If Only You Saw Me (15) Link to sequel, Pg:165 - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago

Itna jaldi reply kar diya! I'm amazed! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo


Itna jaldi reply kar diya! I'm amazed! 😆

I had signed out but logged on for just that...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


I had signed out but logged on for just that...😃



🤗

Going to bed. That is, if I can shut my head. 😆

Logging out, nonetheless. Good night!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo



🤗

Going to bed. That is, if I can shut my head. 😆

Logging out, nonetheless. Good night!

Good night😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Haiye!!👏

Can't get over the confession... but will try 😃

I love the planning with G to take a video broadcast for the family... The best things in life are the small pleasures we give to others. It is definitely not in material things but to understand the other person, their needs and silently fulfill them... muaah this character that you have created. Magic!👏

The pride of graduating, the ceremony and pomp of that moment.. wonderfully described. The family and friends there to cheer and share in the joy.. again very well written.😃

The hug was described extra well... lol.. not to mention Maan's outfit. Attention to detail from writer sahiba.. very nice..😲

who cares about what Geet is wearing... poor dear... writer sahiba is not interested in you dear...lol😆

Phir se complimenting the dress!!!! He was saved by the compliment later on though..😳

Kiss on the cheeks... ummm hmmm... Making the girl wait and wonder why he changed track... kya kare.. writer chipku hai... Aisse nahi jaane degi...😲

Fun in the water was nice. Reminds me of summer vacations... loved that part. Carefree and cute together..😳

Zara and Maan conversation was very needed. As much as he feels, he is not able to easily express himself.. The uncertainities of youth are such that we never are sure, especially in the matters of the heart.

The scene in the rain was beautiful... words can't describe how wonderful I felt reading it... It was like watching a beautiful scene in a movie... 👏

To say you are not good at romantic scenes is a lie now... you were wonderful at it...😃

Loved the update.

Sorry for the late comment..

Update soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago
what song were they dancing to in the rain?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


what song were they dancing to in the rain?


Erm... I was hoping nobody would ask that question. 😆

There were a number of songs' instrumentals playing in my head for that. The basic idea was some soft romantic music. You can think of it as Main Agar Kahoon or Baatein Kuch Ankahi Si.
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Posted: 11 years ago
at last his confessed his love ...he took so long to tell that...loved zara coaxing him to move ahead...that was so romantic dear...hummm..what will now geet relpy him...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo


Erm... I was hoping nobody would ask that question. 😆

There were a number of songs' instrumentals playing in my head for that. The basic idea was some soft romantic music. You can think of it as Main Agar Kahoon or Baatein Kuch Ankahi Si.

Main agar kahoon... works for me...😃 Phir toh kissie honi chahiye..😳
I re-read it so many times... update already😃

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