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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
so sry dear..hope ur fathers soul rest in peace..
dont say u became an orphan..
u have a family with u
think about them
if u feel low who will console ur daughters..
take care of ur family
may god give u the strength in this timing..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
So sorry to hear .
May your father rest in peace.
Take care.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83


oh very sorry to know about ur father's demise...

I came to this thread to know whether u updated or not but instead find this sad note...

may he rest in peace...

will pray to God to give u enough strength to bear this loss...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Friends,
dont know why god is so angry on me, pouring all sorrows and miserabilities on me at a time, first i lost my father few days back and now my jiju , husband of my sister is on death bed fr. cancer fighting for life. may be 1 or 2 months more his days . i was in deep shock. my sister is my second mother. fr, the day i lost my mother before 3 years she became my mother i vent out all my frustration and dipression on her and she cocoons me in her arms., comforts me give solace to me by soothing my pain, now she is in trouble. i could do nothing simply letting tears, i dont know how to control me, my pblms never ending , i didnt even get over fr, my fathers demise now this is.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Aapki sister problem main hai,aap unki takat banane ki koshish kijiye. Jo pyar aur himmat unhone aapka diya hai, aaj aapki baari hai unko sambhal ne ki aur aap yuhi toot jayengi to uska kya hoga?aapke jiju bhi pareshan honge...uske liye bhi aap sabko shant rahena hoga...take care...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Very sorry know about fater.
May his sole rest in peace.
U have tibe verry strong. Now ur sistdr needsz u more.
Will pray to god to give u strength and courage to face situation bravely.
Take care.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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May god give you strength to face all difficulties of life.Be brave and face life as it comes because it is something that is not in our control.God bless you and your family.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh very sorry to hear about ur sister's husband...

what to do Anuradha its fate...

u try to be ur sister's strength and be by her side...

may God give her strength to bear this situation...

apne saamne apne husband ko maut ke muh mein jaate hue dekhna is something I can't even imagine...please God never let any women be in this situation...I am having tears when writing this...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Friends my jiju died on 24th of this month yaars fully in deep sorow pray for me to get over fr. this .cant able to console my sister. please give me ur support.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi;...
Friends me back...after long gap. I took long as i was drowned in my losses of my fathers and jijus death. Still i feel very low, tried to give best of mine,but i know it is not up to ur expectations but please be with me . Tried a lot to overcome this pain, had struggled to think about the story.Please support me in my miserability, need lot of ur responses and openions to boost myself.
Thank u for everything.Here is next part.
Link for previous parts---http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3524536

MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-7/part-102/14/10/2013




PART-102
Mansion.
Nainatara:- Ye aap kya kiya mummiji...? Aap uss bitch ko ghar me aneki ijajat di? Aap kya sochke isa kiya .Ghar thak ye gandhagi ayi tho Maanji ko hum kaise nipatayenge? Aap kya soche rahi ho? ye Geet humari kaam karsakthe?Mai kabhi nahi socha ki aap itni bevkoof ka kaam karsakthe?koi dushman ko ghar me rahnedethe?
Pammi:-Naintara,... tum kya sochethiho? mai koi bevkoof nahi hu 'dushman ko humesha humari ankhoki saamne rahnadiyajay, taaki hum us per ek nazar rakhsake. Aur tumbhi kaho kya iske alawa aur koi raastha hai humare pass? Maan ko patachalgaya ki hum uss geet ko marne chahthe hai, ise me hum kya karsakthe? bolo,...
Wo khud agayi humari jaal me "Shikar khud agayi Shikari ke pass, kyu nahi hum isse humari kaam karwathe?Ek baar Maan Sameera se shaadi karle, aur vicky ko chudwaliya, baad me hum iss gandhagi ko humesha humesha ke liye is dunia se mitayenge.
Nain s.t.:-Maanji Sameera ke saath shaadi karle ya uss Geet ke saath kare, dono mereliye utnahi khatharnak hai. Aap kya jaanthe maaji ki mai kya chahthi hu. Maanji jisse bhi shaadi kare wo mujhe manjoor nahi chahe wo sameera ho ya geet. Maanji sirf mera hai mai usse kabhi nahi chodungi us sameera ko. Mai ye kabhi nahi hone dungi. Mai hu is ghar ki malkin. Kisibhi tarah Maanji ko hazil karungi aur ye saare jyadad doulat ghar ki malkin banungi. Mujhese galathi hui us wakth jab mai Dev ke saath pyaar ka natak karke usse shaadi ki, tab mujhe nahi patatha ki Dev is ghar ki asli aulaad nahi hai, Maanji ki step brother hai, Aap unki step mother hai. Agar mujhe pehlehi patachala hotha, mai Maanji ko mere pyaar ki jaal me phasake usse hi shaadi karthi hu. per tab tak late hogaya. per ab nahi, mai kisibhi tarah mere manmaani purikarungi aap jo chahe wo kariye, bus mai aapka plan kabhi nahi kaamyaab hone nahi dungi,mai khud dekhungi muje maalum hai mujhe kya karne hai.
Sameera:- Ji,.. buaji,.. Naintara thik kah rahihai. hume is Geet per kaise yakeen karsakthe hai? mujhe nahi lagtha ki wo hume help karthe hai.
Pammi:- Tho jao,... Maan ko phasao apni jaaal me shaadi keliye use manavo,.. kyu? Kya tum karsakthe? bolo?
Nahina,... isiliye mai uss Geet ke help leni ki socheliya.Aur mujhe yakeen hai Maan uski baath jarur maanthe aur raahi ye baath,... mai koi bevkoof nahi hu ki uss per bharosa karke ankh bandkar baitneki, uss per nazar rakhthi hu mai ,har pal har wakth mai unki zaz karthi hu,wo puri tarah humari kabje me agayi,uski pass aur koi raastha nahi hai siva humari help kerne se, ab dekho kaam bahut aasani se hogi humari.
Tumbhi jara dhyaan rakhna usse observe karna kaise ye Maan ke saath pesh karthi hai, kaise usski khayaal rakhthi hai, uski dhyaan rakhthi hai, uski khana pina sab per dhyaan rakh, sikho kuch uss Geet se samjhi tum? kaise uski seva karthe sab sikhlo,...
Sameera:- Ji,.. buaji,..
s.t.:- Dhyaan rakhu,..? khayaal rakhu, seva karu,.. myfoot,... mujhese nahi hoga buaji,.. ye aap kya baath karthe ho.kaise jamane me ho aap? ye saare chese mujhese nahi hotha.
They dispersed thinking their own plans.
Here in Geets house.
Prasant:- Ye kya hai Arpitha? tum kamse kam maa se puch bhi nahi sakthe ki wo kaha jaa rahi hai?
Arpitha:- prasant mai kya karsakthi hu , maa ko kal bahut gussa ayi isliye mai kuch pucha nahi.
Aakash:-Bhabhi,... aap isa kaisa chup rahsakthe ho? dekho ab kya hua? kaise pata chalega hume wo kaha hai? wo unki ph. bhi nahi leke gayi.
Anki:- Aakash maa jarur Maan sir ko dekhne keliye mansion gayi hogi.
All:- Kya?... lekin wo waha kyu jayegi waha wo log haina?
Prasant immediayely took his cell and called to Maan but his ph.kept swicthed off. then he dailed to Arjun.
Arjun:- Haa,.. prasant tum di ke baare me puchnekeliye hoga wo mansion me hai.
Pra:- kya? lekin sir,...
Arjun:- chintha math kijiye prasant Dev hai waha aur mai bhi thodi der me jaa rahahu, aur is wakth ghar me maaji nahi hai tum chintha math kar hum hai,... hum di ko kuch nahi honedenge. Aur kaka , her b.gs. bhi hai di ke saath, kuch nahi hoga usse.
Pras:- thik hai sir he kept the cell and tell to them.
Aakash:- ye maa thik nahi kiya kya jarurat hai waha jaane ki, he shook his head in disgust.
All felt worry for her Prasant called to kaka.
Kaka:- haa,..prasant babu mai mam ke saath hu. mansion me Aap chintha math kijiye, is wakth ghar me koi nahi hai sab bahar gaye, mai rakhunga mam ki khayaal aap befikar rahiye.
Pras:- thik hai,...
Kaka kept the ph. but it ringed again, call fr. the ditective agency which Maan hired to watch Naintara.
Kaka:-hello
Ph:-----------------------------
Kaka:- kya wo tapes and video clippings milgaya?
Ph:---------------
Kaka:- thik hai mai abhi aarahahu,.. suno,.. wo bahut important hai aap usse zara dhyaanse chupake rakhna.
Ph:-----------------------------------
Kaka:- mai abhi nikalthi hu,... and he started to go out to bring them as nobody in house he sensed no danger for Geet, he thought he may reach there before the trio reach mansion. He warned the b.gds. and went to bring them Then only the trio came and all the above 101 part happened.
In Mansion
Geet sat sunk in the couch all depressed and shocked , baffled by the turning of events. She lost all her senses in this shock. she became total numb and tears raining fr. her eyes. She shuddered by the terror and fear, worry for her family and Maan. Not understand fr, whom get help, solace didnt find any help around. She shuddered like a tender leaf in a freaking storm, covered by total darkness searching for a ray of light of hope. Dont know fr. where can she get help and solace.
Nakul came , who stand behind the door and listening everything to her , seeing her codition,.. he called,...
Nakul:- Mam,..mam he shooked her , she looked at him comimg fr. her state of daze.
Mam aap,... aap ye sab Maan babu ko bathana chahiye, ye itna ghatiya log hai aap inki baath nahi maanna chahiye, chaliye mam hum ye sab Maan babu ko bathayenge, ye jarur kuch karthe, ye itna girihue aurath hai, Maan babu isse apni sagi maa se behtar izzat dethe hai,.. wo kabhi isse southeli nahi samjhaya, is family ko apna samjha, uskeliye kitna kuch kiya , uski saari khushia choddiya, din raath in logon keliye mehnath ki ,aaj uss pammi ne jo kiya mai usse nahi sahtha hu. Aur aap ne galat kiya ise sharat maanke, uss sameera Maan babu keliye sahi nahi ha wo uski layak nahi hai wo maan babu ko khush nahi de sakthe ap ne galat kiya. Mai abhi ki abhi ye saare baath Maan babu ko bathaunga. He started to go to maans room.
Geet Nahi,... she caught his hand and stopped him.
Nahi ,.. nakulji:,.. aap ye saare baath Maanji ko nahi batha sakthe, unki tabiyat abhitak thik nahi hai,unper kisibhi tanaav math hone chahiye, iski asar unki shahat per hoga. aap kuch math bathayiye
Nakul:- lekin mam itni badi baath hum kaise chupathe Agar ye log kuch kiya tho? Maan babu ko patachale tho wo jarur kuch karthe. rokega in logonko ,warna ye aapka family ko nuksaan pahunche tho?
Geet:- kuch nahi hoga mere bachhe ko wo kuch nahi karsakthe maine ek mahine ka time maangana tab tak wo kuch nahi karsakthe baad me hum dekhenge kya karna hai.
Nakul:- mam ye galat hoga, mai isa nahi karrnedunga,... and he is going to Maans room.
Geet:- aapko meri kasam nakulji,... aap kya chahthe? ye sab bathakar aap maanji ki haalat aur bigadna chahtheho? please meri baath suniye aap chup hojayiye,mai dekhthi hu kya karna hai. .

[jaanthi hu thoda boring hai, no maneet scenes , but needed to the story lead. think u understand me cooperate with me]

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago

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