MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Th-1 1/part-156/epilog /pg.156/23/9/2015 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Di 2nd concept is amazing start wid that plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
My POV
1. You are good writer...so be confident..Essence of love aise to 100+ nahi pahucha na?

2. Hum sab ka interest hi ek hai...MAAN GEET...to concept to ek honge hi! Par sabki treatment alag hoti hai aur vahi story ko alag banata hai...

3. As a reader muje aapki writing pasand hai..to aap jo likhengi muje to achha hi lagega !

4. Muje sab concept achhe lage...aap jo bhi likhana chahe! 1st vala thoda jaida pasand aya😃

5 EOL to continue rakhongi na?

6 eagerly waiting for your decision and next part of EOL
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Posted: 11 years ago
how i left my 1st sri,.. its my ever favoretena i dontleave it middle , its just my mind is itching me to take up , if u encourage me like this surely i will trymy level best to meet ur huger. thanks for ur immeadiate responses loved u all
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Posted: 11 years ago
Write all stories one by one. but first one is the best so write it first.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. All concepts are nice
But l loved the first one
Waiting for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
1.Geets parents marry her to a guy who left her with her jewellery and property, no physical relation. Her parents tried to marry her again with someother not telling him about the first one , geet refuses to this strongly and her parents tries to kill her Maan saves her. He knows everything.. etc..etc...Full of romance....
BUT-
Lovable family for maan...dev, vicky and annie as his own sibilings not steps...goody dev- nt pair...and also bad past for maan...i hope his charecter will be same as in the serial...this is my suggestion...wht you think?
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely concepts yaar..i love all the 3... but i fall inlove with 3rd one..will be waiting for pro..good luck..
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Posted: 11 years ago
i like the third plot!! whichever...they all sound good...do all 3!!
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Posted: 11 years ago


I love first 2 themes...

last one is we have read many times...

first and second theme are also very familiar but there is so much possibility to mould story into different one...

u can start stories one by one...

and I am sure with ur writing style u can create magic...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hai friend,3 concept are nice.
but i would suggest u to take up 3rd theme maan,geet,sameera story
because
-> 1st theme it seem like a same track as it is in serial so it may feel it similar.
->2nd theme maan dadaji and geet dadaji friends so many ff are already build on this by our maaneet ff writers so i feel this concept also famaliar
->3rd theme maan sameera geet love story author sweety is also writting ff on similar topic but its in intial phase.moreover u have ur unique style writing so i suggest u this ff
i want to give some suggestion on 3rd theme. donot take me wrong its just a suggestion if u like it u include or leave it
1.u said due to sam maan will hate his own child.yaar no father will hate his child even if he was at fault at time unless he\she have commited big mistake. but the poor sole is not at fault so maan should love his baby and protect her even .i feel this becoz by sam living baby loose her mom love if maan also hate baby from where it get love.rest of your concept is awesum.yaar there is nothing personal.i am sry if any of thought hv hurt u.but plz if it is possible modify it thankyou

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