The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1011

Originally posted by: maanland
SORRY FOR BEING A SILENT READER

LOVING YOUR FF

AND LOVED THE UPDATE SO MUCH😊

Thank you so much for commenting.

It means a lot to me to hear the readers opinion.

I am glad you are liking the story.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1012

Originally posted by: Jeevana.
😔

Kya hua?

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1013

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
past updates two parts were so drastically different yet enjoyable... loved it ...

maithilys story was scary... but i am sure there are many such women in our world in real... her husband a complete male pig... but am happy that her son is with her, trying not only to stand on his feet but also trying to take care of his sick mother...

i am awe at ur characterisation of kabir... in his initial intro, he was like a bad boy, searching for wrongs in what he dont like... but here i respect this guy ... his change in attitude and hate for rich is only because of the hurdles he has faced and is facing in his life...

our geet is such a sweet heart ... sab ka dil jeet leti hai... even kabir is falling it seems... i hope kabir repays geet for her compassion by helping maaneet to unite rather than trying to make his own story over here... beware kabir, she is already taken...😡

maans decision to be bolder so that uski love story kuch tho aage bade london jaane se pehle... but maan, this avi na, she is having such a blast of time tadpaofying u including readers like me... so i really doubt that ...😉

maan is sneezinggg... but not a problem... his geet is ready with adrak ki chaai... maaneet dono ek saath... in a narrow pantry... dreamy... maan tum tho gaye... just change of dreams that s all... aaj raat ko "hum tum ek kamre main bandh ho" waala gaana sunna...

Baat nahi karti, toh itni saari baatein karti hai aur jab baat karti hai then she will stare at the floor👏 😆

loved the tea dialogues a lot...

precap: maine kahaa thana... avi wont spare maan easily... am so much loving it...😆

Thanks Lakshmi😃

Abhi Hum tum ek kamre mein bandh hai ka time nahi hua...😆 Present main😉

Glad you are liking it so much...

Pics ka kya kahun...

Kurbaan on each and every one of them...

Loved it so much🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1014

Originally posted by: dqno1

Kya hua?

3 parts n not even a word from u

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1015

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

Coming soon..😃

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1016

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

3 parts n not even a word from u

Have been very sick my dear... Too dizzy and too down. I didn't even get to read the OS you were talking of nor have I been able to write. Let me pick up some strength ... will def comment one per part, OK? Aissi roothi faces mat bana, it does not suit you...😃 acchi lagti hai...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1017

Originally posted by: dqno1

Have been very sick my dear... Too dizzy and too down. I didn't even get to read the OS you were talking of nor have I been able to write. Let me pick up some strength ... will def comment one per part, OK? Aissi roothi faces mat bana, it does not suit you...😃 acchi lagti hai...

well complain karna mera haq hai 😉

tune mera tazfir kaha dekha hai...jo kethi hai ki woh suit nahi karega 😆