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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting parts
geet has migrain problem
Geet trying to remember that silhoutte
I hate Dev
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Hmmm I guess all my replies to u are not going to display... god knows the reason...

Well... here comes my reply...
Yeshhh it's intriguing... absolutely interesting and tooo much eagerness to know ...

And it will double ur excitement when u find a person familiar ...just like I find u ...kinda familiar...

Well...every writer... creates an image...but how well that image is printed...is most imp...
Writer paints an image... so that the reader can understand their emotions... the images u have imagined...
Their feelings...their fantasies... their dreams...their wishes... everything... sometimes they successfully deliver the msg... and sometimes they dnt...

Anyways that is totally different tangent...

Yeshhh my dear... u r one among them...

And ur name...well..then let me name u as Anamika...I'll call u Anamika from now on... :-P ;-)

So far u created good images... or shall I say... virtual ppl... where we can connect with them... at times...or always...

There is this quote " after nourishment , shelter & companionship , stories are the things we need the most"

So ..my dear ...u have excelled in it.. gripping story...

Chandini rooftop... nice... I love the story too... infact I love all her stories...
Did u read NYT? If not... then u missed a million bugs worth story...
That is most cherished and memorable story... I love that... a lot... it will stir some warm feeling...where u feel like to treasure it...happy..content feeling...I miss that story...

Err.. sorry... for my rambles... just got into emotions...

U deserve everything lady... those praises... yesss... i rarely praise anyone except my devils and Hasini...

And coming to u ... my mysterious introvert... " there is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you"

I hope u got what am hinting at :-P :-P

If u can suggest me ur old stories...Iwould love to read...let me have pleasure to enjoy them... ;-) ;-) .


I will strike a deal with you. Once this is completed, I will reveal my identity. But for now, I am Anamika as you have named me.

My aim for this story is to create tangents where identities and personalities overlapse, as well as narrating the tale. I'd like to think each one of us has Geet's creative streak, Maan's rebelliousness and Dev's formality, in short or long bursts.

I did not read her original NYT, I was not around at that time. I only read her revised version.

In regards to my previous work, as with my identity I will also let those be made public once more and you will be free to enjoy. As for now, let me enjoy the mask that hides me, for this story is bringing out a new side of me which was yet undiscovered. And I want to experience that through my words.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kalam.



<font color="#333333" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">I will strike a deal with you. Once this is completed, I will reveal my identity. But for now, I am Anamika as you have named me.</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">My aim for this story is to create tangents where identities and personalities overlapse, as well as narrating the tale. I'd like to think each one of us has Geet's creative streak, Maan's rebelliousness and Dev's formality, in short or long bursts.</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">I did not read her original NYT, I was not around at that time. I only read her revised version.</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">In regards to my previous work, as with my identity I will also let those be made public once more and you will be free to enjoy. As for now, let me enjoy the mask that hides me, for this story is bringing out a new side of me which was yet undiscovered. And I want to experience that through my words.</font>



Hahhaha... okay Anamika :-P I hope u dont mind me naming u...
Once u complete this...hehehe... okay..fine deal...

Creating different tangents... where the emotions pull u.. ... remind u ... urself..or someone else... these are deepest emotions...
Anyways... I hope u wont tangle urself in these web of emotions...

Revised one... she dint complete it... she left it in middle...

So I'm right... u r an introvert... a mysterious... self complicated. Person... or an assumption...
Hhmmm redefining urself... or discovering new side... all the best for ur new adventure...
Though ur words... and feelings...

"One day I'll find the right words,and they will b simple" :-) :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
LOVE THE STORY
AND YOUR WRITING IS VERY FAMILIAR
REMINDS ME OF SHIKHA
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz



Hahhaha... okay Anamika :-P I hope u dont mind me naming u...
Once u complete this...hehehe... okay..fine deal...

Creating different tangents... where the emotions pull u.. ... remind u ... urself..or someone else... these are deepest emotions...
Anyways... I hope u wont tangle urself in these web of emotions...

Revised one... she dint complete it... she left it in middle...

So I'm right... u r an introvert... a mysterious... self complicated. Person... or an assumption...
Hhmmm redefining urself... or discovering new side... all the best for ur new adventure...
Though ur words... and feelings...

"One day I'll find the right words,and they will b simple" :-) :-)


Even if I do get tangled in the web of emotions, writing will be my release.

Ah yes, I remember that she also discontinued that too. It is a shame because I loved Hasini's work.

I am an introvert when I want to be, and an extrovert when I want to be. A bit of both. Everyone is discovering themselves at any motion in life - everyday brings out a different us from the last.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: punam2712

LOVE THE STORY

AND YOUR WRITING IS VERY FAMILIAR
REMINDS ME OF SHIKHA


I have written on this forum before, perhaps that is why.

I do know Shikha, I also adore her work. But I am not her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Hmmm... u know shikha... but u r not her... nor u r Hasini...

Well... Anamika... waiting for ur update...

A bit of both... depends...

Good... u r not getting tangled...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Short yet crucial update coming up. It is vital for the progress of Geet's character. As always, likes and comments are welcome and appreciated.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Chapter 6 - Hamesha Giryan
I roam about...

"You know more than you're letting on."

"What makes you think that?"

Her finger dipped into the cold feel of the paint.

"There's a part of you that has been locked away. Yet you don't know how, or why."

The finger caressed the canvas, slowly at first, letting the paint leave its light traces.

"Therefore, your subconscious is alert."

"But?"

The press of her finger became more prominent as it etched a pattern.

"But it's almost as if it's been wiped away. Or at least, it's been attempted to."

The pattern became more volatile.

"How is that possible?"

The paint was drying out, it's presence diminishing from her finger. Still, she pressed on.

"Anything is possible. Didn't love teach you that?"

Her finger stopped. The pattern remained a mystery to the naked eye, yet to her eyes it depicted a story as she locked her mind into it and let herself roam, once more...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
wow lovely start of the story...there are many parts hidden so wouldn't comment on the story for now...would just say i am a fan of your writing...will be eagerly waitg for the updates...

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