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Follow ur heart yaar... Young or old.. Love is love... Will support u as always. Will be waiting..
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i suck at writing and creative stuff...😭
Hey but u can inspire form bagban's amitabh-hema malini's romance or from chini cum's amitabh-tabu's romance..
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Originally posted by: singh24



😃 what do think ..nd feel comfy ..?
i think emotions ,, 😃


thank.u very much,...😊😃
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physical intimacy ko emotional bana do di..

like I will pm u here..
or u can just show some romance instead of physical thing
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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Th-11 /part-151/pg 136/28/05/2015


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Sorry guys ,.. Sorry again ,.. I tried to give sr ,.. But failed ,.. something is bugging me ,.. I failed to write a simple sr ,.. I sat to write but end up writing something. to some extent nonsense,.. yes I too feel this nonsense,.. what is the need of writing this ,. Unnecessary prolongation ,..but it came out ,.. my brain saying its not needed ,.. but heart not listening don't know why I write this ,.as u waited this long bare me for some more time ,.. I try to give next immediate update very soon..

. Geet went to kitchen to control her feelings ,she didn't want Maan to notice her ,. Her feelings and uncanny emotions caused by above situation. She need some time to compose herself and face Maan. She started to make coffee for Maan even though he didn't need it

Maan sat on the couch ,. He too know that she need time and he will give some space to her . He want to talk to her and comfort her .

Geet came out with his coffee and gave it to him and smiled at him. He took it her judging her and keep it on table and pulled her to his laps looking deep in her eyes.

She know that he knows her in and outs,.. she is always an open book to him and vice versa,.. no need to pretend,.. she has to open up ,.. and it is oblivous to talk him open.

She took his face in her hands,.."It's a fit of emotion I under went Maan,.. ab mai thik hu. Achanak sab isa chalegaye tho mai thoda emotional hogayi thi .. Aaj tak ,.. aaj tak ye saari mera zindagi hai Maan ,.. per aaj aap hai meri zindagi , jisse mai har pal, har lamha sirf aur sirf aap keliye , aap ki saath jina chahthi hu.ab mai aap ko ek pal keliye bhi nahi chod sakthi hu,' drowning him in her spell ,.. taking him to a world which was build by their own emotional bonding,... a pure and sacred world.

Lost in her spell he scooped her and took her to their bed room. He placed her on the bed. They looked the arrangements done by Annie and smiled. Maan looked the dresses kept there for them and took the saree for geet and caressed the thin white material looking at geet with raising desires,.. He took the jasmine garlands kept there and smelled them and gave them to geet. Geet took the saree and flowers shyly and went to change leaving Maan to change himself.

Maan changed in to white kurtha and pyzama and stood at the window waiting for Geet.. Suddenly the light switched off and two hands came fr. his back embracing him and hugging him tightly. Maan smiled and kept his hands on her hands . Those hands started to caress him going under his kurta to upwards and she started to kiss him on his back pressing herself to him and kissing him crazily every where on his back to neck madly.

Maan immediately felt the difference in the touch,.. "itna lalach [lust] in the touch ,.. aur geet never initiates like this ,..He frozed at once. He pulled those hands to front forcefully and switched on the light. He shocked to see "her".

"Thum?" He shouted his lungs out ,.." Thumhe himmat kaise hui yaha aneki aur mujhe is tarah chuneki?"He pushed her away ,

"Thud" Sameera fall on the floor by the force Maan throwed her . Thum yaha kaise aye ho? Aur mera Geet kaha hai? Kya kiya thumne uski saat? Kaha hai Geet ? bolo,...

Sameera stood up fr. Floor and came to him again trying to touch him ,.. she said ,.." Geet ,.. Geet ,.. Geet ,.. Akhir hai kya uss Geet me jo mere pass nahi hai? Maan wo thumhari laayak nahi hai ,.. thumhari status ki nahi hai ,.. wo ek mamuli dokoudi ki aurat hai ,.. thumhri barabar ki nahi ,.. she will not match to u any where Maan ,.. mai usse hi jyaada sunder hu ,.. modern hu .. sophisticated hu ,.. thumhari status ki hu Maan,..dekho Maan ,.. dekho,.. mujhe,..mai kitna khubsoorat hu ,.. she started to strip herself in front of him,.

"Bus" Maans every ounce of patience braked ,.. he loathed himself to leave her like that without teaching her any lesson for her misdeeds. She dared to near him again,.. its his mistake to leave her to throwing geet s life in danger again. He hated himself . He disgusted to see her this obscenity and heinous act. More over geet safety and worry about her is raising in him sec by sec,.. he became a wild lion who is ready to launch on its enemy.

He slapped her tight making her fell on ground ,.. He took her sari and wrapped it on her and pallu around her neck pressing it making her chocking by the pressure he applying on her neck . Sameera baffled and amazed seeing this type inhumane behaviour in Maan. She never thought that Maan could turned this callous. He asked her with his red furious eyes " Geet kaha hai? Kya kiya thumne uski saath?'Agar unhe kuch hua tho mai thumhe meri hi haathonse mardalunga .She frightened by this furious Maan if she didn't reply she definitely loose her breath,.. "mai unhe behush banakar bath room me band kardiya"she uttered with great difficulty. Maans heart sunk at once hearing this "U demon,.. Bitch ,.. thumne meri geet ko behosh banadiya ,.. aur band kiya ,.. ?he pulled her holding her hairs and dragged her to the bath room . He broke the door and find his life laying lifeless on floor.

Geet" he shouted and ran to her scooping her brought out and placed her on bed. He got panicked ,.. panic is a very small word to explain his state. He frightened to death in fear of loosing her ,.. loosing his life ,.. he shuddered ,.. his whole body shivered like hell. He tried to bring her to conscious by splashing water on her face .Mean while Sameera tried to sneak out fr.tThere when Maan caught her and throwed her in to the bathroom and locked her . He immediately called dr. and informed to come . He hell angered on the security to let Sameera in to the house. He called the security,..roaring on them,... " wake up u bas***ds,. Wat r u doing? sleeping leaving the duties ,.. come inside " he summoned. They ran inside dreading to their lives ,.. actually they r little bit relaxed in their duties thinking that there could be no more pblms as maneets marriage is over. Sameera took this opportunity and sneaked in to the house fr. the back door hiding behind trees and entered the bedroom jumping over the balcony and waiting for her chance. She has to get Maan by hook r crook. He is her obsession. She wants to kill geet and have Maan for herself. She can stoop any low to achieve her goal.

Maan handover her to security and said them to take her to police station and file a complaint against her on charge of attempt to murder.

Dr. came and examined geet . Maan explained him what happened ,.. Gods grace nothing serious she can get conscious with in half an hour ,.. the sedative is not that much strong. Dr. gave injection to get consciousness and assured Maan nothing serious,. She will be alright.

Maan sat near Geet all in remorse and pain loathing himself ,.. every time ,.. every time she under went in dangers because of him. He is the reason for her troubles . He hated himself,. Tears flowing fr. His eyes seeing geet like that .He took her hand and bring it to his lips,."mujhe maaf kardo geet,.. har baar ,.. har baar ,.. meri wajese thumhari jaan khathereme jaarahe hai,.. mai kya jawaab dunga humare bachhe ko? Aur dishu ko ? wo thumhari jimmedaari mujhe pe sopake gayi ,.. mai kya jawaab du usse? thumhe waapas anahi hoga geet ,.. mai thumhare bina nahi jisaktha,.. meri wajese,.. hua ye sab meri waje se ,.. he is blaabering like that ,..

" Aur aap ki wajese mai abhi tak zinda hu" she said opening her eyes like she heard him. She cupped his face with her palm.

Maan :-Geet thum hosh me agayi ,.. ohh;; Geet he hugged her at once. Mai dargaya hu ,. Bahut darr gaya hu ki mai thumhe khojaunga,. Wo .. mai kya jawaab dunga bachheko ? kya bolu? Geet kept a finger o his lips ,.. stopping him,

Geet:-kisko itni himmat hai ki Geet ki Maan per ungli uthaneki?

Maan hugged her tight,.. ohh; Jaan ,.. Misty ,.. I love u ,. He nuzzled his face in her crook of neck,.. mera jaan nikala thumhe isa dekhke ,.. his body still shivering like hell ,.. Geet:- hugged him to her soothing him by patting and caressing his whole body by giving assurance to him ,.."mai thik hu Maan,.. mujhe kuch nahi hua,.. dekhiye mujhe ,.. mai bilkul thik hu,. Aap ki saamne hi hu ,.. saas lerahi hu ,.. she tried to bring him back to normal.

Maan:- Geet ,.. wo ,.. wo .. bitch,.. thumhe ,..

Geet:- Maan ,.. aaj ke din hum kisiki baare me nahi baat karenge ,.. aaj humara din hai maan ,.. ye khushi ka mouka hai ,.. yaad hai hum ye din keliye kitna tadapthe hai ,.. kitna intezaar ki hum,.. mai ab aur ek pal intezaar nahi karungi ,. She started to feel him every where making him all arouse. His body stiffened each and every cell of his body craving in desire for her,.. shivering in the ecstasy of desires.

I want a situation which intensify the depth and thickness of their emotion which potray in their unison,.. u can observe that in Maans behavior when he find that geet is in danger,.. u never find before this side of Maan before in my whole story,..

I want some thing more other than a physical union,.. I want to show the purity ,divine and sacred love that i always tried to portray in their characters". Like the unison of two souls and one body , r to say do dill in ek chaan types"

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
yeh sameera kitni be sharam hai 🤢
nice update

mein first agaye 😃😊
Edited by fmaaneet - 10 years ago
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Amazing update
Waiting for next update.
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Originally posted by: fmaaneet

yeh sameera kitni be sharam hai 🤢

nice update

mein first agaye



congrates,..
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Originally posted by: jasika08

Amazing update

Waiting for next update.


itni fast reply ,.. do u really read it?

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