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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
IT WAS A GOOD STORY AND ALL GIRLS SHOULD READ IT
IT WILL TEACH THEM NOT TO CROSS TEIR LIMITS AND NOT GIVE IN TO THE EMOTIONAL BLACKMAIL OF THE GUYS
AND THE LESSON SHE TAUGHT HIM AND THE HUMILIATION HE HAS TO FACE SHOWED HER COURAGE AND NEVER DIE ATTITUDE
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
omg... is it really u TIA????
my god... u wrote an OS...just wow... never expected... finally u also became a writer...
love ya...
will read it surely and then will comment here...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Really a good os
All reader are mature here so they understand that fiction is only fiction not reality at any cost maan geet all are just a fiction cs and to think that u also get maan only that is a bigest joke ... girls should understand if someone love them truly he will never cross his limit before marriage as he is also concern for you ... or else I have to think what is good for me and what is not
Fiction story held many scene which are rare or impossible like in movie we saw in song squence that lead change dress god knows how many time ... is this acceptable in real life no a big no ... so same with cs ... we potrayed cs with so many emotion so its not possible to find them in reality too...


Uff my bigest comment hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is wonderful...

yes u r right not everyone are Maan and Geet...most of the boys are like this boy of ur OS...who plays with girl's life...

she took her revenge at last...he deserve this...I also think that it is more important for a girl to not fall in emotional trap of boyfriend...if he loves truly then he will oblige to her feelings and choice...he will not emotionally blackmail to have physical relations before marriage...

girls should be extra careful because nothing happen to boy it is the girl who become pregnant...who loose her virginity...no test can prove men virginity...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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so they crossed the limits but the boy never wanted to marry her
and then when he was told by his wife that he is impotent then he remembered his girlfriend
but too late by then
what goes around comes around
what an os though
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
what a scary banner dreamt draneh ka irada hai kya😆
ek min you wrote😲and didn't tell me😡😭 Kahtti I won't talk to you me only commenting cause you maan ki Tia, huh and me scared from your maanu😆
please don't tell me the girl will get a aboration cause me getting such a feel😭
why am I not trusting the guy😕
😭that I can't curse but want to badly how could he😡😭poor girl😭😭
😆he deserved that 😆this is called karma
hayee my dreamy writes I knew it I Always told you, you finally listened to me😃and wrote just didn't told me😭me still on katti mode
eh loh not a maneet story woh bhi sahi hai maan aisi nahi kar sahktha😳
if I was talking to you I would tell you warning ke zaroot nahi hai me comment happly happyly😳
pff one of my longest comments ever, just for you😳
and would tell you wise message you gave😃me proud of my dreamy
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
tia this is really u
can't believe ...u write this superb story
this is amazing...i love it
congrats for this...u r awesome writer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

what a scary banner dreamt draneh ka irada hai kya😆

ek min you wrote😲and didn't tell me😡😭 Kahtti I won't talk to you me only commenting cause you maan ki Tia, huh and me scared from your maanu😆
please don't tell me the girl will get a aboration cause me getting such a feel😭
why am I not trusting the guy😕
😭that I can't curse but want to badly how could he😡😭poor girl😭😭
😆he deserved that 😆this is called karma
hayee my dreamy writes I knew it I Always told you, you finally listened to me😃and wrote just didn't told me😭me still on katti mode
eh loh not a maneet story woh bhi sahi hai maan aisi nahi kar sahktha😳
if I was talking to you I would tell you warning ke zaroot nahi hai me comment happly happyly😳
pff one of my longest comments ever, just for you😳
and would tell you wise message you gave😃me proud of my dreamy





i share this with you firs
i gave u hint
but tumne dimaag nhi lagaya
tbi im saying DEV pe thoda kam dhyan dde🤣🤣


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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
hey tia its really awesome dear, loved it to the core. good decision and her treatment to that man was apt. he just played with her feeling emotionally. come up with more stories buddy. thanks for the pm and congrats on your first story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
nice OS !!
painful too ..
I felt pang in my heart that boy was such a bas***d and believe me such type of SOB exists in this world, gal was fool, but yet again there is no love without trust, if u cant trust some one u can not love either,
That man deserves what he got, but that gal she left with undeserving loneliness and emptiness in her heart...
loved it, really close to reality and less fictional, please do write more ,...
will be waiting for more from you!!!

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