in this situation. Look at my clothes. I am not even dressed formally.
But Maan paid no heed and bought her on the stage. The host gave her the award to present it to him
Geet gave the award to him and as she was about to move her hand Maan grasped it.
M: Geet this is your success.
Maan went on the dice to say a few words.
M: Ladies and Gentlemen. Good Evening!Today I am standing in this hall only because of my Lady Love. They say behind every successful man there is a woman! She was the who provoked me to go these heights. So I dedicate this award to her.
Every one clapped and Geet smiled.
Later several photographs were taken and both were happy which cannot be described in words. While the reporters were taking their pictures. Maan slightly moved his lips towards her ears and whispered.
M: Geet we have to move out. I have to talk to you.
Here Maan started walking towards the exit taking Geet along with him. The guards started shielding them from the media. He asked the driver for the keys and both sat in the car and drove away. Maan called his securities that they don't have to follow them. There drive was in silence. They were glancing at each other and were smiling. No one had words to voice their feeling.
Maan stopped the car in front of the beach. He opened his door and moved to the other door where Geet was sitting and opened the door. He put forward his hand to take hers. Later he locked his car and both of them started walking side by side on the sand taking in the pleasant breeze. After moving away a little far from the car, Geet opened her sandals and started walking barefoot. Looking at Geet like this maan also removed his shoes.
G: Maan its soo good be back to your homeland. I missed this beach so much.
She was so excited today. And even Maan was smiling at her childish antics like throwing water on him, trying to make sand castles... as this was the side of her that he only knew. And he was thankful that he knew or else he wouldn't know that she was a pearl hidden in the shell.
M: Geet I waited for you so much. I wanted to ask you sorry for what I said at the prom night but I couldn't find you and then I heard that you left for Greece.
G: Maan I didn't have the courage to face you after I said so much. Though I knew that you would be successful. But don't worry I am well aware of your achievements. I used to search every day for your new ventures and deals. And then this year when I came to know that you are nominated for the third time. I could not stop myself so I came back. This time I was assured that even if you didn't win this award but still you will be the best businessman.
M: then if you had so much faith than why didn't you come early. You knew my weakness ...it was you my friend...I did it for you.
Geet was silent and din't reply.
M: Any ways forget. Now we are together and now I don't want to look at past.
Maan in order to make the atmosphere a little lighter after a pause said.
M: Geet where are you working???The host said something about it but I didn't hear it.
Though Maan knew everything by now because on his way he had texted Karan his right hand to find everything about Geet Handa...at which post she is working??? Where she is working etc.. When he was moving towards her from the stage.
Then he got the call in between the function and Karan told him everything about her.
Karan: Sir Geet Handa joined KC firm about 1 year back. She is the manager of KC branch and handles all the foreign projects. She is a very matured women and takes decisions very wisely and many times her decisions have prevented KC from losses. Sir she does not report to you directly but sir you have spoken to her many times.
Then Maan remembered that she was the one who used to show him so much attitude.
Flash back
Maan was handling the business well these days but this was still not enough for him he needed to take Khurana Constructions to its highest peak. KC has got many projects these days, because almost all the designs were unique. 3 important projects were taking place in KC's branch of India where currently Maan was working. And in London's Branch of KC there were currently 4 important projects going on. For Maan all these projects were important but he could not leave the three projects and go to London to see the other four projects. That would risk his own projects in India.
M: Argh!! What will I do now? I have to complete these three projects and also those 4 in London. This is very important for KC. I also need to keep in touch with the other projects and see their progress.
Maan decided to keep in touch through voice calls.
Maan called her now. (Voice call)
M: Can you transfer the call to the manager of projects in London.
The receptionist transferred the call. Here Geet picked up the call.
M: Hello. This is Maan Singh Khuranna speaking. I wanted to ask that how is the progress of on-going projects.
G: (there was a little pause) umm Sir ..ummm
M: Hello!!! Are you there???? Why are you stammering????
G: Sorry Sir!!! Actually the blueprints for the 6 avenue and & avenue are ready. I have posted you them and waiting for your approval. And the bridge, the team is working on it. And the mall...the construction is about to finish Sir.
Maan was listening to her and felt her voice very familiar.
M: Your voice is very familiar? Have we met?
Geet was little scared. She felt that Maan has recognised her voice but soon regained her composure and decided to tick him off so he wouldn't think more about her voice.
G: Oh Stop that nonsense Mr Khuranna. I think you should maintain a professional profile with your employees. I would like to suggest that to keep your flirtish sentences with you since they would not work with me.
Maan was a little taken aback. It's just that he asked her a simple question and why is she giving so much attitude.
M:Stop right now. Ms whoever you are. Don't give any attitude. You are working under me. I am not working under you. So stay in you limits. Just tell me about the projects.
Geet had made him angry so that he doesn't focus on her voice. Because if he did, then he will surely recognise her.
Soon the call ended.
FlashBack Ends

Thank-you everyone for commenting and liking the post! I have started a new ff too that is Sunrise-The beginning of hope...please give it a try too. Keep commenting and liking and I will update soon.. 😉

Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da splendid update! Beautifully written! Maan receives award frm her! His is happy! Maan takes her away! Maan asks her where she wrks bt he kns as he made calls! She wrks 4 KC! FB well incorporated! Maan spoke to her bt she deliberatedly fights wid him so he does nt recognise her voice! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Will be updating the last part soon!
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Thankyou so much for commenting and liking.Here is the last part and please ignore any mistakes!

Part 8

Here he had started moving towards her. Geet showed a little reluctance but she knew that now she can't back out and she has to answer Maan.
G: Maan ummm...ummm. Maan I am working in London.
M: I want the name of the organization. I know that you are working in London.
G: Maan you bought me here to ask this than I am going.
She started walking back to the car but Maan stopped her by putting his hands on her shoulder.
M: Geet why didn't you tell me that you are working in KC? I talked to you so many times but still you didn't tell me. Didn't you feel the need?
G: Maan if I had told you than you would have not reached these heights that you have reached till now...you would have left everything on the spot and would have come to London not taking care of anything.And as far as the voice call is concerned, now I am in front of you, you can give me any punishment.
After a pause Geet added..
G: But Maan please don't give any harsh punishment.
M: Why Geet. You're scared. I will give you the hardest punishment and that you will have to face the wrath, anger, love care, attitude of your dear Maan.
G: I accept your punishment, but on one condition. You have to tell me that where did you get this ring from??? Are you keeping it for the past 3 years in your pocket?
M: Umm yeah (a little embarrassed) It might sound stupid...I don't know I just knew that one day you'll appear out of nowhere and then I could propose you right at the spot and then you won't go away.
G: That's actually very romantic! Not bad for MSK. But this is not the answer of my question.
M: Geet actually this ring is very special to me. There was a jewel exhibition in Africa in my early years when I was struggling to make KC No.1 Company. This I bought from my first salary when I went there. When I saw this ring I knew that this is for your delicate fingers.
Maan smirked and said.
G: How Sweet!!!
M: So where was I...Yeah!!!...The Dare...
G: Umm... Maan (a little reluctant to her the dare as she knew that now she can not escape.)
M:Well that's very unlikely of Geet to run away from a dare.
Geet made a cute face
M: That won't work Darling! Now your dare is that tonight there is a latin dance night at La Bella restaurant and I want you to be my date there. There will be food and the best part dancing. (Maan smiled) Remember Geet that was my first ever dare to you. Well this time we'll do couple dancing.
G: Ahhh...
G (ST): What... I thought that he will give some very tough dare that I would not be able to do...
M: Geet where are you lost???
G:No where Maan...
M: Ok then where are you staying. We will pick your stuff and you are moving to my house.
G: Maan I was staying with my friend's uncle and aunty.
They both drive to her friends place and picked her stuff and reached Maan's Mansion.
Maan took Geet's luggage and came inside.
Geet was awestruck by the beauty of the mansion when she entered the gates. There was a garden with all the colourful flowers with a fountain in the middle and some benches were there for sitting. The voice of the water was too pleasant for her ears. When she entered in the house. The Mansion was well sculptured with huge vases in the corners.. Huge paintings on the wall by the famous painters. On the whole the mansion was simple yet classy. It was as if she entered a palace where she is the princess.
Maan bought her out of her thoughts.
M: Nakul...Where are you???
Nakul came running.
N: Yes Sir.
M: Keep Madame luggage in the guest room. Take her with you and I am coming.
N: Ok Sir.
Maan went to his room.
N: Come Madame.
Geet started following him and entered the room. Here again she was awestruck. The guest room was so beautiful yet elegantly decorated.
G: Thank you Nakul.
N: Madame if you want anything just call me through the intercom. The contact number is on the phone itself.
And nakul went from there.
Maan came after a few moments and knocked the door. Geet opened it. Maan had a packet in his hand which he hide from her. He then entered.
M: Are you comfortable here?
G: Maan your house is very nice. I feel like I am in heaven.
Maan didn't reply. He just was seeing her smile after so many years and promised that he would try to bestow her will all the happiness.
A little later Geet just closed her mouth and Maan didn't like that as her voice was the music to his heart.
M: Geet what happened??
G: Maan wo... actually Maan...ummm
M: Geet what happened tell me??? Is there any problem??
G: Umm Maan you said that we are going somewhere but I don't have anything formal to wear. I came in so much hurry that I couldn't...
As soon Geet asked him that he gave a packet to her and said
M: wear this. I am waiting for you outside.
Maan went outside and closed the door. Geet opened the packet and a very graceful off-shoulder flowy gown with embellishments on the top and plane at the bottom, rich off-white colour came into her sight. The packet also contained matching diamond jewellery and stilettoes.
Geet dressed in the dress and when Maan looked at her he was mesmerised.
Her hair was up done with minimal makeup, and a clutch in her one hand and was picking the gown with the other. She was looking no less than a princess.
Here Maan also changed in a black tuxedo and was looking extremely handsome.
M: You are looking beautiful Miss Handa!
G: You too are looking extremely handsome Mr. Khuranna. I wonder how many girls will die today.
Maan laughed at that.
Both reached towards the car and asked the driver to drive.
The drive was silent. It was as if the silence was speaking an unknown language that only they could understand.
They reached their destination and Maan first came out and then offered his hand for Geet to come out.
When Geet came out she became a bit conscious her hand started sweating. Maan knew that this was his sweet innocent angel who from outside was all in the lioness avatar but from inside she was nave just like an innocent child.
Maan put his hand on the small of her back and started moving forward. This act made Geet a bit confident and then they entered the hall.
There were many couples there. And then Maan spotted his friend Adi.
M: Hey Adi! How are you? Its been a long time...
A: Yeah Maan really long time.
M: So who did u came with??
A: Oh..I came with Pinky
Geet as soon as heard Pinky's name exclaimed
G: PINKY!!! Really where is she?
A: Oh she is on the table.
Geet dragged Maan with her towards Pinky.
G: Pinky!!!!
Pinky turned towards the sound and she her very best friends standing with...MAAN!!!!!. At this point Pinky made a confused face. Geet came towards her and gave her a bone crushing hug.
G: Oh My God I can't believe it's you! It's been so long and after u shifted back to India we lost contact.
P: Yeah we did... but all is well now...Congrats to you...finally you both met after a gap of 5 years. Some where me adi knew that you two will meet.
G: Yeah destiny made us meet.
M: Ok girls...you can do your blabbering afterwards. By the was Geet have you forgotten something.
G: Oh yeah (mere whisper)
G: Maan r u really serious about this.
M: Yes Geet. Now will you...
Geet was lost in the thoughts that after that day she had not danced and she had forgotten a few steps.
M: Ok guys we are moving to the dance floor will you excuse us.
P and A: Yeah why not. Sure me and pinky are going to have soft dinks. Will meet you after wards.
Geets hands were sweating and when Maan took her hands in his in order to take her to the dance floor, he got the idea for geet's reluctance.
M: Do you trust me! If yes than I won't let you down to fulfil your dare.
They started dancing and after a few moments Geet started dancing as she has been doing all these long years.
They were looking an adorable couple. Everyone admired them and in the end only both of these were dancing and the hall clapped for a wonderful performance that they gave. Later they spent a hours talking to their best friends and later got to know that Adi and Pinky had got married about a year ago. Later both the couples bid good bye and moved to their houses.
On their way..
M: there is one more surprise left.
G: Maan how many surprises will you give. You know that I am really tired.. it has been a long hectic day for me.
Maan did not reply.
Soon they reached the mansion and Maan asked Geet to come to the terrace after changing her clothes so that she becomes comfortable.
Maan makes coffee for both of them and moves to the terrace. The terrace was adjoined to his study and the study was adjoined with his room. The teraace had plants at the side with a swing at one side and a coffee table where he had kept a few papers and a pen.
In the mean time Geet also came there. She was in her night suit with tweety trousers and and plain yellow shirt. She was looking extremely adorable.
M: Geet come.
Geet sat down on the swing and Maan bought the papers in front of her.
M: Geet can you sign these.
Geet started signing the papers without even reading.
M: Geet stop...atleast read them. You know it's a bad habit to sign papers without reading.
G: Maan you have read them na.
M: Yes
G: then...why should I read them.
Geet signed them all and Maan offered her coffee. While she was taking the first sip Maan thought of having some fun.
M: Geet you know these papers are related to KC.
G: So.
M: Geet you have resigned from your job in London.
G: (shocked) Why Maan. Why did you do this. I was so happy with my job. How can you do this without even telling me. You know I was on a very important project. My khurus boss will not leave me now. I had to leave tomorrow. Maan how can you do this. If it is not finished then KC's position will be on the stake.
M:Geet... Geet. ( Now she has started and now she won't stop)
M: Chup bilkul Chup. Can't you hear what I have to say.
G: No. Maan you don't understand...
M: Geet ok can you read these papers for once. For me..
G:...(started reading the papers reluctantly)
G:these are ...
M: Yes stop assuming things from your own.
G: it says that I will be heading this new venture of yours.. related to interior designing.
M: Geet how can I forget that it was your aim to establish your company. Look I just wanted to give you the platform to demonstrate your skills. I knew this was your dream and I am only giving you a helping hand in it.
G: aww thank you so much Maan.
M: Another thing you are shifting your things back here and will join the office with me from next week. Starting this Monday!
G: ok boss. Anything else???( Geet raised her hand in form of saluting him)
M: You will also do my sectorial work as well as I want you to assist me in every project from now onwards.
G: ok boss anything else???
M:and our marriage date is fixed after 1 month.
G: ok boss. Anything (and bit her lips)
As soon as these words reached her brain...She instantly stood up and ran to the reeling as now she could not see into Maan's eyes. Here Maan clearly understood her inner turmoil and went after her. He snaked his hands on her waist and put his chin on her shoulder. Here Geet closed her eyes and leaned on his broad chest and put her hands on his hands. This was a very blissful moment. After moments of silence...Maan wanted to break the silence...
M: Geet are you not happy with my proposal?
G: Maan..ummm its not like that... its just that everything is happening so quickly...
M: (offensively) Ok 5 years is long... Sorry Geet but I cannot wait anymore..
G: No Maan you are taking it all wrong... I meant to say that from morning it has been so hectic for me... and now you have given too much responsibilities...and my little brain is all getting messed up...of what things need to be done first...
M: No more words Geet... You trust me na
Geet nodded.
G: Ok then now you have me I will tell you what you have to do...
Maan picked her up and started moving towards her bedroom. Here Geet was completely astonished by Maan's antics.
G: Hey.. Maan put me down ok...I can walk...
M: Geet just shut up...
G: Haww!!! Maan you have started dominating me before our marriage what will happen after it...
Maan didnot respond.
G:Maan plzzz
Geet was whining like a kid and in order to stop that Maan kissed her. The kiss started off really slow. At first Geet was stunned by this act of Maan and didn't know what to do. It was only Maan doing the job. Later she started copying him but couldn't do a well job. Maan by his act taught her and she copied and soon it turned to be passionate one.They were in separate world of bliss. Soon Geet started panting and Maan had to stop. He kissed her forehead and hugged her.
After a moment of silence
M: Geet haven't you seen any Hollywood films?
G: Maan what are you saying I am not understanding. Obviously I have seen them!
M: My innocent angel! you know you don't even know how to kiss! Par koi baat nahi tumhe practice karwadonga!
G: Haaw maan!(wacked his hands)
Geet hide her blushing face in his embrace! Later Maan again picked her and now she didn't say a word!
Maan put her on her bed ever so softly. It was as if he was handling a fragile doll made up of wax.
M: Now Geet you sleep...you are quite tired...you need rest... Tomorrow you will have to face the wrath of your boss if you are sleepy!
G: Ok boss...
Maan raised his eyebrows and Geet instantly shut her mouth.
Geet had a question...and did not know how to put forward in front of Maan. Maan saw discomfort in her eyes.
M: (concerned voice) Geet what happened? Do you need anything? Tell me?
G: Ummm Maan.. you said that you will tell me what I have to do... I just wanted to ask you what I have to do...
M: Geet now sleep...
Geet was about to say something...
M: No more words Geet
Maan sat beside her and kept on caressing her hair until she slept. He kissed her on her forehead and then her eye and then at the corner her lip.
M: Geet you are the reason for my success.Today when the reporter asked... your eyes came in front of me. They say true that behind every successful man there is always a women. Now I want my life to be successful and i can not do that without my reason for success.
After sometime Maan also went and slept waiting for a new beginning to start.
After 1 month Maan and Geet had a grand wedding with all the rituals. In between Maan and Geet use to have their nok jhonks but in the end, ended up manofying eachother. Maan took special care not to hurt her anymore now. Now they were having a blissful life. After two years they were blessed with cute twins. One boy and one girl.Now Maan thought that there family was complete and thanked God for such life.

So here is the last part! I don't know how it turned out... Please do leave your feedback! Will be waiting for your comments! Please also read my other FF too and give me encouragement... and for the PMs for my FF... Send me Buddy request who ever wants the updates. 😛

Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update dear
ending is lovely. maaneet r together and geet and maan met her friends😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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JUST FOUND IT AND READ IT IN ONE GO
NICE STORY AND LOVED THE END TOO
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow lovely story..
beautifully written their dare,frndshp,fight,success n finally d beautiful proposal wid a happy ending...
do write some more n pm me also...
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Hi. I just 'found' your story and read it all.
I really liked it! Concept was great and your writing is very good.

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