The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 79

Originally posted by: anjalisen85

awesome👏👏



maaneet first dance as well as first kiss😳




update soon

Originally posted by: ambeern

Mindblowing update
Loved it

Originally posted by: dqno1

😃

I tried to somersault but fell down...😆

gravity the dushman of healthy people..😆

🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: mayyo

Okay. I admit I dumped writing my own chapter to come and comment here. Wanted to do that for this chapter while it's still fresh. Will come around for the rest soon. 😃🤗 You know how down I have been the last few days... I did need this boost... You are a true friend Mari

Avi, you of all people, know how much I am fond (to understate it a bit!) of RTM and the association of black vest with it. And to read it here, in a story I love, in this way, is absolutely an incomparable happiness for me! Did I thank you for adding it in the first place? No? Why, I should! Thank you thank you thank you! Cant get over the feeling this chapter gave me! ❤️ ❤️Yes I am slightly aware of your fascination with this scene and the black vest.. Poor Sona! I made her deliver twins to get us here..😆😆

"Hasrat hai ke unko jee bhar ke dekhen,
Lekin wo pass ho toh nazrein uthayi nahi jatii .."
I remember this shayr and I loved it back then. Now, for me, this shayr belongs to Maaneet of TL! 😃Every single shayr that I go through I try to remember and save it.. I know you do too..

This update was such a wonderful blend of sensuality, awareness, innocence, attraction and love that I could feel all the emotions right through it!

What made me go 'aww' was Geet's innocent question at him being scared of lightning. That was cute!

The rest of it was just outstanding! From the hug, to the proposal, to the agreement, to the much awaited and longed for first dance, to the exchange of gifts, to the kisses. All of it - literally - was indescribably good! *thud* *thud* *thud* was Geet's heart as well as mine. ☺️

Thanks Mari. It took me a long time to make it look natural and get them here. From the floor gazer to one who held his hand through out the day to the one melting in his arms was a long journey but luckily there are some readers left😆 I wanted to write a slow romance and I ended up doing just that. I would have given up at chapter 4 but for you being here with me through out.🤗

One tiny thing I noticed in this chapter. She thinks she would see him again in July and that is what she is preparing herself for. Does she find out about his departure after he's gone? And, the farewell part is the day after tomorrow, and according to the previous chapters, Geet and Pinky never reached the party because they were stuck in traffic on their way back from Hoshiyarpur. Does that mean she's leaving the next day and that they won't see each other again?Yes it is her birthday and she has to see Darji for that. Pinky will also go with her for her birthday. She does not know about London.

Don't let my ever-inquisitive mind ruin the feel of this chapter for me! I am just too happy for the moment they're living in to fret over what might happen in the future! 😳

I think I have commented on any story in such detail after quite a long time. Feels like I'm home! 😃

PS: Loved the song!

Thanks, Avi! For writing this story and letting me (all of us!) feel the love shining in it! 🤗

Originally posted by: dumas

amazing updates loved it beautifully done loved the song amazing update loved how both exchange the chain just like marriage garlands so cute loved the whole update thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Jannat94

Awesome update dear
I like the song selection
loved it a lot dear
waiting for next part
update soon and Thanx 4 the Pm