MG-OneShot ~Tumse.. Aae Humsafar..~ Updated.. on pg-60/ Jan2. - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Loved the update

Poor maan geet se Milana chata hai aur geet toh unse nazarie bhi nahi mila pa rahi hai
Ye hi hamara culture hai maan geet ka pov bhi samj ne ki koshish karta hai. Compromise karta hai aur geet ko dekh kar satisfied bhi hai
Hope maaneet thodi der to mil payenge I feel bad for maan...bechra...!!!!
Itne wait ke baad itna chota update!!!!!!
Waiting for long long long update very soon

thats what happens right?
Sab daamadji ki khatir dari me itne busy rahte hai ke..they dont even realise that may be he would want to meet that special person..like akele me..;)
but badon ko kaun samjhaye..aur bichara daamad bhi kya bol sakata hai..:-P
i know it was short bt next is coming soon..and i am sure u will be happy reading it..;-)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

very beautiful part..
Simplicity is the beauty of their relationship..

maan is going to mumbai
but no tension they will be in touch with their phone calls😉

Hayyyeee shy geet😳
poor maan😆

Loving this so much...

Itna chotu update😒
will be waiting for long update...
continue soon!!!


maan isnt going anywhere nw.. Actually he had went to mumbai which is geets hometown..bt couldnt meet her properly!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shonameet


maan isnt going anywhere nw.. Actually he had went to mumbai which is geets hometown..bt couldnt meet her properly!

ohhh...
Got it...😃👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#0000cc">hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! ahh Geet all shy! Maan wnated to spend tym wid her bt cld nt nw! She understands her! update soon! Well written </font>

may be next time..they will be able to spent some quality time..;-)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

ohhh...
Got it...😃👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
maan is in love with her innocence and simplicity
so how can she talk in front of the elders
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Posted: 11 years ago
@page 41
awesome...
lovely dear...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

<font color="#ff00ff">maan is in love with her innocence and simplicity</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">so how can she talk in front of the elders</font>

its other way around.. she is simple n shy that why maan loves her..😉
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Continue here:


When it was time for him to leave..finally he got a few minutes with her..all thanks to his sweet saali saheba..she seems to be the only one who understood these two restless hearts and their longing!
He was taking elders blessing and saying good bye to them.. when naina came rushing outside..dragging geet with her. Both the girls stood at a little distance from elders..and naina called him casually. He talked with naina for sometime..while stealing glances at geet...who just stood there silently listening to them. She still wasnt meeting his gaze. And the way she was biting her lips..clearly showed her nervousness. He kept looking at her.. every time hoping that atleast now she would look at him...but she didnt!

Atlast, he told naina that he should be get going as his flight time is getting near..then only madam took pain of moving her lashes and looked up at him..meeting his gaze for the first time in that whole evening.

All while he had been carving to look in those eyes..and when he finally did.. His heart skiped a beat seeing so many emotions in those brown hazels. He could clearly read it in her eyes that she too had wanted/expected to spent sometime with him.. But she was helpless..and her eyes were saying "sorry" to him for the same. At that moment.. He wished he could stay for some more time..as her eyes were pleading to him..but it wasnt possible as he had a flight to catch.
After a handshake with naina & saying bye to her.. He forwarded his hand to geet. She slowly placed her hand in his. They just kept looking at eachother..while their eyes did all the talking.. silently! All the things they wanted/wished to tell eachother..were being conveyed through those silent eye talks.
He held her hand for a little longger..then pressed it lightly..before releasing it finally!

*****

after that, when they had their regular phone chat.. She had tried to apologies to him..that she couldnt even talked to him.. But he stoped her saying..that he also wouldnt have been comfertable to talk with her infront of all elders..so it was ok!

But then he used to tease her saying..that he wont come to mumbai again..as it was of no use coz she wont be even looking at him..forget talking!

*****
And now, she is coming to his house!!!
Actually its his parents wedding anniversary... And the innogration of their new business venture..which will be handelled by him mainly. So there was a quite big celebration to be done.
There relatives & close one's will be coming. So his inlaws were also invited. As they are also part of their family now and more over it will be a special day for their son inlaw.
And obiviously he was the most excited soul..hearing the news of them coming. He was happy that he will finally get to spent sometime with her..as they were supposed to stay atleast for two days!
Edited by Shonameet - 11 years ago

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