The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 94

Originally posted by: Onir

Yayy!!! First again. 🥳... I feel so good to continue my record 😆😆 Thanks 🤗

Woah! what an update! So much contrast in two halves of the same part. 👏👏 Great job!!!

Maithili ... felt for her. Your portrayal of her character was excellent, it was like you took me through her life in an accelerating tempo and then BANG! brought it down all of a sudden to come face-face with harsh reality her life has become that she finds no worth living it. She lived such a life which was a total contrast to her sheltered and loved life with her parents and loved ones... and the was subjugated to a life of being under continuous scanner and doubts and numerous questions that even a normal activity as staring out in space or enjoying time in silence at the balcony was accounted and questioned about. There are many in our society as her, as well as like her husband 😡. Kabir's father represents a part of our society who mask their own in capacities, shortcomings, insecurities and lacking with their own dominance, superiority, possessiveness, and power of money and fake strength on someone weak. His own failure to cherish and love the rose handed to him by life and inability to be in terms with its beauty he tarnished it shattering and plucking out the delicate petals leaving her with just thorns to be endured daily. Loved your symbolizing the transformation Prized rose in youth ---- Quiet demure silent woman bearing atrocities.

Years of rejection, self doubt, living in fear and with decreased self worth was met with a combination of humiliation and shunning away by her husband with wounds not only physically but also on her soul and emotions leading to a complete breakdown that she so suicide as last resort. I agree her life wasn't that great juggling between an obsessive husband and rebellious son but then that life did give her some sanity and not this present miserable self that she feels life not worth living.

And I officially hate Brij so very much 😡 Disgusting man 😡

Great work making me feel all of it here 👏

Kabir's character has undergone a great transformation in this chapter form what was perceived and judged about him in the last part of his ... 👏👏👏 Somewhat his perspective and challenges in lief does make sense and it makes me see him in a different light. 😊 Not that he was right but yes I can somewhat relate to his this dimension. This guy has tunneled vision because all that life has dished out to him. Very well explained hsi bitterness with life in that single sentence... "Pyaar karna paise walo ka shauq ho sakta hai..." But what I liked was his transformation to some extent to live off his own hard earned money taking care of his mother and self too with his hard work, somewhere Geet's innocence and humility and compassion did help him I guess. 😳 Bambi is such a sweet heart 😊 Love her ❤️ Only hope he can repay her in a way that doesn't harm her relation with Maan babu. 😲 Nahi toh Kabir will surely get many red faces 😡😡😡

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Maan also had cold and sneezing... 😆 I can understand. I hate Kadas and had to have it yesterday 🤢 Adarak wali cahi is much better... and yahan pe added incentives bhi mile... 😳 Koi mujeh bhi adarak wali chai de do... 😆 Maan's "Acchoo"s were so appreciated by me 🤣 mera haal aur uska bilkul parallel hai is baat mein... 😆😆

Loved the song... apt and lovely. 👍🏼 So it seems Maan has again started listening to songs... does that mean he has found some success in dreams ka dept. 😉😉😆

Also liked how he had left it to her to set their relation at her own pace and choice with him only taking initiative and giving the necessary push. 😳 👏👏

She cursed him for being a bade sher wala with her sweet cribbing 🤣 again! Kya kare iska. 😆 Yet she had concerned for his well being. 😳 Bambi is such a cutie and sweet. Love her innocence ... ❤️ And then that Vit-C---- Orange logic 🤣 seriously she's one in a million. 😆😆

Two days avoidance was well payed for and rewarded with some cozy and heartfelt moments in cramped up places 😳 🤣 Hyaee they both ultimately land up in such places na... Avi you want them forever to have sleepless or restless nights full of desired dreams of each other. Isse torture bolu ya phir Uniquely different romance... 😳😉

Hayee the Gair- jhoota- sirf apna dialogues and scene though similar to GHSP yet had a twist of your own 👏

Loved it ❤️

Precap : Interesting 😆 Avi toh maan ko pagal karke hi chodegi... Geet ki remaining kaam Avi pura karegi... 🤣

Waiting waiting abhi se 😃

Originally posted by: gurti30

loved the part dear

maaneet are so cute. geet dont want to talk to maan as he ignored her but is concerned for him and giving him adrak wali tea

felt bad for kabir and his mother . hope he is not falling for geet

interesting precap

Originally posted by: jannat89

awesome update dear
totally rocked it plus I loved it 😊
but i love the most last part, geet and maan it was outstanding
waiting 4 next part
thanx 4 d pm dear
update soon

Originally posted by: ameeranalikhan

beautiful story😊

read it in one go

really liked dev and naintara part

this is the first time i am eagerly waiting for devu&i star part as much as maanet

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Originally posted by: heytal

We say in Gujarati that

'Its not necessary that if you are beautiful your life will be the same!'

Kabir's past and his mom's plight was really painful

Poor thing was punished for just being beautiful😒

Sick minds always think petty😡

Insecurity and Jealousy... the nastiest things there are

Somewhere u can relate to Kabir and his need for money made him lie to Geet but still a man of ethics will never opt this even if he plans to return the money some day😕

Geet as innocent and a wonderful person that she is forgave him😊

So thats how 'angel' Geet meets Maithali Bhattacharya

Hamari Geet hain hi aisi ke koi bhi usse pyaar kar le uska ho jaaye

Maithali longing for her and also fears to be abandoned by her just like some so called 'apne' 😡

Maithili is the name of Sita also, I am sure you know. I always wanted this type of a reference in my story. Todays man is not Ram unfortunately..

But Kabir falling for Geet😒

sorry but

"Geet ka naam toh sirf Maan ke saath hi accha lagta hain!"

Kabir is falling for Geet?😲 Maine aisa toh nahi likha... he is shutting his eyes from whoever he is falling for... Kabir plays a vital role in Geet's life... perhaps you will be surprised by him..

Maan ko sardi-zhukaam ho gaya...loveria kam tha kya😉

Cold shower ka natija hai.. everyone forgot that... Dard bhi tu aur dawa bhi tu.,. Sardi jinki wajah se huvi wohi ab adrak wali chai pilayegi😆😆

Maan finally decides to talk to Geet

I guess the thought of going away from his Giit gave him the needed push to come out clear on his feelings and also wait for her😳

The library part was so cute

specially pantry ki tang galiyaan aur Maaneet😎

Giit toh chai se orange juice tak pohuch gayi ab bechaara already Bournvita se toh pareshan ho chuka hain😆 and the list continues...

I was making Pineapple juice and it occurred to me to add that part in. Waise bhi ideas kam nahi hai Maan ko pareshan karne ke liye...😆😆

The jhootha scene was simply superb

show ki yaad aa gayi😭

par jhootha kahne se pyaar badhta hain na😳

Chalo kuch toh shuruaat hui😛

Grrr Prof Shetty ko bhi abhi hi aana tha😡

Avi tu baaz nahi aayegi na

Darr mat hum sab chun chun ke badla lenge😉😆

Superb update

start was really poignant but Maaneet magic😳

Song selection as always perfect!

Sorry net is on-n-off today

Thanks for updating

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