MG-OneShot ~Tumse.. Aae Humsafar..~ Updated.. on pg-60/ Jan2. - Page 23

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#cc00ff">hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Loved it! Maan understands her! He is so happy dat she will b der 4 two days! well written! update soon</font>

ya..he is excited..lets see kya hota hai..😉
frm nxt update the actual plot/theme of the story will start.

Nice updated

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Nice updated

Wow!! Eye lock...!!!!! Awesome...!!!!

Maan ne to handshake bhi kar liya...

Maan teasing geet

Ab to geet ki bari hai maan ke paas Jane ki...

Kya maan ye moke ka faida uthyega?? Uthana chahiye hai na...???

Eagerly waiting for next

ab maan mauke ka fayda uthayga ya nahi ye pata nahi..
But itna surity hai ke these two days will bring them closer..:)

Originally posted by: Shonameet

2 days together..?
Hmmm..
Lets see..😉

oyyee don't add twists here...
atleast yeh do din toh saath rehne do😉

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

oyyee don't add twists here...
atleast yeh do din toh saath rehne do😉

😆 sochna padega..😉

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awesome dear...
cont soon...

Khush nasibi hai ye meri..
Maine tumko paa liya..
Dil ko ye bhi naz hai ke..
Tumne bhi apnaa liya...

Tum mile toh zindagi ka..
Paa liya her pal khushi ka..
Shukriya kaise karun...??
Bas tumhe.. Chaaha karun..!!!

Continued here:

He was really excited that she would be coming to his house.. No.. no..not only his..but their house..to be more precise "her house"...he smiled at the thought!
she is coming here for the first time..and his happiness was visible through that slight smile which was constantly playing on his lips. When realised that he had been smiling to himself all the while.. he almost immediatly tried to hide it.. But his bad luck..his devil siblings had already caught that smile and were smirking at him..eyeing him naughtily.
He glared at them..to shut them up. And left the place immediatly..knowing if he stayed any longer..they wont leave him..and would keep teasing him.
***
all the day he was lost in her thoughts...thinking about the time when she would be here with him. True, he was excited, but at the same time he was a little nervous too. Finally they will get some time with eachother.
He came back from office and heard his parents talking..that his inlaw's wont be coming for two days. Actually his father inlaw has some important business meetings to attend.. So they wont be able to come before.. But they said that they would be coming on the main day, when the function was held.

He instantly felt disappointed..and restless..that she isnt coming before. He really wanted her to come..and has been making various plans as to how they would be spending these two days together.
And now he felt really angery at her..and at himself too. But then what she or he can do in this?

He was about to move towards the stair to go to his room..as he wasnt in a mood to talk with anyone.. When he heard his mom telling his dad, "but maine bhai sahab se keh diya..ke wo function wale din aayenge thik hai..lekin atleast bachhon ko toh pehle bhej de.. Aur fir mujhe apni bahu ko sabse milwana bhi toh hai na..and unhone han kaha hai..geet aur naina parso aa rahe hai.."
That was it! His gloomy face brightened instantly. "She is coming".. Yes..yes..yes!!! His heart jumped in joy. He wanted to hug his mom tightly for fulfilling his wish..but controlled..as everyone was present there..and he didnt wanted them to tease him again.
*****
These two days wait felt so long. He wanted time to pass by quickly so that she would be here soon. But then thinking about the moment..when she will be actually there...in their house.. with him.. His heart was getting more restless/nervouss...didnt know why?
Thank god that he had so much office work..and arrangements to look after ..which helped him to distract his mind a little.
*****
And now here he was...waiting for her at the airport..with annie beside him..who was continuesly teasing him. He was getting so irritated..but didnt said anything to her..coz he knew that..if he said anything..it will only encourage her to tease him even more.

He was nervouss, impetient, excited and what not.. His heart was beating so fast with each passing moment.
And then they heard the announbement of the arrival of mumbai's flight! His heart beat rose to different level. He closed his eyes to clam his heart &himself. Then started searching for her in the crowd.
And finally he saw her and just kept looking at her...dressed in white anarkali...looking ever so beautiful..
She too was looking for them..and before he could call her..she spoted him..and there eyes met!
The world stoped for them..and they were lost in eachother!

Iss kadar pyaar hai..
Tumse...
Aae humsafar...

nice update

Very nice update..
maan restless...
Maan's sibilings teasing him😆
Finally geet arrived😉
U r awesome yr...
will be waiting for next part ..
continue soon!!!