LIMITS OS:) - Page 3

i see u closer to me in case of maan and geet yaar and i appreciate that u did not use them here which even i would never appreciate anyway i so much loved the thought its just ossum!!

the girl took revenge i loved it so much

Originally posted by: dreamyharika

i see u closer to me in case of maan and geet yaar and i appreciate that u did not use them here which even i would never appreciate anyway i so much loved the thought its just ossum!!

the girl took revenge i loved it so much

i would love to die rather choosing maaneet for such thing
told ya
they r my obsession

Loved this OS dear...
it's just fab... happy that u didn't use maaneet here...
the story of a girl n boy where he tried to trap her even he got succeed, , a trap which she is thinking as a love but ditched by him brutally... i really appreciate that u didn't let down the girl...
No girl is Geet...
No girl get Maan...
u'll get shocked but i really want in ghsp that geet abort that child, means how can someone carry the child who doesn't want to take the responsibility...
happy that she took revenge in front of the whole world...
it is really a master piece indeed...
i never read any kind of story here...
a big clap for u...
and pls try some more...love to read more from u...

oye u ol...
me thinking to post drown in love but this damn net... irritating me...
and one more...
stranger or??

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

i share this with you firs

i gave u hint
but tumne dimaag nhi lagaya
tbi im saying DEV pe thoda kam dhyan dde🤣🤣

received ur PM... u deserve the comments..it was good OS.. hope to read more such stuff from u in future

first of all i am not surprised that you have written an OS with a good concept after all you are creative head

The writing is absolutely clear and i loved it

do write something on maneet

As far as the concept is concrned i don't think we have different thoughts in this. A girl should never cross her LIMITS.

The world around us may change however modern it has become there are some tradition which are made for a reason and we ought to follow that.

Whatever the girl did in the story ( of course the second part ) is absolutely right. Keeping the baby would have spoiled two people's life. Though killing it is a sin she deserves to live with the guilt for crossing her limits but the baby doesn't deserve to live with a pathetic life in our society because its mom crossed LIMITS

finally ... DO WRITE MORE

awww my cutie tia with an os😲 it was reaaly surprise for me..title hi kuch aisa tha pm ka😆