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Posted: 12 years ago

#981

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya
wow...adrakwali chai and orange juice pros and cons...only geet can discuss such things in maan's presence !! loved the gair ka jhuta..scene...my most favourite scene in the show...don't know how many times have watched it...beautiful !! but that prof. had to come in that moment...will maan say whats in his mind...before he leaves...and loved the sentence...innocence is to cherish , preseve...hold dearly...!! which many fail to do and make hell of their partner's life like kabir's father...seen many who are behind the girl till marriage...once married torture her... kill her soul and innocence...
well...waiting for the precap...

Yes I like the gair part too. This way he has introduced his feelings between them. Meri jhalli ab kya samjhi hai, I don't know... abhi aur badd-badd karegi toh pata chalega...😆

There are a few more weeks and I want to show some more closeness before we get to the present. So yes he will be able to give her a hint.

The true worth of a person is when they let their partner flourish along with themselves not make them so submissive that they have no self worth left. Sumeet was the epitome of the worst esp when he raised his hand to his child so much.

Thanks for the support Kavya.

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#982

Originally posted by: sona-rai
awesome awesome awesome update Avi...muahhh

Thanks Sona...😃

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#983

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
now i remined kabir who is on the verge of spoling brat...but was trying to be good boy b'coss of geet...earlier i thought ke he will be caupd bet maaneet but seems he is 3rd corner of the triabgle...
feeling bad for maithli...is brij behind her r***...hate sumeet ...shrugged from his responsibilities taking care of his wife...

hush...maaneet ki story kuch to aage badhi...warna ye to door door se hi ishq farmate hai...geet to kitna baate karti hai...seems she too becoming confortable with maan around her

Kabir did not become good because of Geet. Uski ma ne thokkar khayi hai and he loves him mom so he is trying for her sake. He does appreciate the goodness of Geet.

There is a lot more Maaneet to come in the present. I wanted to show the innocence in first love, first. You are right she is becoming comfortable around Maan. That is why I introduced the "gair" wala part here.

Thanks Madhuri...😃

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#984

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
and loved geet's lecture on orange juice...poor maan...2 apple ke saath abhi orange juice bhi peena padega...

so his going to london is just few weeks away...

is this kabir is responsible for diff bet maaneet relation...as he was very diff person when he was coming back from london, that somthing happened bet them

do comment ho gaye...😊

Poori fruit bazaar hai meri Geet...😆

Kabir is not the reason for the difference, more to come...😃

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maanugeetu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#985

just completed reading from chapter 25 to 34.

loved all the update.

i am feeling so bad for Maithili. the woman has suffered so much and that good for nothing husband of her, o god how can he leave her like that, but i guess most males are like that.

can totally understand kabir's bitterness.

Pyaar karna paise walo ka shauq ho sakta hai. Not for him. Still the image lingered and he fell asleep covering his eyes avoiding it.

beautiful lines. it shows that there is still a boy inside him who wants to be normal for atleast once in his life.

note: i want to tell u di, i don't come to if regularly and thus miss all updates for a long time. whenever i get time i read all the chapters and then give a comment. so u won't find me commenting after every update. i would request u to remove me from ur pm list becoz i have bookmarked ur story so i don't need a pm. i know its a great trouble to send so many pms. and plz don't leave GF becoz u are getting less likes and comments, u can stay here as a reader too , right.

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optimism

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Posted: 12 years ago

#986

Hello :))
Finally on if n wat better than getting a maneet update :)))
Had typed a comment but it gt deleted :( typin thru phone is tidious job 😉
I remember abt kabir bt i didnt undrstand his relevance wid mannet... is there an angle to maneets lovestory ...i hope not 😉 bt its sad to knw abt his mother ...glad that bambi is always there for ppl help :)))
Comin to maneet :)) totally speechless... these ppl talk less n emo quotient is right there at the top ...
These ppl make me believe that gestures r far more efficient than words 😉
Bechara maan is down wid cold ;) how come...did geet make him stand in the rains 😆 he seems relieved by not havin dadi arnd 😉 😉 but where d dostana nakul 😛 shudnt he b takin care of his maan 😆
Loved geets blabbering...bt arent those too loud 😉 shes finally believin that telepathy doesnt wrk incase of maan ...
Shes resorted to louder rantings 😆
Maans become clever now...he knws his jhalli weakness for caring abt others n here he is takin advantage of that...
Btw evn i m thinkin wats wid geet n closed spaces... 😆 doesnt she undrstand delhi wale dont take the rite mwanung of closed spaces 😆 😉 i cn totally undrstand d rajdhani speed of their hearts beating in closed spaces :) wnt it go into failure 😉 ...
Maans is becoming bold n cheesy too 😊 😛 😛 jhuta n gair took me right to ghsp... hayee ...miss ghsp sooo much n maneet tooo 😳
Loved geets constant blabberin infrnt of maan n d sudden stammering with maans hidden confession :))
Wasnt maan supposed to ask geet whthr she will wait for him...majnu maan is always deviated frm his topic...
Kya karega bechara...geet ke saamne bolti band ho jati hai 😉

Waiting for next maneet n devtara update :))
Did i read it clearly 😉 dabaang khan in the next chapter 😳
Now my heart is beatin like a rajdhani...
Waiting waiting waiting for next update 😳
Heres something for inspiration ;) cannot post it as i m typin thru cell...but heres d link ;)
http://m.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=495923730495835&id=334873533267523&set=a.335663429855200.82239.334873533267523&refid=17

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honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#987

Originally posted by: dqno1

Purvi.. kal padhna... waise bhi bakwas hai...😃

😡 where is the dislike button????😡😡😡 IF peopleee...

aapse katti, Avi

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honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#988

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I totally disagree!! Kyun Purvi ko aise bol rahi ho?! I'll say, Purvi, bohat hi accha chapter hai but read it when you have time because you'll actually remain in the feel for some time after reading it. 😃

wow excited 😊 hopefully i l get tym to read it today atleast...

@Avi: katti hooon

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alfik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#989

such a heart warming update...just loved it...Kabir's story was heart breaking...I hope now that does not bring any twist in Maaneet's love story...

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#990

Originally posted by: optimism
Hello :))
Finally on if n wat better than getting a maneet update :)))
Had typed a comment but it gt deleted :( typin thru phone is tidious job 😉
I remember abt kabir bt i didnt undrstand his relevance wid mannet... is there an angle to maneets lovestory ...i hope not 😉 bt its sad to knw abt his mother ...glad that bambi is always there for ppl help :)))
Comin to maneet :)) totally speechless... these ppl talk less n emo quotient is right there at the top ...
These ppl make me believe that gestures r far more efficient than words 😉
Bechara maan is down wid cold ;) how come...did geet make him stand in the rains 😆 he seems relieved by not havin dadi arnd 😉 😉 but where d dostana nakul 😛 shudnt he b takin care of his maan 😆
Loved geets blabbering...bt arent those too loud 😉 shes finally believin that telepathy doesnt wrk incase of maan ...
Shes resorted to louder rantings 😆
Maans become clever now...he knws his jhalli weakness for caring abt others n here he is takin advantage of that...
Btw evn i m thinkin wats wid geet n closed spaces... 😆 doesnt she undrstand delhi wale dont take the rite mwanung of closed spaces 😆 😉 i cn totally undrstand d rajdhani speed of their hearts beating in closed spaces :) wnt it go into failure 😉 ...
Maans is becoming bold n cheesy too 😊 😛 😛 jhuta n gair took me right to ghsp... hayee ...miss ghsp sooo much n maneet tooo 😳
Loved geets constant blabberin infrnt of maan n d sudden stammering with maans hidden confession :))
Wasnt maan supposed to ask geet whthr she will wait for him...majnu maan is always deviated frm his topic...
Kya karega bechara...geet ke saamne bolti band ho jati hai 😉

Waiting for next maneet n devtara update :))
Did i read it clearly 😉 dabaang khan in the next chapter 😳
Now my heart is beatin like a rajdhani...
Waiting waiting waiting for next update 😳
Heres something for inspiration ;) cannot post it as i m typin thru cell...but heres d link ;)
http://m.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=495923730495835&id=334873533267523&set=a.335663429855200.82239.334873533267523&refid=17