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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Eza_analyst

nice OS !!
painful too ..
I felt pang in my heart that boy was such a bas***d and believe me such type of SOB exists in this world, gal was fool, but yet again there is no love without trust, if u cant trust some one u can not love either,
That man deserves what he got, but that gal she left with undeserving loneliness and emptiness in her heart...
loved it, really close to reality and less fictional, please do write more ,...
will be waiting for more from you!!!





AWW LV U
THIS KIND OF BOYS DESERVE THAT ONLY HAINA
THX 4 UR CUTE COMMENT😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: monikaseth

You did your tooo best love it you deserve 👏



AWWW ME 😳😳 N😃😃
LV YA😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: simm_bains

tia this is really u

can't believe ...u write this superb story
this is amazing...i love it
congrats for this...u r awesome writer.


YES ITS ME ONLY😆
THX SWETS
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: seeratkhan

not only a story but a lesson...

Girls should never cross theirs limits before marriage even if the man is more than anything honest and truthful with them...
Its a sin and sooner or later u will get punished ,, ...
Loved it dear... 😉
after reading this im expecting more with u... 😃
👏
_____________________





YA THAT IS MY POINT ALSO
LV YA😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU

first of all i am not surprised that you have written an OS with a good concept after all you are creative head

The writing is absolutely clear and i loved it

do write something on maneet

As far as the concept is concrned i don't think we have different thoughts in this. A girl should never cross her LIMITS.

The world around us may change however modern it has become there are some tradition which are made for a reason and we ought to follow that.

Whatever the girl did in the story ( of course the second part ) is absolutely right. Keeping the baby would have spoiled two people's life. Though killing it is a sin she deserves to live with the guilt for crossing her limits but the baby doesn't deserve to live with a pathetic life in our society because its mom crossed LIMITS

finally ... DO WRITE MORE





THIS WORLD WILL NEVER CHANGE 🤢

NO FAULT OF BABY BUT HE DONT DESERVE A LIFE OF HELL ALSO HAINA
LV YA
ME GLAD U LIKED IT LV YA
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: MonaLovesMaan

awww my cutie tia with an os😲 it was reaaly surprise for me..title hi kuch aisa tha pm ka😆

mein soch rahi thi kya limits hai??😆 wo toh os nikla..hmm damki ??but i loved it it's as cute as u my cutie pie🤗
coming to os it was just fab 👏 Iam in love with the concept..
that gadha decieved an innocent girl who loves him immensly unconditionally but that bas***d used her innocence🤬
accha kiya usne impotent idiot ko sabke saamne uski jagah dikhadi 👏
he proved that he is impotent in every sense..he is impotent that he cant hold pure love,he couldnt respect her feelings,het heart😡
kudoos to that bravegirl she gave him tit for tat👏
thanku so much for this wonderful os
and ha i know that tia can never write anything like this for OUR MAANU HAI NA😉😆
keep writing sweets
love u muaahss🤗




AWW LV YA
LV UR CUTE COMMENT
N YA Y GIRL ALWAYS TOLERATE
THIS KIND OF BOYS DESERVE THAT NLY😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: sanam1234u

awesome OS...
that boy deserve what girl did to him...

and ur absolutely right girls should know there limits...becoz not every boy is MAAN...
in our socity mostly like men r like this type of boy...so its upto girlls ke they should be smart enough to understand others intention...




MAANU TOH MAANU HAI N WO EK HAI😆
THX 4 UR LOVELY COMMENT

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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: IshitaIrani

it was fablous,fantastic,mind blowing

loved it
pls add me in your pm list and pm me if u update your other works


THX SWEETS 😆
WILL SURE
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: tiakashyap




WO TOH MY NET DITCHED ME ISLIYE JANA PDA
N DEV CHI CHI BABAJI USSE PEHLE I WOULD LV TO DEI
AWW GUSA CHOD DE
U R MY SWETY CUTIE DEVIL ANGEL NA

ek shard pe me want ss written by my dreamy😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

ek shard pe me want ss written by my dreamy😳



WHAT WHAT WHAT😲😲😲
HEY BABAJI
OYE YE TOH AIWE HI KAR DIYA
AB JAAN LEGI KYA


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