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Posted: 11 years ago

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Sheetal Bahut accha student ho tum, distinction mila tumhe, per ek baath hai jitna pucho utnahi batana hi, jyaada information dene se jyaada marks nahi milthe.now i am enjoying my writing even ,bahut maza araha hai isa tumlogonse interact karnese, bahut achhi ho tum,really ur encouraging me a lot , u know i showed ur all responses to my sister , who was in deep loss loosing my jiju also got interested in my story and today she took my writings in pendrive to go throug hthem even though i refuse to it as i felt emberassed , wat she will think about me? i dont said to any one of my family till now,she only came today while i am updating and saw all ur responses. dont know how to thank u, as she is trying to get out of her sorrow. thank u very much yaar



Me doing "Bhangra "...thinka thika...main exam me paas ho gayi!!!
Jyada information to aapko maska laga ne ke liye thi!!!!
Aapki di jaldi normal ho jayegi...aap haina uske sath!
Di ko achha feel karane me ,meri comments kam aa gayi...ye to mere liye achhi baat hai..
Aapko thanks bolne ki jarurat nahi hai..

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Posted: 11 years ago


MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Th-11 /part-150 /pg 127/5/16//2015





Part:-104

"Kuch boliye aap itna chup kyu ho?"tears flowing fr. her eyes not known to herself. She shooked him vigorously to bring him back.

He responded to her, actually to her tears. He moved and hold her tightly as if he looses she will vanish in the thin air."Tum thik tho hona?' He started to feel her caressing her fr. her face to her hands assuring him self that she is alright.

"Tum kyu nahi sunthi meri baath? Mana kiya thana maine, stool pe chadnese, tum girjaathi tho? Tumhe kuch hojathe tho,... mai ji nahi saktha, tum hamesha isa kyu karthe ho?

Geet stunned listening to his confession. His words echoing in her ears"Mai ji nahi saktha"again and again in her ears. Her mind and heart trying hard to grasp the meaning of his words. Geet looked into his eyes,his care, his effection towards her, his fear for loosing her, his ;love on her sab kuch saaf saaf dikhraha hai, uski anchonme.Pehli baar geet ki dil ye mehsoos karrahi hai, uski pyaar ko mehsoos karrahi hai geet. Isa pyaar jiski bare me wo kabhi socha nahi ,.. jiski laayak bhi nahi samjha wo apni aapko,.. zindagi me kabhi isa umeed bhi nahi rakhi ,ki wo bhi ek insaan hai jisme wo saari khubiya hai jo har insaan ki hotha hai.

Uski bhi ji ne ka haq hai,... uski bhi pyaar pane ka haq hai,.. uskibhi pyaar karneka haq hai,.. ek isa pyaar jisse zindagi ka hosla bansake,.. ek isa pyaar jiske bina jina mushkil hotha hai,.. ek isa pyaar zindagi bhar uski saath de sake, aasara bansake, sahara ban sake,..har mushkilon ko saamna karneka himmat de sake , ek isa pyaar jinki baahome har dard,har dukh bhoolsake.

Her eyes continuosly raining , don't know how to explain her state of mind.

All the events fr. the morning , Pammis sharats, threats about her family and Maans care, love effection all r taking toll on her mind. She doesn't know how to overcome these situations Maan and his safety and his concern.She is not ready to loose Maan to them, she also know that Sameera is not at all good for Maan. She is thinking how to solve this, Mai aapko kuch nahi hone dungi'chahe kitni bhi mushkilon se saamna karni pade mai karungi lekin aapko kuch nahi hone dungi,She decided in herself.

Annie:- bhai,... she hugged him aap thik haina?

Arjun:- jiju;,.. di ko kuch nahi hua, aap shaanth hojayiye.

Maan:- thank.u Arjun.

Geet:-Annie ,..jao lunch karke aaraam karlo

They went

Geet:- aap sojaayiye ,.. thodi der and she started to move ,but Maan caught her by her wrist saying ,nahi tum kahi math jaana"yahi raho mere saath"

She sat again near him , mai kahi nahi jaungi aap aaraam kijiye, she made him to lay on bed . He still hold her hand not at all want to leave her.

She sat near him and started to thread his hairs slowly to make him to sleep. He closed his eyes not to sleep but feeling contented to have her near him.

Arjun and annies room,

Arjun found some one on his door, koun hai,.. bahar?

Nakul:-ji ,.. Arjun babu mai hu nakul.

Arjun:- haa nakul tum khana lagwaayiye hum aarahe hai

Nakul:- ji,.. but he didn't went arjun senced something and came out.

Arjun:- Nakul kya hua? tum gayi nahi abhi tak? Nakul:- ji,.. Arjun babu ,.. mujhe ,.. aapse kuch baathkarni hai,..

Arjun:- haa,.. kya hai nakul?

Nakul:- yaha nahi kya aap bahar aasakthe?

Arjun senced something serious as nakul didn't behaved like that before. So he came out.

Ar:- boliye nakul kya baath hai?

Nakul:_ Arjun babu aaj sab log bahar hai tab maaji ne geet mam ke saath bahut badsalook kiya,.. and he narrated the whole thing to him.

Badimam ne bahut bathhameez ki baath kiya geet mam se. wo bahut ghatiya kaam karne jaarahe hi mam ke aur unki family ke saath, mujhe bahut dar lagraha hai kayi ye mam ki family ke saath kuch galat kiya tho? Mam bahut acchi hai Arjunbabu , mujhe samajme nahi arahahai ki kya karna hai ,aur geet mam ne apni kasam khake mujhe chup karwadiya ye sab maan babu se bathane se, roka hai mujhe, ab hum kya karenge?

Arjun:- Mai kabhi nahi socha hai ki maa ji ne itni had tak girjaathi hai, kaisi aurat hai ye ki duseri aurat ki famiky ko nuksaan pahunchn ki koshish karrahe?mujhe dar tha ki isa hi honewaali hai, lekin itni neeche harkathe maine kabhi nahi socha. Tum chintha math kar mai kuch karthi hu. Dekhtha hu ki mai kya karsaktha hu. Tum bas ye baath kisiko nahi bathana,juju ko, dev ko annie ko math bathana. Mai sab samalungi. Mai di ko uski family ko kuch nahi hone dunga.Tum bas savdhaan rahna inlogon per ek nazar dalna aur di ko kuch math honedena.

Naku;-ji,.. Arjun babu.

Arjun went inside feeling disgusted and worried wat to do? How to solve this pblm? How to save di ki family ko?

Annie:- Arjun,.. kya soche rahe ho? Aap kuch pareshaan lagraheho?

Arjun:- kuch nahi annie,.. bas.,..office ke bare me sochrahahau.

Annie:- mujhe pata hai aap bhabhi ke baareme soche rahe ho na?

Arjin:- tumhe kaisepata?

Arjun:- mai jaanthi hu arjun aap bhabhi ko bahut phikar karthe.

Arjun:-Annie ,.. wo bahut acchi hai,. Aur jiju use bahut chahtha hai, bahut pyaar karhe hai unse, dekhi na tum wo kitna pareshaan hogaya di ko girthe hue dekh ke kaise befikar rahu mai?

Annie:- mujhe lagtha hai ki hum itna pareshaan hone ka jarurat nahi hai. Maa ne geet bhabhi ko maanliya hoga isliye bhabhi se kuch nahi kaha hoga.

Arjun:- tumhe lagthahai ki isa kabhi hosaktha hai? Tumhari maa ke bare me mujhese jyaada tum jaanthi ho annie?

Annie:- haa,.. mujhe bhi yakeen nahi horaha hai, per kya hua hoga maa itni shaanth kaise hai?

Arjun:- wahi hume pata lagana hoga ,tum tension math lo mai pata launga. Tumhe is haalat me itna sochna thik nahi hai.tum aaraam karo mai abi aatha hu.

He went out to talk with kaka.

Arjun:- kaka;,..

Kaka:- ji ,.. Arjun babu,...

Arjun:-kaka arrange tight security and b.gds around Di' family sab ke peeche b.gds rakhwaayiye.

Kaka:- per kyu Arjun babu,..

Arjun:- jaruri hai kaka bahut jaruri hai and he told wat happened in the mansion in their absence and warned him to not to tell anything to Maan and others.

Kaka:- ji ,..mai abhi sab arrange karunga.

Here in Maans room.

Maan looked at geet and, Geet tumhe ghar jaana hai,. Bacche tumhari intezaar karrahe hoga. Wo bahut pareshaan horaha hoga.[ he knew very well how much they worry about her]

Geet:- ji,..

Arjun came to maans room

Maan:- Arjun geet ko ghar drop karo.

Arjun:- ji jiju,..

Geet:- nahi ,.. meri gadi haina,.. mai chali jaungi aapko takleef karneki koi jarurat nahi hai.

Arjun:- nahi di,.. mujhe koi takleef nahi hai, aap ayiye.

Maan:- jao geet gadi kaka leke ayenge.

Geet:- thik hai aap araam kijiye, apni khayaal rakhiye, mai kal ajungi. Good night.

Maan:- thik haai good night geet.

link for part-105https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94644429

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow dear so naul told everything to arjun and arjun is ready to protect geet's family while maan is so worried seeing geet...he's worried becoz geet is innocent and dont know anything abt his mother and sister-in-law...waiting for next dear so geet is getting the feelings of love towards maan!
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank god Arjun came to know of the dangers...hope maan and dev also realize the reality of pammi, NT and Sam...do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update😊
Edited by hari21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chalo acha h atleast geet k dimak ki batti to jali!!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
aacha hua nakul ne sab kuch arjun ko bata diya...
arjun will definately handle this matter untill maan will be fine...
finally geet understand maan's love for herself...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
At last geet ke mann me bhi kuch kuch hone laga!
Ab tak geet maan ki care karti thi...fikar karti thi...uski pasnd ka khana banati thi...gussa karti thi...hasati thi...khelti bhi thi...par aaj jo feelings geet samj payi hai...vo uski jindgi me bahut bada badlav layegi...vo apne pahele pati ko to pyaar kar nahi payi...vo sara pyaar ab maan ke liye...
Chahe kitni bhi muskile aaye vo maan ka sath nahi chodegi...
Aur nakul ka to kya kehna..!! Arjun ko baat bata di!!!!
Aapne precape nahi diya😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update. So glad geet is starting to realize the amount of care and love maan has for her and vice versa. Glad Nakuru told everything to Arjun. Why do I feel something bad might happen to kaka deriving geet vehicle
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Posted: 11 years ago

ESSENCE OF LOVE - PART-105



Part:-105
Arjun and Geet r in car.
Arjun looked at Geet. She looked lost.
Arjun:- Di:,.. aap fikar math kijiye,maaji ko baath leke pareshaa math hojayiye, mai hu na mai sab thik kardunga, maiaap ko au raapki family ko kuch nahi honedunga,di;,.. mujhe yakeen kijiye, mai aapki bachhe ko kuch nahi honeduga di,..
Geet startled by his words and looked at him surprised.
Arjun:- ji,.. mujhe nakul ne sab kuch bathadiya, aur di,.. aap ne sahi nahi kiya aap kyu jiju ko ye sab nahi bathaya? jiju ko sab patachalna chahiye.Agar ye log kuch kiya tho?
Geet :- nahi,. Arjun is ek mahine tak wo mujhe kuch nahi karega tab tak hume kuch pblm nahi hai, tab tak sab thik hojayega. Hum kisina kisi solution nikalsakthe.
Arjun:- aap kyu uski sharat maanli di;? wo galat haina? jiju bahut soche samajkar decisions lethe, aur ek baar wo kuch decision liya ,bus wo kabhi nahi peeche hadthe, kabhi nahi waapas lethe aur raahi sameera ki baath jiju usse kabhi nahi pasand karthe, wo usse shaadi kabhi nahi karthe,and wo jiju ki laayak bhi nahi hai.Kya karthe aap?sirf jiju ko nahi hume bhi wo pasand nahi hai.
Geet:- Mera pass aur koi raasthanahi hai Arjun is wakth, mujhe laga ki kisibhi tarah unhe rukna hoga.isiliye mai uski saare sharat maanliya.patanahi mai sahi kiya ya galat, bus uski alawa mujhe aur koi raastha dikhayi nahi.
Arjun:-Raastha hum nilkalenge di;,.. aur wo sabse badkar hoga sab keliye accha hoga.
Geet:- Arjun;,,.tumye sab prasant ko nahi bathana wo pehli hi bahut pareshaan horaha hai pura family tut jayegi yesun kar,please arjun math bathao ye sab.
Arjun:- promise,.. di,. mai kuch nahi bathaunga aur aap unki baare me pareshaan math hojayiye mai unki hifazat keliye puri intezaam karunga. jo karna hai wo sab mai karunga, aap fikar math kijiye.
Geet:- thik ,hai.
Geet entered in the house.Ghar pura silence me hai, mohal kuch serious dikhrahahai,geet look confused. All r very quite and serious unusuall to their normal.
Prasant:- Maa,.. aap kaha gayi abhi tak? aur aap aapki phone kyu nahi leke gayi?
Geet:- sorry prasant mai ph. bhool gayithi mai maan ji ki mansion gayi thi unhe dekhne keliye.
Prasant:-maa,.. aap ko waha jaaneki kyajarurat thi? aap jaanthi ho na, wo log ko aap waha jaana pasand nahi hai, wo log phir se aap ko kuch kah sakthe agar aap ko kuch hua tho?
Geet:- nahi,.. beta mujhe kuch nahi hua mai thik hu. wo log mujhe se kuch nahi kaha. Aur beta ye soch kar hum kaise maanji ko is haalath me chode sakthe, unhe ab humari jarurat hai,beta
Aakash who is listening every thing calmly now got irritated by her words he was pissed off and blurted.
Aakash:- yaha,.. hume bhi aap ki jarurat hai maa. Patahai aapko? subha se aapki beti Ankitha kuch khaya piya nahi hai bus aap keliye pareshaan horahi hai, bahut tension horahihai, aapko patahai ishaalat me yesab unki sahat keliye acchi nah ihai, aap jaanthe hona? Aur aap ko Maan sir ki chintha horahi hai, unkisaath unki puri family hai wo unki responsibility hai aap jaanthe hona ankitha ki haalat kitni najook ha ikitni mushkil se hum gujar rahe, aap ko jarasa bhi parwah nahi hai unkeliye.
All stood numb seeing Aakash out burst with great astonishment. He never , ever talked like that with geet. He is calm going and too respects geet very much and also very understanding, but now dont know wat happened today and he vent out all his disgust on her like that.
Geet felt guilt and bad as if she commited a sin.
saying sorry to him,"i am sorry beta , i didnt mean it, i too care for her , bas mujhe se galth hogayi mujhe maaf kar,prasant stopped her,
'Aakash, ye tum kya baath karraheho? ye koi tarika hai maa se baath karneka? tameez nahi hai kya? tumjao bahar mai baath karthahu maa se, he pushed aakash to out .
Arpita and ankitha stood rooted ,in numb state not digesting wat is happening, they r in deep shock by the blurting of aakash on geet. Never,ever in their worst dream they see such an angry man.
Geet:- nahi,.. prasant mujhe isa nahi karna chahiyetha. i am sorry maa choti,.. mai apni dhun me pata nahi kya kiya . I promise beta mai dubara isa nahi karunga.
Prasant:- nahi maa aap hume galat samajrahe , hum aap keliye chintha horahaha hai isiliye aakash isa baath kiya, wo aapse bahut pyaar karthe hai maa, bahut izzat kartha hai wo aapko, ye aap bhi jaanthe ho.
Geet:- nahi,.. prasant wo thik kahrahe hai, mujhe kuch soch samaj kar karna hai jo bhi karne se pehle.sorry maa choti, arpitha ,.. she cupped their faces.
They hugged her saying ,maa,.. with tears in their eyes.
Pras:- accha maa ye bathayiye, kuch hua kya waha? wo log aapse phirse kuch kaha? bathameezi ki aapke saath? maan sir ki maaji aapse kuch sunayi?
Geet:- nahi,.. prasant waha kuvh nahi hua . maine maaji ko manaya aur wo maanli.
Arpi:- aap unhe manaya aur wo maanli? kaise kya kaha aap? unse?
Geet:- bus yahi ki wo jobhi soche rahe wo galat hai samjhaya maine use.
Pra:- aur wo maanli? maa aap such bolrahi hona? mai ye bilkul nahi maanthi ki wo itni asanise maanjayegi.
Geet:- kyu nahi maanthi?aakhir wo bhi ek maa haina ,.. unhe bhi apni bete ki chintha hothi haina?
Anki:- unhe dekh kar isa nahi lagthi hai maa
Geet:- nahi choti ,.. ye such hai wo mujhe kuch nahi kaha.
Pra:-thik hai maa aap jake araam kijiye.
they took her inside.
Prasant came out where Aakash stood.
Aakash:- I am sorry bro,..
Prasa:- sorry mujhe nahi ma ase bolo, ye kaise tarikha hai baath karneka aakash itni agressive honeka ky ajarurat hai?maa se isa kabhi nahi baath ki tum aaj tak aaj kya hua tumhe?
Aakash:- wo mai ankitha ko leke pareshaan horaha hu bro.
Pra:- Ankitha tumhari patni hai, sirf maa ki beti nahi hai, aur wo tumhari bacche ki maa banenewaali, tumhari patn iaur tumhara bachhe ki responsibility pehle tumhari hai, baad me hum sabki hai, tum kyu nahi rakhlethi unki responsibility? Aur maa humari responsibility hai, hum unki responsibility nahi hai, us per is tarah dabav dalna thik nahi hai, aur aaj ki tumhari barthav maa ke saath ki asar tho Aankitha per jyaada hoga. phir kabhi isa math karna maa ke saath. tum jaanthe ho na ye dono behana ko maa kitne maine rakthe hai kitna parwah karthe ha iwo unki maa ko?mai maanthi hu kuch pblms horaha hai, lekin isi mushkilme humsab ek dusere ke saath dena chahiye,saath khadi hona chahiye,is tarah tut the nahi.
Aakash:- ji,.. bro.,. mai maa se maafi maangunga.
Pra:_ aur ankitha kobhi manao,samjhao usse phir kabhi isa nahi karna.
Aaka:-ji ,.bro.

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago

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