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Posted: 12 years ago
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A girl was sitting in the corridor of hospital, waiting for her no. to come thinking about the events happened in her life. the events which landed her here.

today she has taken the biggest decision of her life.
past

Girl - aww i love you i love you i love you so so much!!
Boy - i love you too baby.
Girls - i cant believe we will get marry soon. god i cant wait for the day to come.
today u proposed me, but when u will came to my house to talk with my parents??

Boy - soon baby.
Girl - i' m so happy jaan come soon.
Boy - ya jaan your happiness is my happiness
Girl - yes i know
and she hugged him with all her love.

Present

she came out of her thoughts with the call of receptionist
R - mam your turn.
girl nodded and went in the cabin.
Doctor - so you decided. are u sure you really want this??
Girl- i was never sure before but now, yes i want this.she said confidently
Doctor - okay.
she called the nurse and told her to make her ready.
while getting ready she thought about the time which landed her into all this.

Past

Girl - wow ! its so beautiful.
whose cottage is this??

Boy - well its mine and now yours too. whatever is mine is yours.
Girl - aww i love you.
but why you bring me here now you can surprise me after our marriage also na and then ... she left her words midway looking at him naughtily.
Boy - yes i could, but i want to spent some beautiful moments with my love so i brought you here. and here no one will disturb us he said huskily into her ears.
she shivered but compose herself soon and asked

Girl - but we will get many moments together after marriage also no toh ab kyu.
Boy - what you mean?? i should not touch you before marriage?? only that much trust you have on me. i never thought you thought all this about me.. lets go back..
and he ran toward the car
before he could sit in the car she stopped him
Girl - wait i did not mean that i was just umm i am sorry i have full trust on you..
i will not stop you

Boy- are you sure??
Girl - hmmm i love you and she hugged him
Boy - you don't know how much happiness you gave me today
and he carried her toward the bedroom ...

Present

she hissed with the little pain of the injection
Doctor - it will give you a little pain
Girl - the pain i am going through is much more than this.
but not anymore. now i am not going to mourn over something who don't deserve that

she closed her eyes due to the sedatives given to her

Past

it was one month over that day
n from last three week she was not getting any calls from his
she was really very scared
she decided to go to his house to check if he is fine or not
when she went to his home
she was shocked to see him getting married to some other girl
her heart filled up with pain, hurt. she felt betrayed
after marriage went over she went to him and seeing her he got shocked, and dragged her to a lonely corner
Boy- what are you doing here
girl hugged him n asked
Girl - its not true haina?? its all a lie u cant marry with some one else you love me you are mine you love only me and sobbed badly.
he pushed her out roughly
Boy - what the hell are you doing her can you see today is my marriage
Girl - marriage.. but you promised to marry me
Boy - oh please when did i said so. it was you who assumed everything right. you said you want to marry.. did you remember any single day when i had told u this
Girl - but you love me totally shocked with the happening
Boy- oh please everyday i said i love you to so many girls,, but it does not mean i will marry them
Girl - than what was that in the cottage
i gave you my everything without even saying anything. i trusted you so much with my self than what was that tell me. she shook him gripping his collar
he again pushed her
Boy - it was mutual. i did not force you did i?? and as i remember you also enjoyed that day. so now why are you creating fuss about it
Girl - i trusted you
Boy - so what. that is your problem. if__
she cut him between
Girl - i am pregnant
Boy - what?? oh god now dont tell me its mine.
Girl - yes of course its yours. how could you say something like this about your baby. its the result of that night
Boy-oh please its was month before and after that i did not see you for three damn weeks, how could you say this is mine and may be if you can sleep with me before marriage crossing your all LIMITS than you can sleep with someone else also, and now blaming me. what a bull shit, you and
before he could say more she slapped him
Girl - today i am ashamed on my self that i loved a person like you and gave my self to a baste***
he held her tight by hairs n slapped her also
Boy - how dare you slap me you bit**. i did not come to you. you came running behind me and now blaming me. now get lost from here before i throw you out. and whatever you are saying no one gonna believe you so don't try either get lost
he pushed her hard on the floor and went away

Present

she got up and a tear escaped from her eye
it took her one month to came back in her senses after that betrayal, and then she took that decision
after taking the medicines she left the hospital and set on a bench in a park lost in her thoughts.
Girl - (st)today i have no regrets about what i did, why should i keep a child of a cheater. but it was good for baby also. would i ever able to give him a respectful life. today or tomorrow sab ko pta chal jata he has no father and than his life would be a mess. kya jawab deti when he would asked me who is his father. chahe usko kitna bhi pyaar deti but wo kasak hamesha rehti, how can i let my baby to hear the harsh words of society, and its also true ki ek din sach bahar aa hi jata and moreover how i can let my parents down. they love me so much till now they have fulfilled every wish of mine and what i did i broke their trust, i betrayed them now i realized why this happened to me i broke their trust and my love mine. i betrayed my parents and he me. its life jaisa kroge waisa paoge but not anymore now i will make my parents proud. i will do everything they want me to do. ye daag jo mujpe laga hai i cant remove it but i will do every possible thing to make them proud and happy. aaj ek baat samaj aa gyi never cross your LIMITS. chahe kuj bhi ho jaye.
she was about to go suddenly someone hugged her. she was shocked to see him
boy - thanx god i found you. i was searching for you. look i want you back in my life. come lets go we will marry today. everyone in my house is waiting for us.
Girl - what are you saying??? why should i go with you. i will not.
Boy - listen i know i should not do this with you,and i have got my punishment for this. my wife left me saying i am IMPOTENT. and i know you are pregnant with my baby and now i want to give him my name . please come with me. i promise i will never cheat you again. please
after thinking for some time she agreed and went with him
in his house many people and media ( cause he is a son of famous business man )
were there.
Boy - hello everybody i told you i am not IMPOTENT. and here is the proof. she is my girlfriend and is pregnant with my baby. i know we crossed our LIMITS before marriage but whatever happened, happen for good. she is pregnant and now i am going to marry her and
she cut him in between
Girl - excuse me when i said i am ready to merry you and who said i am pregnant
everyone gasped. there was pin drop silent in the house. everyone were gaping at them
Boy - what the hell are you speaking. i know you are
Girl - oh really but how can i be pregnant with a man who is IMPOTENT.
Boy - just shut up i know you are
Girl - come on now its too much
she turned to face the all people and media and said
Girl - i want to clear something. He is she pointed towards the boy sorry was my boyfriend and today he come begging to me to help him but its going too far i guess.i mean how can i say that he is not IMPOTENT
Reporter - mam how you know that he is IMPOTENT
Reporter - did you were involved with him physically.
Girl - of course not. how can i when its clear he is impotent actually once i heard his talk to someone and he was saying his THIS problem. so that day i broke up with him he begged me not to but how can i spent my whole life with a person like him?? and today he came to ask me some help i thought koi choti baat hogi so i agreed but its too much how can i say all that and moreover marry him. na baba na i cant spoil my life. she said shockingly n innocently
she looked at him and said i really pity on his wife but happy she found some one after all sach kbi toh bahar aa jata hai na haina she smiled at him sarcastically
Boy - youuu, how dare you. i know why you are saying all this and what you think i cant get any girl i am rich and i can get any girl at the snap of my fingers
she turned to media and other people again and said
well when you all know his disability i dont think anybody will like to give their daughters' hand to him. may be only if you want your daughter to run away with her boyfriend, you can give her hand into his haina. now i think i should leave
mera kam khatam hua she said last lines looking at him
after taking some steps forward she came back to him again. she smiled at him and BANG she slapped him hard and said you are a bloo** impotent you bas****. you deserve only this.
and she left smiling to herself n satisfied in the hope of new life and new dreams.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

EVERY GIRL IS NOT GEET
AND EVERY GIRL DID NOT GET MAAN (courtesy umm i dont know. i read it somewhere but cant remember)

THE BOY GIRL ARE NOT MAANEET
I WILL NEVER EVER WRITE ANY OS IN WHICH MY MAANEET ARE NOT TOGETHER
THEY ARE MY OBSESSION.



phew it was my first OS nervous umm naa 😉
actually quite excited😆
for a girl her dignity is very precious to her she should never compromise with it


P.S. ITS TRULY PURELY MY CONCEPT MY IMAGINATION.
NO OFFENSE, IF ANY SCENE MATCHES ITS PURELY COINCIDENCE. SPARE ME FROM ANY BASHING

I AM A PEACE LOVER
😆



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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Yippi...me first in Tia's OS!!!!!!!!!!!Witch


Ahem Ahem AhemFlirting.

...I didn't know our cute Tia can be so matured to write this type of serious OS.
Btw Hiii tia😃..howr u sweety

Ok coming to the Update...Yeah me too realized it long back its not about Maaneet...cause i know how our Tia isGirl In Lovecan never do this to Her Maanu 🤣

The Girl was so naiveBug Man...totally trusted that jerkBlah...but he ditched her.son of 🤬.But it was good for her...at least she didn't marry that guyStinky Fish😆


But just loved the palti yaar...I loved her 180 degree turn...thats the spirit girl!(not u...that gurl
😆)


she appeared to be confident and so tough and coolClap Hands!thats the spirit!


u didn't put any POV...just dialogues and still it was awesomely enough for us to get to know whats going on here...bravo Football


and FYI...I loved that Dhamki...🤣was sooo cute😆
Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey loved the OS dear it gives the reality of society when man is called as impotent then everyone try to hid that mistake but when girl is impotent then the news spread like fire..& moreover loved how the girl answered him after her sufferance...still his ego dint permit him to bow in front of her & loved the slap...dint i tell u u will be very good writer...its a very alerting OS where men always think women as tissue paper...after their use thrown into dustbin..😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tia sweety is it u really

i mean i cant just imagine u wrote such a OS... tat was full of betrayal and the confident tat the girl got back

some people mourn when they do mistakes in love and some stand for it and i salute this girl for taking the right decision though she had to sacrifice tat poor soul who was at not wrong but he will be at some peacefully loving place
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tia that was speechless.. Maza aa gaya yar... Brilliant lines concept dialogues acha kiya ladki ne..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
that was truely awesome
im expecting more from you
many girls lose themselves to such man
then regret after she is betrayed..
but god gave her chance to take her revenge
her statement would have made all girls n families think him impotent
thats a gud lesson..

1 more i want 2 say..
c ur pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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R



I am in shock to see ur os , congratulation for os dear
Or haa comment raat mai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice..
the girl took great revenge🤣
Good that boy deserve that only😡
Liked it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Superb Os. Thank god maaneet nhi the.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
truly awesome OS...
i had kind of seen this somewhere...
good that the girl did not give up..
the guy deserved more then this!!!

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