The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 101

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum update! Loved it! Wonderfully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
maithili, a new entry...haa now i remeber kabir...btw i dint read the prev update where u mentioned about him...
i feel bad for maithili...at the same tym i am glad that her husband left her...pathetic human being😡
but there are such people in real life too...have heard from many...let God give them the strength to live..
and why do i feel that i know the person who is responsible for all these trouble they faced in life??

geet indeed is an Angel, but Maans angel😃
aww loved the way geet was cribbing about him to her babaji n suuper happy that he heard it...

hayeee n they are talking...geet talking sooo much to him...am enjoying it😃😃

And 😳 hayeee ❤️ that small part where they did lil tiny romance lovvvd it...professor ko bhi tabhi aana thaa😡 i was sooo enjoying the scene.,...and was i donno how to explain hw i was feeling...enjoyed it a looot...thanku for putting such a lovvvllyyy scene😊😊😊

lovveedd this update a looot Avi...found it very interesting...not telling it for making you feel good...dil se am telling...lovd it a looot... couldnt find 'bhakwas ' 😡 element in it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb Update 😃
Loved the Song 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Superb Update 😃
Loved the Song 😉

Thank you Sheen!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

maithili, a new entry...haa now i remeber kabir...btw i dint read the prev update where u mentioned about him...

i feel bad for maithili...at the same tym i am glad that her husband left her...pathetic human being😡
but there are such people in real life too...have heard from many...let God give them the strength to live..
and why do i feel that i know the person who is responsible for all these trouble they faced in life??

geet indeed is an Angel, but Maans angel😃
aww loved the way geet was cribbing about him to her babaji n suuper happy that he heard it...

hayeee n they are talking...geet talking sooo much to him...am enjoying it😃😃

And 😳 hayeee ❤️ that small part where they did lil tiny romance lovvvd it...professor ko bhi tabhi aana thaa😡 i was sooo enjoying the scene.,...and was i donno how to explain hw i was feeling...enjoyed it a looot...thanku for putting such a lovvvllyyy scene😊😊😊

lovveedd this update a looot Avi...found it very interesting...not telling it for making you feel good...dil se am telling...lovd it a looot... couldnt find 'bhakwas ' 😡 element in it...

Thanks Purvi. I am glad you liked it. I am not fond of my own writing so what can I say. Still learning how to do this properly so I get annoyed by it. You really liked their small scene.. I am glad. Trying to wrap this up sooner so let's see how many scenes can get added.
Thanks for the support dear.. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

SORRY FOR BEING A SILENT READER

LOVING YOUR FF
AND LOVED THE UPDATE SO MUCH😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
past updates two parts were so drastically different yet enjoyable... loved it ...

maithilys story was scary... but i am sure there are many such women in our world in real... her husband a complete male pig... but am happy that her son is with her, trying not only to stand on his feet but also trying to take care of his sick mother...

i am awe at ur characterisation of kabir... in his initial intro, he was like a bad boy, searching for wrongs in what he dont like... but here i respect this guy ... his change in attitude and hate for rich is only because of the hurdles he has faced and is facing in his life...

our geet is such a sweet heart ... sab ka dil jeet leti hai... even kabir is falling it seems... i hope kabir repays geet for her compassion by helping maaneet to unite rather than trying to make his own story over here... beware kabir, she is already taken...😡

maans decision to be bolder so that uski love story kuch tho aage bade london jaane se pehle... but maan, this avi na, she is having such a blast of time tadpaofying u including readers like me... so i really doubt that ...😉

maan is sneezinggg... but not a problem... his geet is ready with adrak ki chaai... maaneet dono ek saath... in a narrow pantry... dreamy... maan tum tho gaye... just change of dreams that s all... aaj raat ko "hum tum ek kamre main bandh ho" waala gaana sunna...

Baat nahi karti, toh itni saari baatein karti hai aur jab baat karti hai then she will stare at the floor👏 😆

loved the tea dialogues a lot...

precap: maine kahaa thana... avi wont spare maan easily... am so much loving it...
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Posted: 11 years ago


humm wait kar rahe hai hai😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks Purvi. I am glad you liked it. I am not fond of my own writing so what can I say. Still learning how to do this properly so I get annoyed by it. You really liked their small scene.. I am glad. Trying to wrap this up sooner so let's see how many scenes can get added.
Thanks for the support dear.. 🤗


you are expected to like your own writing...we are the one entitled to do that...dont get annoyed...this is your first ff, i suppose, and you are writing it brilliantly dear...
@bold: are you really goin to do that

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