MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Th-1 1/part-156/epilog /pg.156/23/9/2015 - Page 12

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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Th-10/part-103

Part:-103

Here Maan wake up fr his sleep. He looked around recollected every thing, he remembered geet and searched for her in the room. He didn't find her . He got panicked thinking about her, where is she? Kayi maa ne kuch kiya tho nahi? He hell worried and shouted for geet, Geet,...Geet,..

They listened him calling her.

She looked at Nakul and said, lagtha hai Maanji uthgaya,mai jarahihu ,aap please kuch math kahiye unhe, she ran to his room.

Maan is trying to get down the bed as he was hell worried about her, he conformed that there is something happened to her, he cursed himself for sleeping like that.

Arre,...aap kyu uthgaya bed se? Geet ran to him and caught him and stopping him not to walk .Aap abhitak thik nahi hua, aapne suna nahi dr. ne kya kaha?

Maan hold her shoulders tightly and shaking her ,he asked "tum kaha chaligayithi? maine mana kiyathana tumhe baahar jaane se? kyu gayi bahar? Tum thik ho?Maa ne phirse tumhe kuch sunayi?He was very much worried and fearing to hear anything. He is desperate to confirm that she is fine nothing happened to her.

Geet looked at him worrying about her, actually fearing of if anything happens to her. He was not at all getting calm.

She cupped his face looking him in to his eyes and making him cool,"Mai thik hu,mujhe kuch nahi hua, mai bilkul thik hu, aap shaanth hojayiye, mujhe kisine kuch nahi kaha, mai bilkul thik hu, aap shaanth hojayiye.

Maan caressing her fr. Her shoulders to her face and all over her arms, thum thik hona?

Geet:- Haa,. Mai bilkul thik hu. Aap laid jayiye,she slowly and carefully made him sit on bed and kept his leg slowly on bed and helped him to sit leaning on bed post.

Maan:- tum kaha chaligayi? looking deeply in her eyes to know the matter , he was sensing that something was happen by looking her red and swollen eyes which clearly explaining that she wept.

Geet:- trying to avoid look into his eyes mai kamare ke baahar thi, Aarpitha se baath kar rahi hu.

Nakul , who came with geet now tried to say something,"Maan babu, he called.

Maan looked at him.

Nakul:-"Maan babu, badi mam ne mam se,... and he was trying to say the whole thing to him but geet stopped him by saying,..

Geet:- Haa,.. Nakul ji lunch ka time hogaya aap jake Maan ji keliye lunch lekar aayiye,she signaled him not to say anything.

Nakul:- per mam,...

Geet:-per,... wer ,.. kuch nahi aap jaldi jake lunch lekar ayiye,.. dawayi ka time horaha hai,.jaayiye,. she folded her hands fr. behind Maan.

Nakul went looking Maan turning and turning back.

Maan sensed something.

Geet,.. kuch hua ? Maa phirse tumhe kuch kaha?

Geet controlled herself and facked,..lo:aap humesha maaji ko isa kyu samajthe? Wo bahut acchi hai,.. wo mujhe kuch nahi kaha, aap pareshaan math hojayiye. Agar koi baath ho tho mai samhalungi, aap phikar math kijiye

Maan:- lekin,...

Geet:- kaha na maine , kuch nahi hua, maaji mujhe kuch nahi kaha.

Nakul came with lunch

Geet took it fr. him and sit very near him and started to feed him.

Maan hold her hand and said, Nakul,.. geet keliye khana leke aavo.

Geet:- mai baad me khaungi pehle aap khayiye,..

Maan:- Nahi , hum saath me khayenge, mai khud khaunga, looking deep in to her eyes trying to find out the matter.

Geet:- ji,..she looked down to avoid him.

Maan looked at the plate, by seeing only he can easily say that geet has cooked the food.

Maan:- tho ,khana aapne banayi?

Geet:- ji,.. nahi,. She tried to bluff,..

Maan then came to conclusion that there is definitely something fishy which geet is trying to hide fr. him.

Nakul bring lunch for geet also. They ate in silence. Geet thinking how to hide the thing fr, maan and Maan thinking wat would have happened ,how to get that ,fr. whom?etc,.. they finished their lunch. Geet gave him his meds. He took without saying anything.

Geet is very quite unlike her usual self. Maan became more worried fore her seeing her like that.

Dev and Arjun ,annie reached mansion at the same time. Arjun surprised seeing Dev coming fr. outside.

Arjun:-Dev tum kaha se arahe ho?

Dev:- wo,.. Arjun mujhe office jaana pada Aadhi ne call kiya foreign deal keliye.

Arjun:- tho tum di ko akeli chode ke gaya office. Dev tum itna laparwayi kaise hosakthe ho? Tum jaanthe hona ghar ke mohal kaisa hai?

Dev:- nahi ,..Arjun,. ghar me koi nahi hai,aur kaka bhi hai bhabhi ke saath, mujhe bhabhi ne bheja hai, wo deal bahut impt hai isiliye bhabhi ne mujhe manayi jaanekeliye.

Kaka also came at that time.

Arjun@Dev:- tum kaha chalagaya is wakth?di ko chode ke?

Kaka:- mai kuch jarur kaamse gaya hu ,lekin tab ghar me koi nahi tha,isliye b.gds. ko batha kar chala, kyu kuch hua kya he worried now.

Arjun:-patanahi,. Hum log bhi abhi abhi araha hai,aur maa bhi agayi bahar se pata nahi kya hua hoga. Darr lagraha hai,kya sunna hoga, and they ran to inside.

Pammi sat in the couch in hall.

Dev:- maa,.. aap kab agayi?

Pammi:- bus abhi 1hr pehle , kyu kya hua? Tum log itna pareshaan kyu horaha hai?

Annie:- shaayad bhabhi school gayi hogi Arjun.

Arjun:- I just hope so.

They went to Maans room, getting their shock of their life seeing geet there not understanding the situation.

Annie:- Bhabhi aap school nahi gayi abhitak?

Arjun looked at Maan with puzzled face don't know wat to ask, whom to ask.

Maan:- Dev:,.. tum kaha chalagya geet ko akeli chode ke, maine mana kiya thana , he asked with fumimg face.

Dev:- bhai,.. mai bus office gayatha important deal finalise karne keliye Adhi ne phone kiya aap nahi jaapaye tho mujhe jaanapada.

Maan:- to hell with that deal kya jaruratthi thum yahase jaanekeliye , agar kuch hua tho,..

Geet:- ye aap kaise baath karrahi ho? Dev ne sahi kiya ,ye aap ka kaam karne gaya aur aap unhe dat rahe ho, maine bheja use, isme unki koi galathi nahi hai.Aur mai bilkul thik hu aap kyu bekar me sab ko dat raheho .

Annie,.. Arjun,Dev tum log jake lunch kijiye .Annie tum lunch karke aaraam karo, thaki hui hogi, mai sham tak rahungi yaha mai rakhthi hu maanji ki khayaal.

They looked eachother don't know wat to do, wat to say.

Geet:- Areee ,.. jaona,..

The trio went looking back to geet and Maan.

Maan:- tho mai sab ko dat tha hu? He asked with anger to geet.

Geet:- haa,.. bilkul,..

Maan:-"GEET" ,.. he gritted his teeth.

Geet:- dekha,.. dekha,.. kitn gussa,.. kyu itna gussa karthe ho aap chote,chote baathon keliye, ye thik nahi hai aap ki shahat keliye. Chaliye ab aap aaraam kijiye.

Maan:- aaraam,.. araam,. Bahut kiya araam thag gayahu mai aram lete lethe. Mujhe neend nahi arahahai.

Geet:- tho kya karoge aap?

Maan:-mera laptop do, waha hai table per mai kuch office ka kaam kartha hu.

Geet:- kya? aap kaam karoge is haalat me?noways,. mai aapko kaam nahi karnedungi.

Maan:-tho mai kya karu lethe lethe mujhe bore horaha hai.

Geet:- kaam ke alawa kuch aur kariye .

Maan:- kya karu kaamke alawa,tumhare saath romance karu?[agar tum karnedethe tab na]he murmered.

Geet:-kya,..?kya kaha aap?

Maan:- nahi,.. kuch nahi,.. haa,. Mai,.. mai,. Kuch khelna chahthahu.

Geet:- khel? kya khelthe aap?in haalath me?

Maan:- kyu? mai kuch indoor games khelsaktha huna? Jaisa ki,..

Geet:- haa,.. jaisa ki, ludo, snakes and ladders ,pachhis, words building, kya aap bacche ho Maanji? Ye sab khelne keliye?

Maan:- kuch games badonki bhi hotha hi geet jaisa ki chess, haa mai chess khelunga tumhare saath, aur is baar mai tumhe haraunga, maine achhi tarah practice ki , aur mai tumhe haraunga is baar.

Geet:- tho aap mujhe harayenge?

Maan:- haa,.. chahe tho khelke dekho.

Geet:- thik hai,.. mai board lekar aathi hu,.. kahahai?

Maan:- waha uperwaali cupboard me hai.

Geet:- thik hai mai nikalthi hu., she tried to get that board fr.the top cup board but as it is too high she could not get it so she bring a stool and tried to get on to it to reach the shelf.

Maan:- nahi ,geet gir jaogi tum rehnedo , mai nakul ko bulaunga, but she didn't listen him.

Geet:- nahi maanji mai nikalthi hu isse , mujhe kuch nahi hoga and she got on the stool and tried to reach it.

The stool is stumbling geet failed to balance and about to fall.

Maan screamed loudly"GEET" his heart stopped at once seeing geet falling.

Arjun heard his loud voice and ran to his room and looked geet and caught her fr. falling."DI"calling her.

Annie too ran to Maan seeing him that numb state.

Annie:- bhai,.. bhai,.. she shooked him calling him bhai,.. bhabhi thik hai,..kuch nahi hua bhabhi ko, she again and again shooked him to bring him to his senses.But he is no where to listen her his mind got the shock of loosing her and not at all responding to outer senses. She shooked him again and again.

Arjun and Geet looked at Maan .

Geet ran to him and hold him by his cheeks cupping his face with her two hands saying,

Mai thik hu maanji,. Dekhiye mai bilkul thik hu She shooked him caressing his face ,mai bilkul thik hu,"MAAN"[ haa,.. she again called him "MAAN"second time, have u remember when she called him MAAN for the first time]

Can anyone tell me when this happened?

Teacherji ,

Part 64 ...maan...jab 17 saal ki ladki ka maan ke bhai ne reap kiya tha tab...

Ye geet bhi na maan ko kuch batadi nahi hai..to maan ko kaise pata chalega ?

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update
well except those chudails that too three in number i like the update

and ur writing didu

just lloved it
geet is hiding still maan know

i know maan is super smart 😛

Sheetal Bahut accha student ho tum, distinction mila tumhe, per ek baath hai jitna pucho utnahi batana hi, jyaada information dene se jyaada marks nahi milthe.now i am enjoying my writing even ,bahut maza araha hai isa tumlogonse interact karnese, bahut achhi ho tum,really ur encouraging me a lot , u know i showed ur all responses to my sister , who was in deep loss loosing my jiju also got interested in my story and today she took my writings in pendrive to go throug hthem even though i refuse to it as i felt emberassed , wat she will think about me? i dont said to any one of my family till now,she only came today while i am updating and saw all ur responses. dont know how to thank u, as she is trying to get out of her sorrow. thank u very much yaar

hi karna91,urs is a good one but i thought for the 3rd concept in first one maan has only one brother vicky.

hi anu sorry for being sooo late