The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED

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mayyo

@mayyo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: dqno1

Trying not to build expectations...
After that part we will be in the present... then wrap up..😊

By writing "surprise", you're definitely building up curiosity as well as expectations...
But wrap up so soon? Aisa lag raha hai abhi toh TL shuru hua tha!

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: mayyo13

By writing "surprise", you're definitely building up curiosity as well as expectations...
But wrap up so soon? Aisa lag raha hai abhi toh TL shuru hua tha!

Shuru toh 4 months pehle se hua tha! 😲 with about double the readers😕

Anyway not going to gripe about readership. At least the ones who are there are following each chapter...

This was an OS Mari... iss mein se Avi ke bak bak ne 34 chapters bana diye...😆😆

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#913

haiyye haiyye kya baat hai

this geet is so cute man

the things she says and does are just unbelievable

no wonder he gets his answers even without asking them

well that was so adorable

the way she made sure not to talk to him but still ended up talking to him

ahhh he is going away soon right

well i guess soon the story will come to the prologue

well cant wait for his misunderstanding to go

but before that more on maneet and dev tara

kabir and his story so sad right

his mother was beaten so brutally

and his father is so useless

so it seems that geet has been helping out with kabir mother

poor lad was in such bad state

well hope his mother doesnt try what she has done numerous times again

and whats with dabang that has to be dev tara for sure

cheers for pm

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#914

Originally posted by: chavvi16
haiyye haiyye kya baat hai
this geet is so cute man
the things she says and does are just unbelievable
no wonder he gets his answers even without asking them
well that was so adorable
the way she made sure not to talk to him but still ended up talking to him
ahhh he is going away soon right
well i guess soon the story will come to the prologue
well cant wait for his misunderstanding to go
but before that more on maneet and dev tara
kabir and his story so sad right
his mother was beaten so brutally
and his father is so useless
so it seems that geet has been helping out with kabir mother
poor lad was in such bad state
well hope his mother doesnt try what she has done numerous times again
and whats with dabang that has to be dev tara for sure
cheers for pm

Dabangg is for Maaneet... sorry will change it in a minute...😃

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#915

loved the update...the precap is making me curious...update soon...

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gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#916

loved the part dear

maaneet are so cute. geet dont want to talk to maan as he ignored her but is concerned for him and giving him adrak wali tea

felt bad for kabir and his mother . hope he is not falling for geet

interesting precap

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#917

awesome update dear
totally rocked it plus I loved it 😊
but i love the most last part, geet and maan it was outstanding
waiting 4 next part
thanx 4 d pm dear
update soon