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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow nice one..
eager to read more...
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very beautiful...
Geet is confident :)...nice..
Maan...carefree fun loving boy...😊
Continue soon!!!
will be waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear
maan is senior to geet and going to rag her😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
nice start!!!! njoyed it thoroughly!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi dear! Awesum update! Past n present well incorporated! Wonderfully written! update soon n do pm! Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank-you so much for such a warm welcome here! Thank-you for liking and commenting! 😃 please ignore any mistakes. Here is part 3!
Part 3
Maan began to read the file with concentration. Later there was an amused expression on his face. His group was behind him.

M: Well this is interesting. Ms Geet Handa knows how to do Latin dance...Hmm I wonder how she looks doing that. What say guys should we dare her to do Latin dancing.
Abhay: Well that would be good. It had been a while since we have given such an interesting dare.
Yash: Yeah Maan go for it!!!!
M: Well Ms.Geet I guess that's your dare that is you are doing salsa dance.
Geet looked at him in disbelieve. Is he for real'?
G: I can't accept it-because for Latin dancing you need music and a partner.
Geet did not say it in attitude but in-a-matter-of-fact voice. Maan looked at her for a while. Although he could have given her another dare but he wanted to see her dance. Maan with a smirk said...
M: Okay Geet. Today at night is the fresher's party you will dance. As for your partner I will be honored to dance with you.
Geet thought about. If I refuse he will make it more difficult and I want these three years to pass in peace. Okay let's get this over with'
G: Fine...
Geet turned around. And that was when Adi saw Pinky.
A: Hey Maan what about her friend???
Maan saw her and it was clear on her face that she was scared.
M: Umm can you get me a coke I'm a little thirsty
Pinky just nodded.
M: Thanks.
Geet thought This guy makes me dance and asks Pinky to get him a coke. Great now I think I need to take out my stilettoes and that red dress.'
***************
The Fresher's Party was on full swing. It was held at the University auditorium.
Maan entered the auditorium and every eye caught the entrance as if he was the chief guest. He was wearing a black 3-piece suit. As usual he was looking great and was the centre of attention. After some time he and his friends started gossiping but Maan was just waiting her to appear so that he could see that how she accomplishes the dare...as he knows that he was the best salsa dance in the university.
Soon Geet entered the hall and grasped the attention of the people...as the light of the auditorium went dim and spot light focused on her. She instantly put her one hand on her eyes so that the sharp lights would not enter her eyes. Slowly she removed her hand...
This was all Maan's plan as he wanted to make her more nervous so that she would think twice about that dare.
Geet was wearing a red gown with a diamond stoppers with high heel stilettoes...any one if would see her would say that she was looking SIMPLE yet Elegant.
Maan saw her face in the spot light and got mesmerized. But when she put her hands on her face he got disturbed...but when she slowly removed he hands...first her eyes came visible...which showed certain tinge of nervousness... but later the same eyes showed bravery and confidence..
Although Geet was nervous when she entered the hall and all the scenes made her more...but later she decided that it is now or never...therefore she put a brave face and walked such that nothing happened.
On the other hand Maan walked forward towards her...
M: So Ms.Geet are u ready for the DARE?
G: Yeah! Why not...
Maan was stunned to see her reaction so carefree...
M: Ms.Geet I wanted to tell you that you are messing with MAAN SINGH KHURANNA.
G: So...Waisay bhi I want to spend these 3 years peacefully.
M: You don't know that I am the best Latin dancing in the university...and if you lose than you will have to do whatever I say.
G: You don't need to think on that as I will win definitely...as far as...when you will lose you will have to do anything that I will have to tell you.
M: Ok then let's see...
Maan signalled the DJ to put the music and then it all started.
Both started moving their bodies and forgot that they were dancing in the auditorium in front of so many people.
Later Maan was also doing his moves but when the music went loud and fast...Geet started doing really hard steps (in solo) which were very hard for Maan to follow...so he just stopped...

so what do you think what will Geet ask Maan to do since she accomplished her dare successfully!

Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
lovely update
so geet won 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update dear
maan challenged her to dance and she won😊
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awesome part ...maan haar gaya ab jarur geet mangegi k maan usko ya kisi ko ese pareshaan na kare
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maan haar gaya !!😆
Y r u giving such a chutku putku updates ??😒

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