Zehal-e-Miskeen - A Tale of Lost Love [part 2 link, page 23]

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honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

😕 i dint really get that...am really ashamed of myself for not understanding the main part

stiilll i love the story n ur narration😊😊

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honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Darling...don't u think that she is? .. ur doubt made me curious...and I read...

yes i did think so...becoz these days most of the writers here are in a testing-the-readers mode...so i thot same happened here...

anyways glad that we are getting a new writer here..😊

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: honeygrape
😕 i dint really get that...am really ashamed of myself for not understanding the main part
stiilll i love the story n ur narration😊😊

totally agree with u..

thank god i'm not the only dumbos here..😆😆😆

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Kalam.

I have written on this forum before, perhaps that is why.

I do know Shikha, I also adore her work. But I am not her.

will wait for the unveiling

also can you put the page on the main post as have to hunt for it

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Kalam.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

I see I have caused some confusion. Let me explain it in the best way possible.

The plotline of this story is Geet's memory - as young children, Maan and Geet were extremely close to each other. Dev was jealous.

As young teenager, their friendship grew into love and they spent a night together, the night where Maan told Geet he was going abroad.

That was the last time they saw each other.

Maan was due to return a few months later, but he did not (the reason behind this will be unravelled)

Dev grew closer to Geet, and did something which changed her forever (this is the mystery behind her memory)

Maan returns 7 years later to find his brother married to the love of his life, who has no recollection of their past or who he is.

Chapter 6, the most recent update, was Geet talking to herself as she tried to recollect the part of her brain which she knows is lost, but she does not know how. She was painting absent-mindedly, letting her thoughts take over in order to try and convey an answer.

Geet does not suspect Dev's hand behind her memory loss. Maan is aware that his brother has played some part, but he does not yet know the full story. All he wants for the moment is to get to know Geet again.

I hope this has cleared any queries, if anyone has any further questions please do let me know.

Edited by Kalam. - 12 years ago

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

dear, i dint have any confusions about the previous updates...only the latest one ,( chap 6 ) i couldnt understand...anyways thanku so much clearing it...cant wait to see the truths revealing...will be waiting 😊😊

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Lcan't agree more with u darling... shikha and Hasini...Onir...Palin...mayyo...avi...her writing is so similar...

I'm still dubious about her identity...

Remember...athena... u gave me link.. long back...she is none other than shikha... another id...Hasini arouses many dos... so ... I'm...errr...hmmm...but this writing... emotional atyachaar...ii have been through it...

But I can't put a finger on it... :-) :-P :-P :-D

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: honeygrape
dear, i dint have any confusions about the previous updates...only the latest one ,( chap 6 ) i couldnt understand...anyways thanku so much clearing it...cant wait to see the truths revealing...will be waiting 😊😊

sorry for quoting u again..😆😆😆

same here..

Thanks Kalam for clearing the confusion..😊😊😊

BTW i'm eagerly waiting for u to reveal who r u..

may be i will get more story to read..😃

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Kalam.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

I am neither of those lovely ladies that you have mentioned, but I am familiar with all of their work.

You are making it harder for me to remain anonymous!

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
Lcan't agree more with u darling... shikha and Hasini...Onir...Palin...mayyo...avi...her writing is so similar...

I'm still dubious about her identity...

Remember...athena... u gave me link.. long back...she is none other than shikha... another id...Hasini arouses many dos... so ... I'm...errr...hmmm...but this writing... emotional atyachaar...ii have been through it...

But I can't put a finger on it... :-) :-P :-P :-D

well i think she is not shika.. shika itni jaldi jaldi update nahi dene wali. (sorry Shika.) i'm still waiting for her WOL and her new story with AthenA ID updates.. she left it on cliffhanger.. i'm still jhooling there..

there are more chances for Palin, Onir and Mayyo.. Avi na she is very busy with The Locket.

jo bhi ho i'm loving ur story.. keep it up..😃