If Only You Saw Me (15) Link to sequel, Pg:165

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: Onir
Hey Twinnie ... Congrats on crossing 9000 ...👏👍🏼
Way to go

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Thank you twinnie! 🤗

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#472

I won't reserve this time as I'm already way behind... so comments only after I have read 😊

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: Onir
I won't reserve this time as I'm already way behind... so comments only after I have read😊

Oh don't bother! Take all the time you need. 😊

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

So the D day is here

😊

Maan has planned something

Aw! he is so cute he actually fulfilled Geet's wish of her family being a part of her special day😃

Geet touched by his gesture😳

Loved every moment of the party😊

Haaye their dance and then his possession, their drive back and his kiss

😳

Their beach romance 😛

Maari I loved how u included our day to day instances in the update

Its like seeing ourselves in the graduation ceremony, farewell party, dancing, enjoying on a beach

These memories really mean so much!

😊

Maan-Zaara convo was so good and how she prompted him to not give up and confess his feelings😳

Maaneet moments in the hostel were just pure magic!!!

The rain, the dance, them and his confession☺️

Oh my it was so dreamy!!!!!

Thanks for the awesome update

Finally I could read and comment

Sincere apologies for all the delay

And thanks for putting up with me

Lekin dil nahio karta iss dreamy part ke baad sad part padhu

mujhe abhi se rona aa raha hain😭

Maari

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Edited by heytal - 11 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: mayyo

Oh don't bother! Take all the time you need. 😊

Thanks 🤗

Will surely comeback but 😊

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: Onir
Thanks 🤗
Will surely comeback but😊

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#477

beautiful update

from its starting till its end i was stick to it n don't know when it got over

so finally zara's words did push him & he confess his love for her in one of d most romantic way

haaye m in love with this update❤️❤️

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prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

it was awsome... Finaly maan said it yes!!! And thnks to zara 4 d much needed push to maan... It was super romantic n beautiful updt and i m eager to knw geet's reply n der fate... Cont super soon waiting impatiently 4 d nxt part...

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farzu3008

@farzu3008

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#479

superb update. wow u wrote so beautifully. u have epicted maan inner turmoil so well. maan confession in the rain was sooo romantic. am blushing just by reading it. hoping for geet to reciprocate his love. waiting for next