Zehal-e-Miskeen - A Tale of Lost Love [part 2 link, page 23]

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watergirl68in

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hi

I just came across your Tale of Lost love today. Let me first say that its very different from the usual maaneet stories that I have ever read. I loved it the way you have weaved the tale, you have kept a firm grip on your readers and have them glued to your tale...looking forward to see how the story unfolds...

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

very very very interesting story...donno y but your writing reminds me of someone whom i knew here in IF...anyways happy that you are writing such a lovely story here in IF...thanku soo much...looking forward to read this story😊😊

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Hiii... interesting...curious...edgy...but why am I feeling that I know u?

I know a cheesy line... lol

If am not wrong...u r Hasini...

Darling...don't u think that she is? .. ur doubt made me curious...and I read...

Conclusion...well awesome ...ur choice of words...and u...are mysterious... complicated... introvert nature kinda women...

Who weighs everyword before ut is spoken out...

Hahahaha...I am here to tell about ur story...and I'm here telling about you...or assuming things about u ...

Maan... geet... dev... I dont find it as triangle... it's only about maan and geet...dev as usual will b second lead..where u Introduce another women for him...

Welcome to forum... Hasini kalam ;-)

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Kalam.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

To answer curious queries, my writing is familiar because I used to write on this forum a while ago under a different name.

I am familiar with the fabulous Hasini's work but I am not Hasini.

And thank you for the comments so far, it is refreshing to see such a positive and welcoming response. Chapter 6 will be posted tomorrow.

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Prettypriya95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

this story is really interesting... plz update soon

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Downhill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

thats one lovely chapter...enthralling , engaging and spinning a tale that is hard to resist

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Kalam.
To answer curious queries, my writing is familiar because I used to write on this forum a while ago under a different name.
I am familiar with the fabulous Hasini's work but I am not Hasini.

And thank you for the comments so far, it is refreshing to see such a positive and welcoming response. Chapter 6 will be posted tomorrow.

Well... my dear kalam...may I know what is your previous name in if?

U make ppl curious... not only story... u urself...

Positive response... well... u deserve it...

Still im skeptical about it... u r not Hasini... err... kay...
U r familiar with Hasini works? :-D :-D :-D Hahahaha fine...
Which is ur favor?

6th part... and I'm sure... this will make me more curious and desperate to know about geet...

Bang on gal... claps claps... *grinning foolishly* hehehe

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Kalam.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Well... my dear kalam...may I know what is your previous name in if?

U make ppl curious... not only story... u urself...

Positive response... well... u deserve it...

Still im skeptical about it... u r not Hasini... err... kay...
U r familiar with Hasini works? :-D :-D :-D Hahahaha fine...
Which is ur favor?

6th part... and I'm sure... this will make me more curious and desperate to know about geet...

Bang on gal... claps claps... *grinning foolishly* hehehe

My anonymity adds to the intrigue of the story. A writer contributes to a story by the image they paint of themselves, I am one of such.

Chandni's Rooftop was my favourite by Hasini, it is a shame she decided to discontinue.

Thank you very much for your enthusiasm and kind words, I really do appreciate it.

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Kalam.

My anonymity adds to the intrigue of the story. A writer contributes to a story by the image they paint of themselves, I am one of such.

Chandni's Rooftop was my favourite by Hasini, it is a shame she decided to discontinue.

Thank you very much for your enthusiasm and kind words, I really do appreciate it.

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Kalam.

My anonymity adds to the intrigue of the story. A writer contributes to a story by the image they paint of themselves, I am one of such.

Chandni's Rooftop was my favourite by Hasini, it is a shame she decided to discontinue.

Thank you very much for your enthusiasm and kind words, I really do appreciate it.

Hmmm I guess all my replies to u are not going to display... god knows the reason...

Well... here comes my reply...
Yeshhh it's intriguing... absolutely interesting and tooo much eagerness to know ...

And it will double ur excitement when u find a person familiar ...just like I find u ...kinda familiar...

Well...every writer... creates an image...but how well that image is printed...is most imp...
Writer paints an image... so that the reader can understand their emotions... the images u have imagined...
Their feelings...their fantasies... their dreams...their wishes... everything... sometimes they successfully deliver the msg... and sometimes they dnt...

Anyways that is totally different tangent...

Yeshhh my dear... u r one among them...

And ur name...well..then let me name u as Anamika...I'll call u Anamika from now on... :-P ;-)

So far u created good images... or shall I say... virtual ppl... where we can connect with them... at times...or always...

There is this quote " after nourishment , shelter & companionship , stories are the things we need the most"

So ..my dear ...u have excelled in it.. gripping story...

Chandini rooftop... nice... I love the story too... infact I love all her stories...
Did u read NYT? If not... then u missed a million bugs worth story...
That is most cherished and memorable story... I love that... a lot... it will stir some warm feeling...where u feel like to treasure it...happy..content feeling...I miss that story...

Err.. sorry... for my rambles... just got into emotions...

U deserve everything lady... those praises... yesss... i rarely praise anyone except my devils and Hasini...

And coming to u ... my mysterious introvert... " there is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you"

I hope u got what am hinting at :-P :-P

If u can suggest me ur old stories...Iwould love to read...let me have pleasure to enjoy them... ;-) ;-) .

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