LIMITS OS:) - Page 4

Originally posted by: neha5058

Loved this OS dear...
it's just fab... happy that u didn't use maaneet here...
the story of a girl n boy where he tried to trap her even he got succeed, , a trap which she is thinking as a love but ditched by him brutally... i really appreciate that u didn't let down the girl...
No girl is Geet...
No girl get Maan...
u'll get shocked but i really want in ghsp that geet abort that child, means how can someone carry the child who doesn't want to take the responsibility...
happy that she took revenge in front of the whole world...
it is really a master piece indeed...
i never read any kind of story here...
a big clap for u...
and pls try some more...love to read more from u...

Originally posted by: yappingduck

received ur PM... u deserve the comments..it was good OS.. hope to read more such stuff from u in future

Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

😡😡😡 Hello I was with Maanu I knew something was wrong when you said enjoy with Maanu but I thought in a whole diff direction😆Huh and I told yah to tell me tuh toh vanish hogi with your new found love😛😆Agar Dev inta acha laghne lagha hai toh theek hai nah. But iska matlab nahi hai ke you forget your DA😡😆😛

Originally posted by: Temporary99

Yippi...me first in Tia's OS!!!!!!!!!!!


Ahem Ahem Ahem.

...I didn't know our cute Tia can be so matured to write this type of serious OS.
Btw Hiii tia😃..howr u sweety

Ok coming to the Update...Yeah me too realized it long back its not about Maaneet...cause i know how our Tia iscan never do this to Her Maanu 🤣

The Girl was so naive...totally trusted that jerk...but he ditched her.son of 🤬.But it was good for her...at least she didn't marry that guy😆


But just loved the palti yaar...I loved her 180 degree turn...thats the spirit girl!(not u...that gurl😆)


she appeared to be confident and so tough and cool!thats the spirit!


u didn't put any POV...just dialogues and still it was awesomely enough for us to get to know whats going on here...bravo


and FYI...I loved that Dhamki...🤣was sooo cute😆

Originally posted by: sdlife19

Tia sweety is it u really

i mean i cant just imagine u wrote such a OS... tat was full of betrayal and the confident tat the girl got back

some people mourn when they do mistakes in love and some stand for it and i salute this girl for taking the right decision though she had to sacrifice tat poor soul who was at not wrong but he will be at some peacefully loving place

Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan

Hey loved the OS dear it gives the reality of society when man is called as impotent then everyone try to hid that mistake but when girl is impotent then the news spread like fire..& moreover loved how the girl answered him after her sufferance...still his ego dint permit him to bow in front of her & loved the slap...dint i tell u u will be very good writer...its a very alerting OS where men always think women as tissue paper...after their use thrown into dustbin..😡

Originally posted by: valli22

that was truely awesome

im expecting more from you

many girls lose themselves to such man

then regret after she is betrayed..

but god gave her chance to take her revenge

her statement would have made all girls n families think him impotent

thats a gud lesson..

1 more i want 2 say..

c ur pm..

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

awesome os loved it!

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Nice..
the girl took great revenge🤣
Good that boy deserve that only😡
Liked it😊