The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Posted: 12 years ago

#941

Originally posted by: UNICORN75
Awesome story...Always been a slient reader of all ur writing including the feedback u give in other FFs...Always love and agree to ur wonderful insights...This FF is very unique..Though the parts are written in diff timeframes for each couple...the continuity is never lost.Ur flow of the story is like watching a dreamy tv show rather than reading an FF .A big applaud to ur awesome writing 👏 👏

Your comment put a smile on my face. Thanks so much for breaking the silence😃

I hope to keep you entertained... thanks for the nice words... I am still learning but truly the compliment makes me happy.. Shukriya... please leave me your name next time so I can address you properly.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#942

Originally posted by: -Mishu-
awesome update avi :)

Thanks Mishu! How are you dear?

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Posted: 12 years ago

#943

Originally posted by: leksh
hayye...mein mar jawa...
jab kuch baat kehana hota hai tho ankhon se sab kuch keh deti.hai...
aur khch nahi kehana hote tho itniii baat ... hayye ye to hamari geet hi kar sakti hai...
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maan geet part is very nice... 👏
maan silent se romantic lover benreha hai...😉😉 good going maan...👍🏼

aur vaise hi itni pyar se meetha check karke giit maan ko adrk vali chai dega tho vo tho roz bimar padega na... vaise ye bin mausam sardi vo cold shower ke vajse tho nahi...
area hamre nakul tho warn bhi kiya tha... maan babu hi self control ki chakar mein pad gaye the...😆😆

aur kabir kiske baare main soch reha hai... i know the angel is our geet... but the person's thought he just kept aside is not geet right😕😕... i think kabir is a positive chara... but when i read about his mother's story i don't know why i feel like it is related to brij... lets see what comes next...

what is in the next part... is it about dev tara or is it abut chandan...

lovely update...👏👏👏👏
waiting for next ...
update very very very soon...plllzzz

Good catches on all parts...

Sardi cold shower ki wajah se thi.. jo dard deti hai wahi dawa bhi degi...😆😆

Poor Maan, ab Avi ke torture chamber se kab bahar aayega...😆

also about Maithili...👍🏼

You are paying good attention to the story Leksh. I am glad you are liking it...

Thanks for the comment😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#944

Originally posted by: punam2712
WHAT A LOVELY SONG - AND SO APT
HAYE MERE DIL KA CHAIN TO KISI NE LE LIYA
MAAN KA HAAL TO BURA HAI - AB GEET KA BHI WAHI HAAL HAI
PAR EK DOOSRE SE KAHE KAISE

KABIR'S STORY WAS SAD - FROMS RICHES TO RAGS - IT IS DIFFICULT TO ADJUST

POOR MAITHLY
SHE HAD A RAW DEAL IN LIFE

BUT NOW THERE IS AN ANGEL IN THEIR LIFE AND HOPE SHE BRINGS HOPE TO THEM
BUT JUST PRAY THAT KABIR DOESN'T RUIN HER RELATION WITH MAAN

Thanks Punam for the support. I am liking that you guys are accepting so much in this story. I was very nervous for this part.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#945

Originally posted by: --Fairy--
Amazing update ..the way you portray maithili character n transform kabir is so touchy n emotional , actually i felt maithili difficults
ooops maan achooo thankz to monsoon wah adrak wali chai woh mishty kae saath tu kaise aye dil ko chain ko maan babu
loved the maaneet moments precap uff bechare maan lol

Monsoon nahi.. cold shower..😉

Thanks Fairy..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#946

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie
we got another angle in maneet's lub story - kabir..

his father was pathetic..

i loved maneet part.. Adrak wali chai..

nice update Avi..

Kabir is not an angle yet Mannu...

Thanks😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#947

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash
runs to get danda n bang prof shetty...

😆😆 Only you would do that...😆 Bechare ne 10 mins toh diye romance ke liye... Ladka slow hai toh how is it his fault..😉

Thanks BHB🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#948

Originally posted by: nehapushkar

Lovely update ⭐️
Yesterday only i saw this song ' oh mera dil ke chain '
On sony mix - Rajesh khanna & Tanuja
Beautiful lines - suited maan state of mind perfectly
Do u remember when in Geet - geet doesnt speak with maan when he rejects her thankyou
roses, how desperate he is to hear her speak , & also when geet is in outhouse ,maan orders food
for her , he eats her jhootha & geet chides him
Ur update reminded me those 2 instances

wil wait for ur nxt update

I picked most of the songs in March when I started to shift from OS to FF... almost all are my hubby's favorite songs and they suit the male leads.

Thanks Neha. I purposely pick some of the scenes from GHSP to add that memory to the story.

Glad you are liking it..😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#949

Originally posted by: dqno1

Shuru toh 4 months pehle se hua tha! 😲with about double the readers😕
Anyway not going to gripe about readership. At least the ones who are there are following each chapter...
This was an OS Mari... iss mein se Avi ke bak bak ne 34 chapters bana diye...😆😆

4 months?! Itna time itni jaldi kaise ho gaya? 😲

None of your readers mind the bak bak which increased the length of the story. 😆