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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

couldnt read the part😭 was workin tilll now😭 kal 8 ko class bhi hai...ryt now also i cant read😭


atleast ek space toh lemme reseve...otherwise wont get that also ...
will read it tomoro pakka n comment

Purvi.. kal padhna... waise bhi bakwas hai...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


4 months?! Itna time itni jaldi kaise ho gaya? 😲

None of your readers mind the bak bak which increased the length of the story. 😆

4 months .. average accha hai na...😆😆
wish I had kept it MG only... it would be done already..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


</div><div>Purvi.. kal padhna... waise bhi bakwas hai...😃


I totally disagree!! Kyun Purvi ko aise bol rahi ho?! I'll say, Purvi, bohat hi accha chapter hai but read it when you have time because you'll actually remain in the feel for some time after reading it. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


4 months .. average accha hai na...😆😆
wish I had kept it MG only... it would be done already..😃


*Sigh* When the writer says something like this, what would the poor readers like me do? I - and almost all the readers - love DevTara equally as much as Maaneet in this story and I'm glad you did it this way. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


I totally disagree!! Kyun Purvi ko aise bol rahi ho?! I'll say, Purvi, bohat hi accha chapter hai but read it when you have time because you'll actually remain in the feel for some time after reading it. 😃

Spoken like a friend... looking thru' rose colored glasses..
Am not happy with the last one.. not able to write at this time.. so a bit mad at myself... I have no back ups now..Ouch
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


*Sigh* When the writer says something like this, what would the poor readers like me do? I - and almost all the readers - love DevTara equally as much as Maaneet in this story and I'm glad you did it this way. 😳

👏👏 Certificate chaap du... DQ'ing at its best...
Me too.. wish I could write more... I think I am down also because the story is winding down...now that we will be in present..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


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Spoken like a friend... looking thru' rose colored glasses..

Am not happy with the last one.. not able to write at this time.. so a bit mad at myself... I have no back ups now..


@Bold: it could be true because I'm just a normal human who can get biased but had I only been a stranger reader who didn't know the writer, I would have enjoyed it just as much as I did. What I didn't tell you earlier was that the lat portion have me the feeling I used to get when I watched GHSP. And that is something which happened to me after quite some time.

Don't be mad at yourself for not having back ups. I'm sure you'll be able to write as soon as you feel better. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1



<div>👏👏 Certificate chaap du... DQ'ing at its best...

Me too.. wish I could write more... I think I am down also because the story is winding down...now that we will be in present..


DQing ka certificate do gi toh chale ga lekin agar US wala certify karna chahti ho toh nahin chale ga! 😆
Trust me when I say, I really do understand how you must be feeling at the moment. I am in a similar situation.
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Posted: 12 years ago
HEART BREAKING UPDATE SO SAD KABIR MOM WENT THROUGH HELL YET SHE NEVER THOUGHT ABOUT LEAVING HIM WHY DOES IT WOMAN STAY IN SUCH SITUATION BEATEN AND ABUSED BECAUSE HER HUSBAND IS A PATHETIC WORM WHO USES HER AS HIS PUNCHING BAG BECAUSE HE HIMSELF IS A LOOSER SO SAD I HOPE KABIR HAS ONLY GOOD INTENTION ABOUT GEET AND WHEN SHE SAY NO IT MEAN EXACTLY THAT AWESOME UPDATE LOVED HOW SHE WAS TAKING CARE OF MAAN THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Intro about Kabir was sad. Feel sad for his mother.

Maan and Geet romance time after long, sweet.

Continue soon.

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