Zehal-e-Miskeen - A Tale of Lost Love [part 2 link, page 23] - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Kalam.

I am neither of those lovely ladies that you have mentioned, but I am familiar with all of their work.

You are making it harder for me to remain anonymous!


😆 Kittu will make u reveal it before ur plot..😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmmm... sorry for typo errors... it's Hasini also Have many ids... so if u r not her...

And ya... u r not her... ur words are lil bit familiar... not complex... :-P

But the thought process is same...

Ur anonymity... well... it makes me curious... eager ti know about u...
I feel like I know u... but ...err...

This story... is like a deja vu...

I think ... deep Down I know u... how I don't know ...u r intriguing... u are always on my mind from past couple of days...

Do u know me? Who are you?? Anamika...hmm... as we striked a deal... and u don't want to reveal ur identity... I respect ur wish... im leytting u to enjoy ur other side lol :-P :-P :-D .

U know all of them... well... who is fav among them... no cheating... be frank...

And y do u always mention it's a shame that Hasini left it In middle... she dint get time... that's it...

My dear time constraints...

Lovely ladies... well in that list of LOVELY LADIES most of them aer dq's only...

Ardham ainda????

#@minnu... I have no intentions now...before I had...but...she said she will reveal... so I'll wait... but that doesn't stop me firm pursuing her real identity :-P :-P :-P:-D :-D ;-);-) ;-);-)

What happebed darling ??... I know all the writers are conspiring against our dear readers like u... hugs darling :-) Awww my darling is sooo confused about u Anamika... :-) :-)

6th part... painting... prithivi... that is all I could utter... ur painting reminds me someone... ur emotions... geet to be specific... I know this...

I know u...Anamika...
Edited by KittuPratzz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Hmmm... sorry for typo errors... it's Hasini also Have many ids... so if u r not her...

And ya... u r not her... ur words are lil bit familiar... not complex... :-P

But the thought process is same...

Ur anonymity... well... it makes me curious... eager ti know about u...
I feel like I know u... but ...err...

This story... is like a deja vu...

I think ... deep Down I know u... how I don't know ...u r intriguing... u are always on my mind from past couple of days...

Do u know me? Who are you?? Anamika...hmm... as we striked a deal... and u don't want to reveal ur identity... I respect ur wish... im leytting u to enjoy ur other side lol :-P :-P :-D .

U know all of them... well... who is fav among them... no cheating... be frank...

And y do u always mention it's a shame that Hasini left it In middle... she dint get time... that's it...

My dear time constraints...

Lovely ladies... well in that list of LOVELY LADIES most of them aer dq's only...

Ardham ainda????

#@minnu... I have no intentions now...before I had...but...she said she will reveal... so I'll wait... but that doesn't stop me firm pursuing her real identity :-P :-P :-P:-D :-D ;-);-) ;-);-)

What happebed darling ??... I know all the writers are conspiring against our dear readers like u... hugs darling :-) Awww my darling is sooo confused about u Anamika... :-) :-)

6th part... painting... prithivi... that is all I could utter... ur painting reminds me someone... ur emotions... geet to be specific... I know this...

I know u...Anamika...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
THANKS FOR THE CLARIFICATION - BUT WAS ONLY CONFUSED ABOUT PART 6
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bookmarked to read!

@Kittu and Mannu: I'm not Kalam. And I don't think any of the ladies you've mentioned here is her. Sorry I have been keeping tabs on this thread without being conspicuous.

@Kalam: I find your style similar too, to a dear friend's but I'm going to wait for you to reveal your identity yourself. 😊
Edited by mayyo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanxx for that clarification... helped a lot😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayyo

Bookmarked to read!

@Kittu and Mannu: I'm not Kalam. And I don't think any of the ladies you've mentioned here is her. Sorry I have been keeping tabs on this thread without being conspicuous.

@Kalam: I find your style similar too, to a dear friend's but I'm going to wait for you to reveal your identity yourself. 😊



Hiii mayyo... :-) no da... she is not... but I had few doubts about her identity... I thought Hasini... then someone said shikha...

U ..Onir... avi... Palin... ppl I mentioned...she is not one of them... err... grrr...

Just like geet lost her memory... even I'm suffering from amnesia lol ;-) :-P :-P

Yeshhh... u r not kalam mayyo... I know that very well... u r way of presentation is totally different...I mentioned my favor writers... thats it...

I am comparing the writing style... isn't similar... jaani pehachaan Si... well my Hindi is not so good... sorry for mistakes...

Captivity...this is comman in all of my fav devils ;-) ;-) can't get enough of it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
bookmarked
i agree with Kittu, several several shades of Hasini here.

Of course, It's not me ladies.. but for the way it is gripping me, it could definitely be Zarin (kaamchorni)
That's my guess. 2nd guess would be Foz..

whoever you are please don't leave it incomplete... that's all I would ask.

Loving the story so far.

Sorry for the ignorance but would you please explain the meaning of the titles. Thanks.
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KittuPratzz



Hiii mayyo... :-) no da... she is not... but I had few doubts about her identity... I thought Hasini... then someone said shikha...

U ..Onir... avi... Palin... ppl I mentioned...she is not one of them... err... grrr...

Just like geet lost her memory... even I'm suffering from amnesia lol ;-) :-P :-P

Yeshhh... u r not kalam mayyo... I know that very well... u r way of presentation is totally different...I mentioned my favor writers... thats it...

I am comparing the writing style... isn't similar... jaani pehachaan Si... well my Hindi is not so good... sorry for mistakes...

Captivity...this is comman in all of my fav devils ;-) ;-) can't get enough of it...


Hey! First off, I wasn't even aware you've read my work, let alone me being one of your favourites. 😳

And I can say with quite surety that she isn't Avi, Onir or Palin. She herself said she isn't Hasini or Shika so that narrows it down to who I think she is. Lets see who she actually turns out to be. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dqno1

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i agree with Kittu, several several shades of Hasini here.

Of course, It's not me ladies.. but for the way it is gripping me, it could definitely be Zarin (kaamchorni)
That's my guess. 2nd guess would be Foz..

whoever you are please don't leave it incomplete... that's all I would ask.

Loving the story so far.

Sorry for the ignorance but would you please explain the meaning of the titles. Thanks.


Fozia, I would say...

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