The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 93

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Posted: 12 years ago
We say in Gujarati that
'Its not necessary that if you are beautiful your life will be the same!'
Kabir's past and his mom's plight was really painful
Poor thing was punished for just being beautiful😒
Sick minds always think petty😡

Somewhere u can relate to Kabir and his need for money made him lie to Geet but still a man of ethics will never opt this even if he plans to return the money some day😕
Geet as innocent and a wonderful person that she is forgave him😊

So thats how 'angel' Geet meets Maithali Bhattacharya
Hamari Geet hain hi aisi ke koi bhi usse pyaar kar le uska ho jaaye
Maithali longing for her and also fears to be abandoned by her just like some so called 'apne' 😡

But Kabir falling for Geet😒
sorry but
"Geet ka naam toh sirf Maan ke saath hi accha lagta hain!"

Maan ko sardi-zhukaam ho gaya...loveria kam tha kya😉

Maan finally decides to talk to Geet
I guess the thought of going away from his Giit gave him the needed push to come out clear on his feelings and also wait for her😳

The library part was so cute
specially pantry ki tang galiyaan aur Maaneet😎
Giit toh chai se orange juice tak pohuch gayi ab bechaara already Bournvita se toh pareshan ho chuka hain😆 and the list continues...


The jhootha scene was simply superb
show ki yaad aa gayi😭
par jhootha kahne se pyaar badhta hain na😳
Chalo kuch toh shuruaat hui😛
Grrr Prof Shetty ko bhi abhi hi aana tha😡

Avi tu baaz nahi aayegi na

Darr mat hum sab chun chun ke badla lenge😉😆


Superb update
start was really poignant but Maaneet magic😳
Song selection as always perfect!
Sorry net is on-n-off today

Thanks for updating
🤗
Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome story...Always been a slient reader of all ur writing including the feedback u give in other FFs...Always love and agree to ur wonderful insights...This FF is very unique..Though the parts are written in diff timeframes for each couple...the continuity is never lost.Ur flow of the story is like watching a dreamy tv show rather than reading an FF .A big applaud to ur awesome writing 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely update

geet helping kabir in taking care of his mother
maan avoiding geet for 2 days
but he wants to know her feeling before he leaves
so he is determined to talk to her about it
geet angry on maan
loved their convo geet giving adrak vali chai to maan 😳
waiting for next part
continue soon
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayye...mein mar jawa...
jab kuch baat kehana hota hai tho ankhon se sab kuch keh deti.hai...
aur khch nahi kehana hote tho itniii baat ... hayye ye to hamari geet hi kar sakti hai...
😃

maan geet part is very nice... 👏
maan silent se romantic lover benreha hai...😉😉 good going maan...👍🏼

aur vaise hi itni pyar se meetha check karke giit maan ko adrk vali chai dega tho vo tho roz bimar padega na... vaise ye bin mausam sardi vo cold shower ke vajse tho nahi...
area hamre nakul tho warn bhi kiya tha... maan babu hi self control ki chakar mein pad gaye the...😆😆

aur kabir kiske baare main soch reha hai... i know the angel is our geet... but the person's thought he just kept aside is not geet right😕😕... i think kabir is a positive chara... but when i read about his mother's story i don't know why i feel like it is related to brij... lets see what comes next...

what is in the next part... is it about dev tara or is it abut chandan...


lovely update...👏👏👏👏
waiting for next ...
update very very very soon...plllzzz



Edited by leksh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
WHAT A LOVELY SONG - AND SO APT
HAYE MERE DIL KA CHAIN TO KISI NE LE LIYA
MAAN KA HAAL TO BURA HAI - AB GEET KA BHI WAHI HAAL HAI
PAR EK DOOSRE SE KAHE KAISE

KABIR'S STORY WAS SAD - FROMS RICHES TO RAGS - IT IS DIFFICULT TO ADJUST

POOR MAITHLY
SHE HAD A RAW DEAL IN LIFE

BUT NOW THERE IS AN ANGEL IN THEIR LIFE AND HOPE SHE BRINGS HOPE TO THEM
BUT JUST PRAY THAT KABIT DOESNT RUIN HER RELATION WITH MAAN
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update ..the way you protary matilia character n transform kabir is so touchy n emotional , actually i felt matilia difficults
ooops maan achooo thankz to monsoon wah adrak wali chai woh mishty kae saath tu kaise aye dil ko chain ko maan babu
loved the maaneet moments precap uff bechare maan lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...the precap is making me curious...
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Posted: 12 years ago
we got another angle in maneet's lub story - kabir..

his father was pathetic..

i loved maneet part.. Adrak wali chai..


nice update Avi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
thanx fr d pm

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